Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! (Page 130)

9999P Senior Member

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Posted: 03 February 2013 at 9:37pm | IP Logged
its awesome

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sweetdollashita Goldie

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 12:16am | IP Logged
cute update...
viren n virat's reasons were superb...
continue soon

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 11:38am | IP Logged
Hello Guys!
I'm in a real hurry.. Have a lot of work to do... Next update on weekend now.. Sorry!
Thank you for the comments.. Long comments Big smile and likes too.
I'm not very happy with this update but I will post it anyway.. Please do comment and let me know what you feel about it.. It is quite emotional.

Part 52

August 2016

Around 7 pm

Dadaji starts to laughs
Everyone looks at him.
Dadaji: Look at your faces.. * laughs*
Virat and Viren both look embarrassed while everyone looks at them and laughs.
Dadaji: Viren and Virat you both stay with Manvi and Jeevika.. * grin*
Viren and Virat suddenly have a big smile on their face.. Seeing this everyone starts to tease them..
Kadambari: Oye Hoye * whistles*
Inder: Kya Baat hai.. * winks at Viren and Virat*
Dhruv: Big Dadu.. * sad face*
Dadaji: Sorry.. Even Dhruv is staying back in Rishikesh
Everyone cheers for him.. And Dhruv gets happy.

Everyone has their dinner and are sitting in the lounge.
Everyone is really excited about the weekend trip.
Dadaji: This time I want to sit at Ganga Ghat early in the morning.. That cool breeze.. Aaah! * imagines it with eyes closed*
Inder: I want to sit in those rickshaw that Viren and Virat were talking about..
Viren: Chachu you have never sat in them before? * winks*
Chachu: Chup Kar Yaar... I have but the feeling of sitting in it in Rishikesh must be different * smiles*
Kadambari: I've called up PinkyJi and we have planned to do a lot of shopping. * grins*
Inder: Lo karlo Baat.. Shopping even here
Everyone laughs.
Kadambari: aap Chup rahiye.
Jeevika and Manvi are just lost in their thoughts.
Vanshika: Jeevika Manvi.. Look at you two.. Look so happy and day dreaming. * smiles*
Jeevika: Maa I can't express my feelings in words * teary eyed*
Manvi side hugs her. Viren just watches Jeevika and then sighs.
Manvi: I have a long list of things I want to do.. * excited*
Virat gives her a confused look.
Swamini: I actually want to go to one of those yoga lessons in Rishikesh near the Ganga ghat.. So peaceful
* smiles*
Jeevika: I'll join you buaJi * smiles*
Swamini: Absolutely.. I think all off us to try it for a day.
* smiles*
Dadaji: Chalo let's all go to sleep now.. Good night everyone.
Everyone greets each other good night and go to their rooms. Vanshika has taken the responsibility to make Dhruv sleep today.

Around 9.30pm

Manvi and Virat's room

Manvi: Aaah so excited Virat. Seriously I feel like jumping.. Doing Bhangra.. Aaah! That feeling of going back gives me goosebumps. Life seems so beautiful right now.. Seems complete. Never knew I would feel like this. Aaah. I just want to go to the terrace and just scream in joy and laugh out loud. I'm so so so happy. The wind of Rishikesh.. The Ganga ghat.. Lakshman Jhula.. Virat I don't know what else to say.. Words are not enough.. * tears fall down while she is smiling*
Virat: I have never seen this side of you.. Ever! * hugs her tightly* I promise you that this trip...you will remember your whole life. * smiles*

Viren and Jeevika's room..

