Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! (Page 29)

Amii90 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 8:17pm | IP Logged
Sorry haven't had the chance to comment but I did 'like' all of ur posts! And SUPERB is the word!!!!! I was laughing throughout ur updates- i can imagine those dialouges for Viren "Mr & Mrs Knock Knock" LMAO!!! Fabulous!! Loving Jeevika too :) Keep up the awesome work :)

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-Anika- Senior Member

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 7:07am | IP Logged
OMGG guys im so sorry...
I just deleted the update from my phone... It was a really long one too Cry
I'm just so angry at myself... I'll have to write it again...
Extremely sorry guys!!!!


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A.K_LoveHrithik Senior Member

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 8:25am | IP Logged
Aww, its okay plz update soon thanks :)

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-Antu-_-Aslan- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 9:18am | IP Logged

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-Anika- Senior Member

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 6:35pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much to those who took time to reply and like my post... I'm extremely sorry to keep them waiting...
I'll hopefully update soon... Just don't feel like writing anymore!


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ayeshapasta Senior Member

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Posted: 15 April 2012 at 10:42pm | IP Logged
Take ur time

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-Anika- Senior Member

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 11:05am | IP Logged
Hey Guys... Here is part 15... Apologises for the delay...
The sentences between the brackets represent thoughts...

Part 15:

Around 3 am

Virat: Ugggh Please Manvi stop coming in my dreams... Virat what's happening to you dude... I'll have to figure out soon... Let's try again...
Finally he goes to sleep

Manvi is tossing and turning and babbling random things...

Viren is fast sleep and Jeevika is awake.. She gets up and goes to the washroom...
Just when she is about to leave she looks at herself in the mirror..
She places her hand on her stomach and rubs it...
Jeevika ( Am I ready? How will it feel to have a life inside me.. VirenJi's baby... How would it feel to not being able to see my feet? ) smiles
She comes out of the washroom and lays down on the bed.. She looks at Viren and starts thinking... Eventually falls asleep..

6.00 am
Virat: Chup Chup... This stupid alarm must be a relative of manvi.. Always disturbing me when I'm trying to sleep... Ugghhh
Better get up if I want breakfast...

Manvi: Kisne alarm lagaya... Uggghhh Manvi Get up if you want breakfast...

Viren just same out of shower and walks towards jeevika's sleeping form. He sits down next to her and moves her hair behind her ear...
Viren: Jeevika...
Jeevika: Hmmm... * smiles with eyes shut*
Viren: Jeevika get up.. Go freshen up...
Jeevika: hmmm...
Viren: Are you okay? * touches her forehead*
Jeevika: I'm fine Viren Ji.. Last night... I don't know what to do...
* opens her eyes*
Viren: Jeevika I can tell you are not ready... We want this beautiful phrase in our life when you are ready... Our symbol of love inside you * touches her Stomach*
Jeevika: * teary eyes* Viren Ji... I'm ready... I won't take the pill... * smiles*
Viren: Jeevika are you sure? I mean you seem sort off unsure... I understand..
Jeevika: I have thought about it a lot... I'm ready... From today no pills
* smiles*
Viren kisses her forehead...
Viren: Thank you so much... I promise to be by your side always and ever...
Jeevika just smiles...

At the breakfast table... 8.00am

Virat and Viren are sitting next to each other and Manvi and Jeevika opposite them...

Chachi: Haiye ni.. Viren and Virat saath mein... Kisse ki nazar Na lage..
Everyone just smiles...
Swamini: Kal karwa chauth hai.. Sab bohot excited hai... Hum bohot excited hai...* smiles*
Vanshika: Mein bhi Didi... Jeevika yeh Tumari Teesra Saal hai Na?
Jeevika: Ji Maa
Virat: And yours to Bhai.. * whispers and winks*
Viren: Chup Re * embarrassed *
Chachi: Haiye Mein kaun sa Get
Up karu... No food tomorrow * looks at dadaji* mera matlab mein toh tyaar hu ji... * embarrassed*
Virat: I'm excited for tomorrow too... *cheeky smile*
Viren: Kyun? Anything special...
Virat: Actually... Yesterday Manvi told me She is going to do karwa chauth too..
Manvi open's her mouth in shock
Viren realises Virat is teasing manvi again...
Jeevika is shocked too...
Swamini: Oh really? Good luck Manvi.. I hope you can do it...
Vanshika: Beta bohot acche...
Dadaji: Lekin... Yeh Vrat sirf Suhagan karti hai... Aur Manvi ka toh rishta bhi Nahi hua.. Toh...
Everyone is silent..
Virat: Woh kya hai Na Dadaji... Practice Karna chahati hai... Toh..
Dadaji: Toh Teek hai.. * smiles*
Everyone smiles...

