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Posted: 01 March 2013 at 9:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by x.Henna.x

WOOOHOOO!

Awhh I love the bit between Jeevika and Dhruv bit and Jeevika telling him about the babies and Dhruv calling his dad and Virat bad boys and asking his mum to puish them if they did it again and i really loved the bit when Dhruv thought his masi also had two babies Smile

I really wish I could pull Dhruv's cheeks, he just tooo cuteee! Big smile

I love how Jeevika was so busy, she didn't hear what Viren was asking and kept replying with hmm, LOL

I loved the VV bros talk.

Amazing update!!!


Thank you so much Henna Big smile
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Posted: 01 March 2013 at 9:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sweety1234556

Part 54!
First of all,I love your story! U r an amazing writer!
The update was superb!!
Everything was so cute!
Love how u show virika and their cute moments with dhruv!
Jeevika singing and dancing and viren was listening to her was soo sweet!
Virat and viren teasing dhruvLOL
Jeevika talking to her babiesBig smile
Aewsome!Smile


Thank you so much for two comments Hug
Love the way you wrote part 54 and 55 on each comment LOL
Love Hug

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Posted: 01 March 2013 at 10:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kays94

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I NEED TO GIVE A VERY VERY LONG COMMENT SOONLOL

okay, let me start off with saying that thank you so so so so so much for this long update and treat! I cannot begin to tell you how you're stories release my stress. I read them every time I take a break from studying and they motivate me to get back to studying so I can come back and read more. Like literally when I have nothing better to do, I reread this entire story from the very beginning! I cannot get enough of every update of yours. You really have the talent of making Virika so special and unique in your writing, so fabulous jobClap

i will come back and write more because you want a very long comment and i shall give you one ...

I'M BACK!!!! YEAH SO PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME HOW YOU ARE SO BRILLIANT???

okay firstly Dhruv's and Jeevika's relationship is like to die for! they have such a great understanding that its so damn adorable! The way he loves hs mom and is so worried for her and tells his little siblings not to bug his mommy, you should got me emotionalDay DreamingThen the way Dhruv tells Manvi he's going to be a big brother, and he assumes 4 little sibling are coming, omfg soo funnyLOL

Then the way you show Viren explaining to Virat and consoling him, just awww!!! Viren truly is so amazing. I fall in love with him more and more as I keep rereading your story! Then him and Dhruv are like the best, its hilarious seeing him handle Dhruv! I really hope you do add more funny scenes between the father-son duo, its just bloody amazing! Thank you for an amazing update, and I know you might say no but its worth a tryCrySo please update earlier if you CAN! My life would be just perfect, thanksss!!!!


WOOOW Big smile
Thank you thank you thank you!
Your comments are a treat to read... They kind off motivate me to write more!
Love it!!!!!!
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Posted: 01 March 2013 at 10:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by 2189mansi

Hey anika, finally ur back wid updates of this story. M so so so happy..:-)

I read all the way from part 47 to 55. And must say hw nicely the story is flowing bt i am very very sad angry and disappointed. U updated so many chapters and not even a single pm.


Incase u plan not to send pm to all the people on ur list atleast send it to those who has liked or commented on the story. U noe i was so disheartened wen u had decided to stop writin this story and i am happy dat ur finally back wid a bang..yipee;-) :p

Neways getting back to the story..dhruv is so cute naughty and adorable. I jus love him <3 and yipee finally all goin to hrishikesh.

Continue soon and pm if poss.


Well Hello Sweetheart Big smile
Truly apologise for not informing you Disapprove
Thank you though!
I can't PM anyone... I'm really busy at the moment and hardly get time to write the update but still do because it makes me happy. PMing people takes a lot of time.

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 3:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -Anika-

Originally posted by Kays94

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I NEED TO GIVE A VERY VERY LONG COMMENT SOONLOL

okay, let me start off with saying that thank you so so so so so much for this long update and treat! I cannot begin to tell you how you're stories release my stress. I read them every time I take a break from studying and they motivate me to get back to studying so I can come back and read more. Like literally when I have nothing better to do, I reread this entire story from the very beginning! I cannot get enough of every update of yours. You really have the talent of making Virika so special and unique in your writing, so fabulous jobClap

i will come back and write more because you want a very long comment and i shall give you one ...