Viren comes out of the bathroom and sees Jeevika has tears in her eyes.
Viren: Jeevikaaa.. * sits opposite her on the bed*
Jeevika looks at him and hugs him tightly.
Viren: Jeeevika.. What's wrong? What's happening to you? Back pain? Are you okay? Look at me * panics*
Jeevika: Im fine VirenJi.. More than Fine.
Viren: Then what's wrong? * whips her tears*
Jeevika: VirenJi this feeling of going back.. I'm so happy.
Viren: Let your heart out.. Express those words that you can't express with anyone else.. Tell me everything you are feeling and trust me i'll listen to all of them. Don't hold yourself back * smiles*
Jeevika cries her heart out.. * Viren just holds her hands and looks at her*
Jeevika: Those memories of life in Rishikesh.. I can't.. VirenJi..
Viren: Im listening.. Go on.. * smiles*
Jeevika: Rishikesh.. Aaah.. Ganga Ghat... Lakshman Jhula.. My school where I used to teach. I feel so attached to them. Beeji and everyone else in Rishikesh.. It was very hard for me to let go off them. After marriage a women's life changes.. A lot. I'm not the only women who went through it but don't know. I find it very hard to express myself... Sorry VirenJi..
Viren just holds her hand tighter and just looks at her.
Jeevika: Sleeping in the terrace.. With that cool breeze.. Trees swaying like they are dancing for us..* giggles* That moon so bright.. Beeji singing us lullaby.. Chachi making kheer.. Dabbu eating all the kheer and running to the bathroom * laughs* Chachu annoying Chachi and chachi's lipstick talks.. * laughs*
Jeevika suddenly realises she is not a child anymore and looks at Viren..
Viren just looks at her..
Viren: So these are the emotions that are there with every women no matter how long they are married. That child is always present in them. Those memories never vanish but are always there in their mind.
Jeevika hugs Viren and cries her heart out.
Viren: Ssshhh.. * hugs her tightly*
Jeevika: Im so lucky.. So so lucky to have you in my life. I can't express the happiness that you have given me in bundles of joy. Your love, this family, our Dhruv and the little ones inside me.. Your love is endless for me.. I believe that you love me then I love you. I have never...* sobs* God took away mumma papa but god has given me you as my life partner..If Mumma Papa were here they would be so...* cries*
Viren: Ssshhh.. Ssshhh.. Ssshhh.. Bas Jeeevikaa... Ssshhh
Viren detaches from the hug and whips her tears..
Viren: Ssshhh please... Jeevika..
Jeevika: Thank you.. * sobs*
Viren gives her water. He lays her on the bed and sits next to her.
Viren: No more crying... Go to sleep now. * stroking her hair*
Jeevika falls asleep quickly.
Viren ( All these emotions inside you.. I promise Jeevika.. This trip will be a memorable one.. Love you)


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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 11:42am | IP Logged


oh my god!!! it indeed was sooo emotional seeing Jeevika like that, but Viren makes it all better. Just the way he takes care of her and listens to everything she wants to and has to say makes me fall in love with him more and more!!! I really am lost at words for your story, like every update is jut marvelous so hats of to you dear!!! Clap And I also am sooo happy that Virat and Viren will get to stay with their loves and not have to come back early, that had made me very sad before Cry

My day just gets better anytime I see you posting an update!!! I just love love love love love love love love love love your story!!! I hope to read an update very very very very soon!!!! 

Thank You Heart

Edited by Kays94 - 04 February 2013 at 12:03pm

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girl97 Goldie

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 11:55am | IP Logged

thanks for the sweet update
its great wonderful amazing
loved the emotions 
well described and written
the way you described Rishekiesh 
made me wanna catch a flight and go there :P :P 
do update soon please
ur awesome 

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Kanwal_chohan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Such a sweet update loved it

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Saaraa. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 12:01pm | IP Logged

Just so emotional.

Loved the way everone teased the vadera brothers.
Rhishikesh . Ahhh.
their feelings.
everything in this story is just soo good <3

Edited by ktloversera - 04 February 2013 at 12:02pm

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Posted: 04 February 2013 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Good update...
Loved the way Jeevika pours out her emotions before viren about Rishikesh...Smile
Cant wait for the next update..

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