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Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! (Page 122)

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
wowww
mindblowing update...this ff is just superb n i've read it so many times n because of this ff only i started visiting this forum n got addicted to it n this story...
do write more plz...

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 11:53pm | IP Logged
Awesome updateClap
Loved it..
Do write more..Smile

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 4:28am | IP Logged
Am so glad you've gone to the flasback!
Like i really cant wait you to write more!
Believe me! i have read this story so many times till now!!

This part already made me laugh so much, and dhruv !! hes such a mumma boy!
I loved his character!
and th twins,
poor manvi and jeevika, haha !

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
Thank you so much guys! These comments and likes have encouraged me to write more! I've started writing the next part.. Will post it soon.
Anika

Edited by -Anika- - 31 January 2013 at 1:17pm

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
Waiting eagerly for the next update

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 1:43pm | IP Logged
wow its indeed a big surprise u updated this story, thank u very much for updating, the update is damn awesome, loved it

little dhruv is cute, always caring abt his mom... update more if possible n plz add dhruv n viren scenes if u can

don't forget to pm me 

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 4:54pm | IP Logged
yay have missed you awesome as always

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Posted: 31 January 2013 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
Hello you lovely people!
Really appreciate the comments that you guys made.. Love them all! And for those you liked the post thank you.
Sorry I won't be able to pm anyone about the the updates.. There is a long list of people. Really sorry!
The next update is here.. Hope you guys like it. Please do comment and let me know how you feel about it.

Part 49:

In the garden

Around 7pm

Dhruv: Big Dadu I don't understand chess..
Dadaji: Don't worry beta.. You'll learn it very soon.
Dhruv runs to Virat and Manvi while the other are still playing chess.
Dhruv: Maanu Maasi..
Manvi stop the swing and hugs him.
Manvi: Dhruvie... Why were you calling me MaanuJi this morning? Who taught you this?
Dhruv: Virat Maasu..
Virat looks at him..
Dhruv: Ooops Virat Chachu..
Manvi turns to look at Virat.
Virat: Woh mein..
Manvi: Virat.. Stop teaching him wrong things. Dhruvie you should call Virat Maasu not Chachu. You call me Maasi right?
Dhruv nodes.
Manvi: So then he is my husband so he is your..
Dhruv: Maasu..
Manvi: Wow Dhruvie.. You are such a good baby.
Dhruv: Thank you Maanu Maasi.
Virat: Dhruv beta come here.. I'll explain it properly.
Manvi: Dhruvie will you listen to me or Virat Maasu?
Dhruvie starts to think..
Manvi: Dhruvieee * sad face*
Dhruvie: I'll listen to no one * runs away*
Manvi: Sometimes Dhruv is just like Di and sometimes like some Chep I know..
Virat: Oooh * raises his eye brow* and who is this Chep?
Manvi: Haaaiye Hum ko sharam aate hai.. * winks*
Virat starts to laugh.
Virat: Nautanki!
Manvi: I wish our baby is not like you.
Virat: What kind of wife are you? All the wives when they are pregnant would say I wish my baby is like my husband but here everything is wrong ..
Manvi: I don't want our baby to be Chep like you.. * winks*
Virat: Oh really! I wish the same about you.
Manvi: If our baby is not like me or you.. Who else?
Virat: Dadaji..
Virat and Manvi together: Please no!
Virat: Can't even imagine it.. Shlok is enough * laughs*
Manvi: I read in a book that baby can be like anyone from the family
Virat: Anyone?
Manvi: I mean see Shlok is like Dadaji.
Virat: Never thought of this.
Manvi: Well only clever people think like this.
Virat: Haha very funny.
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Jeevika and Viren are still walking around the garden. Dhruv comes behind them and hugs Viren.
Viren turns around to see his little son.
Viren: Well hello Stranger * takes him in his arm*
Dhruv: Sorry Daddy.. You know I have been very busy today.
Viren: Accha.. How were all you meetings then? * smiles*
Dhruv: They have been very tiring.. But I had to take out time for you. * hugs him*
Viren: Badmash! * hugs him back *
Jeevika: Dhruvie since when do you have meetings and VirenJi stranger? * tensed*
Viren and Dhruv: Mumzie chill! * say this together and wink at each other*
Jeevika has her mouth wide open.
Viren: Jeevika when Dhruv doesn't greet me properly all day.. I call him stranger. And he has to say he was busy in meeting * pulls dhruv's cheek*
Dhruv: Mumma I'm still a good baby right? * sad face*
Jeevika: You are my very very good baby * pokes him*
Dhruv and Jeevika have a poke fight and Viren is just smiling.
Dhruv: I need an advise from you Mumma and daddy.
Jeevika and Viren raise their eye browns and control their laughter.
Viren: Yes Bacha.. What is it?
Dhruv: Should I say Virat Chachu or Virat Maasu? I'm so confused.
Viren: Hmm.. That's a very big problem..
Jeevika: I know VirenJi.. Only Dhruvie can solve it.
Dhruv: Maanu Masi tells me I should sayVirat Maasu
Jeevika and Viren: Oooh.
Dhruv: See the problem...
Viren: Say Virat Chachu or Virat Maasu.. He is both so how about you say Chachu Maasu. * smiles*
Dhruv: That's a very good idea. Thank you Daddy * kisses his cheek*
Viren hugs him tightly.
Jeevika: We should go inside now.. Dinner time.
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After dinner everyone is in the lounge chatting randomly.