I'M BACK!!!! YEAH SO PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME HOW YOU ARE SO BRILLIANT???

okay firstly Dhruv's and Jeevika's relationship is like to die for! they have such a great understanding that its so damn adorable! The way he loves hs mom and is so worried for her and tells his little siblings not to bug his mommy, you should got me emotionalDay DreamingThen the way Dhruv tells Manvi he's going to be a big brother, and he assumes 4 little sibling are coming, omfg soo funnyLOL

Then the way you show Viren explaining to Virat and consoling him, just awww!!! Viren truly is so amazing. I fall in love with him more and more as I keep rereading your story! Then him and Dhruv are like the best, its hilarious seeing him handle Dhruv! I really hope you do add more funny scenes between the father-son duo, its just bloody amazing! Thank you for an amazing update, and I know you might say no but its worth a tryCrySo please update earlier if you CAN! My life would be just perfect, thanksss!!!!


WOOOW Big smile
Thank you thank you thank you!
Your comments are a treat to read... They kind off motivate me to write more!
Love it!!!!!!
Love Hug Heart Hug

you should not only write more, but more frequently as well Wink

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Weekend is here give us an update.Smile

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Posted: 02 March 2013 at 6:01pm | IP Logged
Firstly Thank you Thank you Thank you once again to all the comments and likes. Hug
I'm sorry guys i can't PM anyone... I'll be only updating on the weekends so that should help.. Maybe Wink
And Hellooo Big smile
Love reading your comments.. long comments Haha and your likes are good too.
I don't really like this part.. Don't know why.. I promise the next one will be better!

Part 56:


Around 7.30am

Manvi peeks inside Dhruv's room and finds Jeevika dressing Dhruv.
Manvi: Morning Diii and Good Morning Dhruvieee * smiles while walking inside the room*
Jeevika: Good Morning Maaanuu
Dhruv runs to Manvi and hugs her.
Jeevika: Dhruv come back and wear your jeans
Manvi: Finished Packing Di?
Jeevika: No Maanuuu... Have to Pack Dhruv's clothes as well but no worries.. We have lots of time.
Manvi: I know Di... Waise what time are we leaving tomorrow?
Jeevika: I think we are leaving around 12 o'clock so we will reach there around 5ish..
Manvi smiles..
Dhruv: Mumma is Rishikesh your home too?
Jeevika: Yes beta..
Dhruv: Which house have you stayed longer?
Jeevika: Rishikesh * smiles*
Dhruv: So you how long have you lived here? * confused*
Jeevika: Hmm... Around 7 years beta..
Dhruv starts to calculate with his hands..
Manvi: Di * points to Dhruv* is a mini calculator * laughs*
Jeevika laughs too..
Dhruv: Oooh *still counting*
Manvi: My Mini Calculator * hugs Dhruv tightly*
Dhruv: Maaasiii I forgot the numbers now.. * moans*
Jeevika: Come here and wear your jeans... Is Dhruvieee a good boy or shame shame boy?
Dhruv: Good Boy.. * walks to Jeevika*
They all go downstairs once Dhruv is ready.

Around 9.00am
Everyone finishes their breakfast. Vanshika, Swamini and Kadambari are in their rooms packing their bags while Dadaji and Inder are in the study room. Shlok has gone to school and Dhruv has gone to nursery. Viren and Virat have gone office while Jeevika and Manvi are helping each other pack their bags. Manvi helps Jeevika pack Dhruv's bag too.


Viren and Virat come back home from office around 6.30pm while Everyone else is in the garden. They have their dinner at 8 o'clock and sleep around 9.30pm.

