Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! (Page 32)

-Anika- Senior Member

Joined: 28 September 2011
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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 10:14am | IP Logged
Hello Lovely People
Thank you for comments and likes.. Really motivating!!
To my silent readers I hope you are liking it too Smile

The sentences between the brackets represents character's thoughts...

Part 16:

Manvi and Virat are still running and Viren chasing them... They run inside Virat's room and Shut it... Viren bangs on the door..
Viren: Tu ruk... Come out and I'll show you...
Manvi and Virat are out of breath and are laughing...
Virat: show what bhai... We are not so disgusting..Go back to Bhabhi.. She must be waiting for you..
Manvi and Virat Hi5...
Viren: Don't advise me what to do...
Someone nudges him...
He turns around and sees Shlok...
Shlok: Viren Bhai aap kya kar rahe hai? * confused*
Viren: Mein... Kuch Nahi... * rubbing his hair*
Shlok: aap Darwaze se Baat Kar rahe hai?...* confused*
Manvi and Virat hear this and start laughing again...
Viren: Shlokuuu... Woh mein... Tujhe kya... Mein kisse bhi Baat karu.. Tu apna homework Kar...
Shlok just nodes
Shlok: Adults these days... Viren bhaiya?
Viren: Kya hai Mere Baap...
Shlok: Jeevika Bhabhi kaha hai mujhe Help achaiye..
Viren: Room mein...
Shlok: thank you bhaiya
Shlok starts to walk towards Viren's
Room and suddenly Viren regrets what he said... He runs and gets hold of Shlok..
Virat and manvi open the door and peek from it...
Viren: Shlokkuuu putaaar.. Mein... Il
Help you...
Shlok: Bhaiya aap teacher Nahi.. Lawyer hai..
Viren: So what if I am lawyer.. I have common sense to help you..
Virat: Really Bhai..
Viren Turns around..
Viren: Tuuu.. Ruk Ja...
Virat: Bhai Bhai Bhai.. Not here and not in front of * eyes shlok*
Viren: Shlokuuu... Virat bhaiya will help you... okay?
Shlok: Okay!
Virat: What help?
Shlok: Actually I need help in my homework...
Virat: Nahi Nahi I can't help.. Ask Bhai or Jeevika Bhabhi...
Shlok: Okay!
Viren: What Okay... Shlokuuu go in Virat bhaiyas room and ask Maanvi Didi for help...
Shlok: Yes... Maanvi Didi teaches really well and she doesn't scold me too.. * smiles and walks towards Virat's room*
Virat: Bhaaaiii.. Whyyy? This encyclopaedia... Ugggh.. Kis Janam ka badla le Rahe ho..?
Viren: Meri Bhai... Stop being so filmy and have fun... * winks*
Saying this he runs towards his room...
Virat still standing there rubbing his head...
Virat: Great!!!

Viren enters their room and finds Jeevika doingpranayam yoga...
Viren just smiles and goes and sits on her left side...
Jeevika has her eyes shut and is concentrating on her breathing.. She is aware that Viren is in the room...
Viren is just looking at her... Her deep breathing and the smile on her face...
Jeevika opens her eyes and sees his face and gets scared...
Jeevika: VirenJi...
Viren: Haaiyee... I can sit here and stare at you...
Saying this he places his head on her crossed legs...
Jeevika just plays with his hair...
Viren closes his eyes...
Jeevika: Viren Ji..
Viren: Hmm...
Jeevika: Viren Ji I'm so eager to become a mum now...
Viren just opens his eyes...
Jeevika: Mummaa... Mummaa... The child.. Our child will call me with that name... The name I couldn't call in my childhood.. * her eyes deep in thoughts*
Viren just looks at her... He knows what she is feeling.. He knows their child will have the best mother anyone could have and want...
Jeevika: I don't understand... Why do the first child always look like their Dad more?
Viren: Jeevika it is nothing like that... There is 50/50 chances... * smiles*
Jeevika: I know but I see that case everywhere... * laughs* Maybe you are right...
Viren laughs too...

Virat enters his room and is left speechless...
Virat: Bhaii... I will never ever tease you again... Seriously Ab toh meri pungi bajane wali hai
Shlok: Manvi Didi You are too sweet..
Manvi: Koi baat Nahi meri putaaar... Haha * laughs*
Virat: Oi Gabbar Singh hai kya?
Manvi: What are you doing here?
Virat: Oh Hello.. This is my room... I should be the one asking this...
Shlok: This is not the way you talk to a lady.. Learn how to become a gentlemen first..
Virat: * hits his head* Sorry mere encyclopaedia... Ill get lessons from you.. ( if I get lessons from him I'll become insane)
Manvi: Listen you have to do it like this...
Shlok just listens to manvi and learns..
Virat (Never ever manufacture children... Actually children like
Shlok.. Please God never ever create an encylopadia kid.. Live life Man... ) who wants to pop kids anyways..
Manvi: Pop what?
Shlok: Virat Bhaiyaa.. Did you say Pop Kids? * shocked*
Virat: Tch tch tch Shlokuuu should I tell Dadaji about what you said..
Shlok: Nahi... But I never said that..
Virat: Okay I'll tell Dadaji if you don't go from here...
Shlok: nahi nahi I'm going anyways I have lots of important things to do...
Shlok leaves...
Manvi: Partner did you say that?
Virat: Hmmm... Well Yes * laughs*Manvi starts to laugh too...
Virat: Partnerr we will never think of having children for a long time...
Manvi: Totally Agree...
They both are still smiling when they realise what they said...
Virat: I meant... Sorry yaar just came out...
Manvi: Chill yaar...
There is silence or awkwardness between them...
Virat ( Dude think before you speak.. Me and Manvi together.. With our children... It too early.. Seriously it's Not even possible because we are just friends... OMG am I falling for Manvi?? Those dreams and getting concern for her, feeling guilty when I do a prank on her... Is this love? )
Manvi ( Viraaat Mere Partner... You are just too cute.. That's why I just love you... Love you?? Can't believe I'm saying this about Virat.. Manviii are you developing feelings for Virat? )


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jenna_p Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 10:47am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM...Lovely updateSmile
Continue soon...

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preethis IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 10:52am | IP Logged
hayeee ni loved this part dear... wowww the last was super awesome...

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ShivRajput IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 12:01pm | IP Logged
Wow... Nice part.. Developing feelings... Loved it

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sizzysehrish IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 12:38pm | IP Logged
wah finalyy they are falling for each other
lovelyyy yrr
cont sooon

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-Tinu- Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
one word ani ji awsome actully im speechless.! Big smileLOLClap

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Khushi15 Senior Member

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Posts: 342

Posted: 17 April 2012 at 1:09pm | IP Logged
Awesome updates.!
Loved it..!
Btw u didnt pmed me since last 2 updates... :(

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virmanforever Goldie

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Posted: 17 April 2012 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
Wow I love how virman is thinking about love and you did a great job with this part please PM me when you update

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