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Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! (Page 23)

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
Hello Guys Big smile
Thank you for your lovely comments and likes...
Sorry if I forgot to PM anyone...
The sentences between brackets represent thoughts...
Hope you like it guys...

Part 13:



Knock knock...
Viren: Seriously... Whoever it is now I'm going to knock them out...
* whispers angrily*...
Jeevika giggles...
Viren: I can't even romance with my wife... Jeevika at this rate... I don't think we will even have one child in ten years... We should name ourselves Knock knock... Mr and Mrs Knock Knock.. Seriously...
Jeevika: Viren Jiii .. * laughs.*
Viren marches to open the door.. He is shocked to see...
Virat and Manvi holding hands.
Viren: Okay... Let me digest this.. Holding hands you two...* shocked*
Virat: Kya Bhai... Aap bhi naa.. We are partners now...
* winks at manvi*
Viren: partners * eye brows raised*
Manvi: Yes Jeeju.. Can we come in now...
Viren: Oh Yes please be my guest... Virat Ji...Manvi Ji we were just waiting for you..
Manvi and Virat come in together and sit on the sofa comfortably..
Viren is still at the door...
Viren ( These two are like children which we don't have... Seriously)
Manvi: Jeeju ke chehre ko toh dekho... Kya hua Jeeju...* gets up and walks to him* Did we disturb you? * winks*
Viren: YES... I mean Nahi... Disturb Nahi toh... * embarrased*
Manvi: Oooh sach
* folds her arms*
Virat: Kya yaar Partner... Stop
The inquiry... Let's do something..
Viren: We were doing something but you had to disturb.. * mumbles*
Manvi: Kyaaa Jeeju..
Viren: Kuch Nahi... * smiles*
Jeevika: It's nearly 11 o'clock ... We should sleep now...
Viren Has a big smile on his face when he hears this...
Manvi: Kya Di.. Don't be so boring...
Let's play Truth and Dare... What say partner?
Virat: Kya Baat hai... After becoming my partner you have become intelligent... * smiles*
So...
Jeevika: hmm...
Viren: Okay but just till 12...

They sit on the bed in a circle...
Viren spins the bottle...
The bottle stops on Virat and Jeevika..
Virat: Truth or Dare...
Jeevika: Truth...
Virat: Hmm... It's a bit personal but I'm going to ask... Bhabhi don't get embaraased.. * winks*
Jeevika is scared... Viren is smiling... Manvi is excited..
Virat: Hmm.. How many kids do you want personally * smiles*
Viren and manvi are excited and look at Jeevika with a curious expression...
Jeevika is blushing... Viren holds her hand and she looks up..
Jeevika: Maybe 2 or 3... No more.. * smiles*
Virat: The no more was for you Bhai * winks* Viren just smiles
Manvi: Chunu Munnu... Haayee so cute... * hugs Jeevika*
Jeevika spins the bottle...
The bottle stops on Manvi and Viren...
Viren: Oyee hoyee... Saaliii Ji... Kahiye... Truth or dare..
Manvi: Dare
Viren: Go downstairs and get me aglass of water..
Manvi: Jeejuuu...
Viren: Just kidding... Hmm.. Teek hai... Say few emotional lines from your heart to Jeevika, Virat and Me
* smiles*
Manvi: I'll start with Jeevika Di...

She holds Jeevika's hands... And looks at her..
Manvi: Di Maine yeh aapse kabhi Nahi kaha.. Aap meri liye Behen se Pehle meri Ma ho... Even if you have children I should always be your first daughter
* smiles teary eyes*
Jeevika: Maaanuuu...
Manvi: Diii
Virat: Bhaiii they have amazing chemistry.. You should be jealous
* winks at viren*
Manvi: Now mere Jeejuuu...
Jeejuuu You are the best... Considering Di is my Ma From today You are my Dad too * winks*
Viren: Whoop I'm a Dad... Jeevika you should have informed me earlier
* laughs*
Manvi: Now Partner...
Virat: Please don't say I'm your Chacha..
Manvi: Haha Kya joke tha... Partner Just keep smiling like this.. Never ever want to see you sad...
Virat: Haayeee kitna touchy hai...
Viren ( Manvi and Virat together... Maybe... They look perfect )
Viren is smiling lost in his thoughts...
Manvi: Jeejuuu ko dekho Night dreaming kar karhe hai..
Jeevika nudges him...
Jeevika: Please let's go to sleep now... Mein bohot thak gaaye hu...
Manvi: Diii
Viren does a fake Yawn... And winks at Virat...
Virat: Partner... Viren Bhai thak Gaye hai... We'll play tomorrow... Chal..
Viren mouths thank you...
Manvi: Theek hai... Good night Jeejuuu.. good night Dii
Jeevika and Viren Say Good night to both of them...
They leave the room and Viren shuts the door and locks it..
Viren: At last...
He turns around and Jeevika is not there...
Viren: Jeeevikaaa...

Virat and Manvi waking towards their own rooms together...
Virat: Good night Partner...
Manvi: Kyaa partner... Mujhe toh neend bhi Nahi..
Virat: Mujhe bhi...
Manvi: Toh kya kareen... Jeeju and Di ke romance ko disturb...
Virat: Bad idea... I want become a chacha soon... So give them some privacy.. * winks*
Manvi: Are they planning? * curious*
Virat: Pata Nahi but it has been more than 2 years since their marriage so guessing...
Manvi: Maybe... So hum kya kare?
Virat: Do you want to eat Kulfi?
* excited*
Manvi: * grins* Yes
Virat: Lets go out then.. Long drive bhi ho jaaye Gaya.. * smiles*
Manvi: YAAAY... Chale..
They both leave the house around 11.45pm...


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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
Wow how cute they are going for a drive please PM me when you update

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
Aree yaar anii , y do u write sooo goood, it makes u crave for moreee specially wid ure cliffhangers!! 

Nw despretely waiting for part 14. pls update soon n fast!

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 6:44pm | IP Logged
Virat: Please don't say I'm your Chacha..

Viren: Whoop I'm a Dad... Jeevika you should have informed me earlier

Viren: I can't even romance with my wife... Jeevika at this rate... I don't think we will even have one child in ten years... We should name ourselves Knock knock... Mr and Mrs Knock Knock.. Seriously...

These dialogues cracked me up so much hats off
Hillarious
Continue soon and please pm me when u do

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 6:48pm | IP Logged
Tooo cute keep continuing please

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 7:02pm | IP Logged
wooow!!! ur writing keeps getting better n better by day honestly plz pm me soon..wonder what happens on their long drive?!?!

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 8:05pm | IP Logged
Brilliant...Clap
Continue soon...cant wait for the next part

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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 8:25pm | IP Logged

This next part should be amazing so waiting for it! Wink

love:
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