In the lounge

Around 10am

Everyone has their Luggage in the lounge.
Dadaji: Tarun... Please put all the luggage in the coach.
Tarun: Jee Dadaji
Everyone one is smiling and looking forward to the trip.
Dadaji: Viren Tell the driver to drive the car to Rishikesh; you guys come with us
Viren: Jee Dadaji..
The home phone rings. Vanshika picks up the phone...
Vanshika: Hello..
Beeji: Namaste VanshikaJi
Vanshika: Beeji * happy* Kaise hain aap?
Beeji: Bohot acche... Really happy that you all are coming here.
Vanshika: Jee Beeji.. Everyone is really excited over here too..
Beeji: Waise what are you leaving?
Vanshika: I think we will be leaving around 12 o'clock so we should be there around 5.
Beeji: Acche Baat hai...
Vanshika: Beeji please don't be formal.. We are family.
Beeji: Jee VanshikaJi * embarrassed* I'm sure you must be busy getting ready... We will see you very soon.
Vanshika: Jee Beeji.. Namaste.

Around 12pm

In the coach
Dadaji and Swamini are sitting next to each other while Shlok and Dhruv are sitting next to each other parallel to them. Kadambari and Inder are sitting behind them. Vanshika is sitting by herself. Manvi and Virat are sitting next to each other and so are Viren and Jeevika.
Viren and Virat instruct the driver to drive carefully and slowly.
Viren walks back to his seat but Virat is still telling the driver to drive carefully and to avoid the route with humps.
Dadaji: Viraaat.. Go back to your seat * laughs*
Everyone is laughing too and Virat walks to his seat embarrassed.
Shlok and Dhruv are playing snakes and ladders. Dadaji is reading a newspaper. Swamini and Vanshika are talking about the things they want to do in Rishikesh.
Kadambari and Inder are sleeping. Manvi is asleep on Virat's shoulder... Virat is trying not to move so Manvi doesn't wake up. On the other hand, Viren is sleeping on Jeevika's Shoulder; Jeevika has placed her hand on his cheek to support him.
Dhruv: Mummaaa? * looks behind*
Jeevika: Dhruvieee... * whispers*
Dhruv: Bhaaaiya... Please help me get off this seat
Shlok helps Dhruv get down and Dhruv walks to Jeevika.
Dhruv sees Viren sleeping on Jeevika's shoulder.
Dhruv: Mummaaa I also want to sleep * rubbing his eyes*
Jeevika: Ummm... What should I do? * mumbles to herself*
Vanshika: Dhruvieee... Beta come here. Jeevika don't worry I'll make him sleep. Come here mera Bacha.
Jeevika: Thank you Maa * mouths*
Dhruv walks to Vanshika and sits on her lap.
Vanshika: Is my Bacha tired? * hugs Dhruv*
Dhruv: Very tired Dadi * hugs her and shuts his eyes*
Vanshika: Awww.. Don't worry. you sleep in my lap
* slowly pats him while hugging him*
Dhruv is asleep in a few minutes.
Jeevika falls asleep in a few minutes too. Viren wakes up while she is sleeping. He moves his head from her shoulder carefully and places his arm around her; Jeevika snuggles into him and sleeps peacefully.
Manvi wakes up and Virat sighs.
Virat: Manvi... My shoulder is so stiff now... Ouch!
Manvi: How come? * yarning*
Virat: You slept on my shoulder for like 2 and half hours. I couldn't move them and now they are just hurting!
* massages his shoulders*
Manvi: Awwwrh * pulls his cheek*
Virat: Now they hurt * rubs his cheek*
Manvi: Why is it so quiet?
Virat: Well... Everyone is sleeping except Bhai.
Manvi looks around to find everyone sleeping.
Manvi: Jeeeju * whispers to Viren*
Viren looks at Manvi and waves.
Manvi: Kya Baat hai Jeeju? You must be enjoying huh?
* winks*
Viren: Enjoying? * confused*
Manvi: Di sleeping like this... * winks*
Viren: You wait and watch Saali Saheba
Manvi: Sorry Sorry.
Viren let's out a laugh.
Virat: Im hungry...
Manvi: this should be my line..
Virat: Oh really?
Manvi: Yes because Im pregnant.
Virat: What sort off logic is that?
Manvi: Sshhh...
Virat: Don't tell me to Shhh
Manvi: Ssshhh..
Virat: Manviii * raises his eye brows*
Manvi: Viraaat..
Virat: Maaanviii
Manvi: Viraaat Jiii * giggles*
Viren: You two... Lower your voices * smiles*
Manvi: Ooopss..
Virat: Bhai should we stop at some Dhaba to eat...
Viren: Yes Virat. Inform the driver when he sees a Dhaba to stop there.
Virat informs the Driver and walks back to his seat. He stops near Vanshika and Dhruv. Dhruv is sitting in Vanshika's lap wide awake looking outside the window while Vanshika is sleeping.
Virat: Dhruvvv *waves at him*
Dhruv: Chachu Maassu * waves back at him*
Virat: What are you doing?
Dhruv: Just looking at the mountains * smiles*
Virat: Come sit with me...
Dhruv: Will Dadi wake up?
Virat: No she won't... * he carefully takes him in his arms and walks back to his seat*
Dhruv sits on Virat's lap.
Viren pokes Dhruv and he looks at his dad.
Dhruv: Daaady * smiles*
Viren: What were you doing?
Dhruv: I was sleeping then I woke up and I was looking at the mountains.
Viren: Very good.
Dhruv: Is Mumma Sleeping?
Viren: Yes beta..