Jeevika: Dhruvie chalo..
Dhruv: Where mummy?
Jeevika: Don't you have to sleep.. Have nursery tomorrow.
Dhruv: Oh yes..
Viren: Jeevika you relax.. I'll make Dhruv sleep today.
Jeevika: are you sure VirenJi?
Viren: Yes.. Don't worry.
Dhruv wishes good night to everyone and he leaves with Viren.

In Dhruv's room

Viren helps Dhruv change into his pyjamas and then makes him brush his teeth and tucks him in bed.
Dhruv: Daddy..
Viren: hmmm..
Dhruv: Daddy..
Viren: Dhruv..
Dhruv: Daaadddy.. * giggles*
Viren: Dhhrruuuvv.. * giggles*
Dhruv: Dadddy.. * Viren tickles him*
Dhruv: Stop stop stop.. * while laughing*
Viren: Badmash baby.. You and your Mumma do this everyday? * smiling*
Dhruv: Yes and we also have a poke war * smiles*
Viren: Chalo chalo.. Lets go to sleep.
Dhruv: Daddy please sing me a lullaby (lori)
Viren: Lullaby? * gulps*
Dhruv: Yes * excited*
Viren: Okay Beta.. I'll try.
Dhruv shuts his eyes.
Viren ( Oh god.. What should I sing.. Sorry Dhruv but I'll just have to try)

Viren: Hush, little baby, don't say a word.
Papa's gonna buy you a mockingbird

And if that mockingbird won't sing,
Papa's gonna buy you a diamond ring

Dhruv: Daddy the Hindi ones..
Viren: Sorry baby.. Daddy doesn't remember any Hindi ones.
Dhruv: Oooh..
Viren: Is a filmy lori okay?
Dhruv: Okay * smiles*
Viren: *clears his throat*
So ja chanda, raaja so ja
Chal sapnon mein chal * ahem ahem*
Neend ki pariyaan pehan ke aayi, pairon mein paayal
Tujhko apne naram paron par leke jaayengi
Sone ka ik des hai jiski sair karaayengi *ahem*

So ja chanda, raaja so ja
Chal sapnon mein chal
Neend ki pariyaan pehan ke aayi, pairon mein paayal
Tujhko apne naram paron par leke jaayengi
Sone ka ik des hai jiski sair karaayengi

Dhruv is fast asleep so Viren turns off the light and turns on the night lamp and leaves the room.

Jeevika had been watching Viren sing the lullaby to Dhruv and was smiling all the way. Viren is shocked to see Jeevika outside the bedroom.

Viren: Jee..Jeevika tum yaha? * embarrassed*
Jeevika: Jee* hands folded*
Viren: Did you hear me..
Jeevika: Jee VirenJi.. Heard the whole lullaby.. * giggles*
Viren: Oh hello.. It wasn't bad. See Dhruv is sleeping so it must be good * proud*
Jeevika: When did I say it was bad? * innocent*
Viren: Ooh yes... But why are you giggling? Am I dancing here?
Jeevika: Im just having one off those pregnancy mood swings * innocent*
Viren: Oh really? You liar. Dhruv's Mumma is liar.. This is going to be headlines of tomorrow's news. * winks*
Jeevika: Aap bhi naa VirenJi * embarrassed*
Viren: Jokes aside.. How is your back now? * concern*
Jeevika: It's fine VirenJi.. But please massage the back again.
Viren: Surely I will.
They both go to their room.


Guys I can't update everyday but I'll try my best.

Anika






Edited by -Anika- - 01 February 2013 at 5:17pm

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