Everyone finishes Breakfast

Jeevika( Mujhe Maanu ko yaha se le jana chahiye ... Virat and her will start fighting again) Mannu come with me I have to talk to you * holds her hand and takes her upstairs*

Viren: Viraaat mere Bhai... Why manvi?? Poor Manviii
Virat: Kya Bhai... It's just a joke..
Viren: Did you hear that Dadaji and Bade Maa praised manvi... Now she will do even if she doesn't want to...
Virat: Bhaaii i was just kidding... Anyways even jeevika Bhabhi would agree with me that she can't stay hungry for an hour and the whole day... * smiles*
Viren: You are saying like you can... Always munching
Virat: Bhaiii
Viren: Waise I can bet you can't stay hungry for a minute... I challenge you to keep the vrath tomorrow...
Virat: Challenge... Pffft Bhai I won't do this...
Viren: Tch tch tch no self control tch tch shame on you...
Virat: Bhai this won't convince me...
Viren: Wow! Mr Virat Singh Vadhera declining a challenge...
Virat: That's it Bhai... I'll do it and Prove you wrong!
Viren just smiles...
Viren ( This is so that you won't tease my Saali the whole day because you both will be fasting..)

Upstairs in jeevika's room

Manvi: Bunder Billli Gadah Kuttaa... Ugggh Diii
Jeevika: Maanuuu Calm down.. Take deep breaths.. Breath in... Breath out...
Manvi: Mein... Diii... Why did he do this? Partnerrr... I think he has lost it...
Viren and Virat enter the room...
Virat: Who has lost it?
* smiling*
Manvi marches towards him like a thunder; Jeevika gets hold of her before she reaches him... Viren moves in front of Virat to stop them fighting..
Manvi: Diii please leave my hand... I'm going to teach this Bunder a
Virat: Oyeee hoi meri chamak chaloo... * winks*
Manvi: How dare you call me a Chamak Chalo..
Viren: Guuuys... Come on...
Jeevika: Maanuuu chup... Devar ji aap bhi...
They obey both of them and remain quite..
Viren: Guess what... Virat is doing the fast too..
Manvi and jeevika are speechless
Manvi starts to laugh..
Manvi: Seriously Jeeju... Virat can't stay hungry...
Virat: Says the person who can't say hungry too...
Manvi: Virat Yaar... Fasting together will be fun... Right partner? * winks at him*
Virat: You bet * smiles* No cheating!!
Jeevika: I hope so... Waise Viren Ji.. Aap bhi..? * smiling*
Virat: Bhabhi... He will obviously do the fast... He doesn't want to loose you...
Jeevika smiles and so does Viren...
Manvi: Haaaiyeee Pati ho toh Jeeju jaise... Hai Na.. * nudges jeevika*
Jeevika blushes...

Virat: So partner.. Let's go! Let's prepare ourself for tomorrow... Eat as much as we can...
Manvi: Totally agree with you partner.. But we can't just can't eat like hippos in a day.. Self control...
Jeevika and Viren are controlling their laughter..
Manvi: So let's go and also give them some privacy * winks*
Virat: Oh yes yes... Enjoy guys! And Viren Bhai please control your emotions!!
Viren: Phir se... Tu ruk...
Virat and Manvi run outside the bedroom and Viren chases them... Jeevika blushing...

Tina Aka Viren Jeevika Love you lots


Edited by ani29 - 16 April 2012 at 11:07am

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keetha... Senior Member

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Posted: 16 April 2012 at 11:07am | IP Logged
ani u are such a sweet heart love the a lot thanka 4 ur pmWink

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