Dhruv: She must be very tired... The two babies are very naughty.. I will have to make them into good babies
Viren: Dhruv.. The two babies are very good but Mumma is just having her nap time..
Dhruv:Oooh.. Mumma is having her nap time?
Viren nodes...
Dhruv: Ooops... Sorry two babies.
Viren smiles...
Manvi: Dhrrruviieee * pulls his cheek*
Dhruv: Maaanu Maaasiii * pulls her cheek too*
Manvi: Why are you copying me? * raises her eye brows*
Dhruv: Noo... You are copying me!
Manvi: Liar Liar pants on fire...
Dhruv: Shame Shame Maanu Maasi... You are a bad boy...
Manvi: Bad Boy? Dhruvie I'm not a boy! * tries to act upset*
Virat ( Manvi turns into a child with Dhruv) * smiles*
Dhruv: Sorrry Maaanu Maasi... You are a girl... not a boy... Dhruv is very very sorry.. * smiles*
Manvi: You are adorable!! *hugs him tightly*
Dhruv smiles.
Virat: Im so hungry.. * tummy rumbles*
Dhruv: Chachu Maasu your stomach is making noises..
* laughs*
Virat is embarrassed and Manvi laughs too...
Dhruv: Chachu Maasu... Can I ask you a question?
Virat nodes..
Dhruv: Do you also have a baby in your stomach?
Virat is shocked and Manvi is controlling her laughter. Viren smiles at their conversation and pats Virat.
Viren: Good luck with the answer..
Virat: Bhaaaiii... This little boy is dangerous * whispers to Viren*
Viren laughs.
Dhruv: Chachu Maasu.. You didn't answer my question..
* looking at Virat*
Manvi is looking outside the window to hide her laughter.
Virat: Dhruv... I'm very hungry so my tummy is making noises to ask for food..
Dhruv: Really? * surprised*
Virat nodes.
Dhruv: Why doesn't my tummy make noises then?
Virat: Thats because.. Hmmm...
Dhruv is just looking at Virat..
Virat pats Viren...
Virat: Bhaaiii help.. * mouths*
Viren: Are you hungry Dhruv?
Dhruv: Yes daddy
Viren: Do you want to eat at a Dhaba?
Dhruv: Yes... * excited* I really like the holes in their bed and the strings * smiles*
Virat, Viren and Manvi laugh at this.
Viren: Dhruv it's called a Charpai * smiles*
Dhruv: Charpai * smiles*
Everyone eventually wakes up while Jeevika is still asleep. The driver stops at the Dhaba.
Kadambari: Haaaiye Ne Im so hungry..
Manvi: Same Chachi..
Virat: Bhai... Bhabhi is still sleeping..
Viren: I'll wake her up and come. You guys carry on.
Vanshika: Are you sure beta?
Viren: Jee Maa... You guys give the Order... We will come there...
Everyone gets off the coach and walk to the Dhaba.
Viren: Jeeevika * kisses her forehead*
Jeevika opens her eyes and shuts them quickly because the sun rays are on her face. Viren blocks the sun with his hand and Jeevika opens her eyes slowly.
Viren: Wakey Wakey Jeevika.. * smiles*
Jeevika: Are we in Rishikesh? * surprised*
Viren: Nope we are at the Dhaba..
Jeevika: Oooh... Where is everyone else?
Viren: They went... I stayed here to wake you up..
Jeevika smiles.
Viren: Chalo Let's go...
Viren stands up from his seat and extends his hand; Jeevika holds on to it tightly and stands up...
Jeevika: My whole body is stiff * sighs*
Viren: Don't worry... Just walk around a little over here.
Jeevika nodes.
They get off the coach. Jeevika quickly walks to the side because she is feeling sick. Viren goes after her.
Viren: Are you okay? * holding her*
Jeevika: Feeling sick... * breathing heavily*
Viren: Don't worry... * smooths her back and holds her hair*
Jeevika falls sick
Viren: Are you okay now?
Jeevika: Jee VirenJi.. * sighs*
Viren: I should I get your favourite perfume out off the bag to help you...
Jeevika: Its fine at the moment...
Viren: Jeeevikaaa... Are you seriously okay? You look a bit pale..
Jeevika: Feeling a bit dizzy... Just want to sit down
Viren holds her tightly and walks to the Charpai where everyone is sitting. They sit on the Charpai. Viren has his arm around Jeevika and she has her eyes shut and is resting her head on his chest.
Vanshika: Kya Hua beta?
Viren: She felt sick and now feeling dizzy...
Everyone gets worried..
Virat: I'll tell get some lemon water...
Manvi: All of a sudden? * concern*
Vanshika: Beta don't worry... It happens. Travelling sickness plus pregnancy sickness.
Kadambari: I'll get the Laado from the coach.. That should help too.
Virat comes over with lemon water and gives it to Viren.
Viren: Jeeevika..
Jeevika opens her eyes..
Viren: Drink this...
Jeevika drinks the lemon water...
Viren: How are you feeling now?
Jeevika: Better * smiles*
Kadambari: Jeevika eat this Laado too...
Jeevika takes the Laado and eats it without complaining.
The waiter comes over with food...
Everyone has their food and start to walk towards the coach.
Viren takes out the perfume that Jeeevika loves to help her feel better.
Manvi: Dii are you okay now?
Jeevika: Im fine Maannu..
They all sit in the same way as before.
This time everyone is talking, singing songs and soon they reach Rishikesh.

Around 5.00pm

Outside the Chaudhary house

Everyone gets off the coach one by one.
Dadaji: Aaah the weather is Amazing... * takes a deep breath*
Jeevika and Manvi are really excited.
They all walk to the main door and ring the bell.
Beeji and Madan open the door and greet them with garlands.
They all come inside the house...
Jeevika and Manvi try to touch Beeji's feet but she stops them...
Beeji: Mere Bachiya * hugs them tightly*
They have tears in their eyes...
Beeji: Let me see my two Bachiya..
Manvi and Jeevika both smile and wipe their tears.
Beeji: Manvi mere Bache.. You look very health; seems like the baby is happy go lucky like you * pulls her cheek*. Jeevika beta you will be having twins... Means double happiness for us. I wish this time you get two lovely daughters * smiles*
Jeevika and Manvi hug Beeji again...
Beeji: Waise where is Dhruv?
Jeevika turns around to see Dhruv with Dabbu...
Jeevika: Dhruvieee
Dhruv walks to Jeevika...
Jeevika: Dhruvieee... This is my Dadi but I call her Beeji
Dhruv: Like my Vanshika Dadi..
Jeevika nodes..
Dhruv touches Beeji's feet...
Beeji: Haaaiye god bless you Bache..
Dhruv: Thank you... Mumma calls you Beeji but what should I call you?
Beeji: You can call me Bade Beeji...
Dhruv smiles..
Beeji: Come with me Dhruv... I'll make you meet your bade bade Beeji
Dhruv smiles and goes with Beeji...



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Awwie... OMG...
Such a cute and adorable one...
My Dhruvie...he's so cute..
i wanna have him for a day or two... :D
So so adorable...
And 

Yeayi yeayi yeai... i'm the first one to comment... woohooo... PartyDancing
A big hug to you for such an awesome one...Hug
Wowie... they care about Jeevika so much...
Loved it to the core...
Please cntinue soon n PM me...




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