Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! (Page 121)

maria_awan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 11:59am | IP Logged
Nice dear

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Saaraa. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
I can't wait.
i have read this FF 6 times.
im a huge fan of this FF.
Dying to read more.
Thanks Anika.

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-Anika- Senior Member

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 4:25pm | IP Logged
Well Hello You lovely People!
Sorry I won't PM anyone about this update.. Please let others know about this update if you know they read this FF.

I don't really like this part.. It seems quite boring to me.. Please give me your honest opinion. I'll post it anyway.. It's quite long so might as well. Please let me know how you find it.

We are going back in time. The second pregnancy of Jeevika and first one of Manvi

August 2016

It's 4 months into the Manvi and Jeevika's pregnancy.

Around 6am

Virat and Manvi's room

Manvi covers her mouth and rushes to the bathroom. She comes out and looks at Virat sleeping peacefully.
Manvi: Aaah look at him sleeping so peacefully. Why god why? Why do all the women have to go through this? * talking loudly*
Virat: Manvi Yaar.. *turns side*
Manvi walks to his side and hits him on his arm.
Virat: Ouchhh! * opens his eyes slowly* why are you hitting me? * confused and rubbing his eyes*
Manvi: How can you sleep peacefully when I'm not feeling well!
Virat: Like this.. * goes back to sleep*
Manvi: That's it.. I'm not having anymore children after this..
Virat: Nahi Nahi ManviJi please don't say that.. There should be someone in future to give company to our little one inside you
Manvi: I've decided.. No more. Do whatever you like.. I'm not changing my decision. You don't know the feelings I'm going through at the moment. * sad*
Virat rests against the back rest of the bed and holds Manvi's hand.
Virat: See Manvi.. I believe every pregnant women has to go through this. You won't remember all this in the end. When you have our baby in your arms you will forget these months of pain.
Manvi: Virat but I don't like it. Ofcourse I'm really happy that we are going to have a baby but I don't know if I'll be a good mum. *controlling her tears*
Virat: Heeey... You'll be an amazing mum. The way you looked after Dhruv after he was born.. Do you really need me say anything else.
Manvi smiles and Nodes.
Virat: When Virat is here not to fear. *says proudly and smiles*
Manvi smiles.
Manvi: Tum ho toh fear hain.
* giggles*
Virat laughs with her and hugs her tightly.

Jeevika and Viren's room

Around 7.00am

Jeevika is doing her yoga exercises while Viren is having a shower.

Jeevika opens her eyes and sees that Dhruv is sitting next to her and trying to do the same yoga posture like her.
Jeevika tries to control her laugh and just looks at Dhruv. Dhruv is still busy trying to get into the same posture.
Jeevika pokes him on his arm to get his attention. Dhruv suddenly looks at her.
Dhruv: Mumzie Why are you poking me? It's my turn to poke to get attention.
Jeevika:Ooops forgot. Dhruvie what are you trying to do? You'll get hurt.
Dhruv: Mumzie Don't worry I know how to do it. * tries to get in that posture again*
Jeevika: Accha Dhruvie.. Good babies don't lie. * tries to act serious*
Dhruv: Sorry for lying Mumma. * hugs jeevika*
Jeevika: Awwwrh mera bacha
Jeevika tries to get up but isn't able to get up. Dhruv stands up and extends his hand. Jeevika let's out a giggle.
Dhruv: Mumzie hold my hand.. I'll help you get up. * smiles*
Jeevika: Baby if I hold your hand you will fall down * giggles*
Dhruv: Mummaaa Im very strong * serious*
Jeevika: Did you drink your milk?
Dhruv: Ooops.. I haven't *Starts to think* Then I won't be strong. Mumma you sit here i'll run and drink my milk and come back to help you.
Before Jeevika could say anything Dhruv ran outside the room. Jeevika just smiling looking at the door.
Viren: Jeevika..
Jeevika: Jee VirenJi
Viren: Need help getting up?
Jeevika just nodes.
Viren helps her get up making sure she doesn't hurt her back.
Viren: How is your back now?
Jeevika: It's better VirenJi
Jeevika is lost in her thoughts.
Viren: What happened? Are you okay?
Jeevika: Just remembering when I was pregnant with Dhruv. This time I have two little ones inside.. * touches her abdomen*
Viren: And Im sure this time I'll be right * smiles*
Jeevika is confused.
Viren: About us having a girl.. I mean girls.
Jeevika just smiles.
Viren: Waise where is Dhruv? He's always here when you are doing yoga.
Jeevika: He's downstairs. * smiles*

Jeevika and Viren also go downstairs to have breakfast.

Around 8am

The dining room

Manvi: Maaa please I don't want to eat this laado everyday.. It makes me sick
Vanshika: Beta you have to eat them.. It will give you strength.
Manvi starts to eat it while making funny faces.
Dhruv: MaanuJi stop making faces and eat like a good Adult. Mummy says good babies finish their food without complaining and making faces.
Manvi just smiles with her mouth stuffed with laado.
Manvi (MaanuJi.. Why is this Dhruv calling me with that name? Oh yes.. Virat must have taught him)
Manvi looks at Virat and gives him a evil look.
Virat ( Virat beta ready ho ja.. ManviJi ka fuze Gaya)

Everyone finishes breakfast and are sitting in the lounge because its Sunday.

Manvi is just sitting on the sofa and doing her breathing exercise. Virat and Dhruv are having a fist fight while Kadambari, Vanshika and Swamini are chatting about food recipes. Dadaji, Inder and Shlok are playing chess. Viren is reading newspaper and Jeevika is sitting on the swing.

Jeevika: Ouuccch! * moans quietly*
There is so much noise that no one hears her.
Jeevika: VirenJi... VirenJi!
Viren looks up and sees Jeevika holding her back. He rushes to help her.
Viren: Kya Hua Jeevika?
Jeevika: The back pain is not bearable again.. I can't even sit.. Ouuccch!
Viren scoops her in his arms. Everyone looks and rush towards them.
Vanshika: Kya Hua beta? * tensed*
Viren: Back pain again.. I'll take her upstairs and apply the balm prescribed by Dr Madhu. Don't worry.
Saying this Viren takes Jeevika upstairs.

Dhruv runs and hugs Manvi.
Dhruv: Maanu Masi Is my Mummy okay? * hugs her tightly*
Manvi goes down on her knees and holds him tightly.
Manvi: Yes your mummy is fine. She will come downstairs very soon. Okay? * cups his face*
Dhruv: Are you sure?
Manvi: Yes Bacha.. Now smile or I'll have to tickle Dhruvie
Dhruv smiles.
Virat starts the fist fight with him to distract his mind.

Viren places Jeevika on the bed.
Jeevika: Ouuuch..
Viren: Jeevika don't worry.. Once I apply the balm you will be fine... Just relax.
Viren applies the balm on Jeevika's back.
Jeevika: Thank you VirenJi.. Feel better already.
Viren: That's good.. You take rest. You are not putting any strain on your back now.
Jeevika just smiles.

Around 1pm

Viren holds Jeevika's hand and takes her downstairs for lunch.

The Dining room

Dadaji: How are you beta?
Jeevika: better Dadaji.
Viren helps Jeevika to sit on the chair.
Dhruv walks to Jeevika and gets holds of her hand.
Dhruv: Mummy..
Jeevika: Dhruvie..
Dhruv: Mummy..
Jeevika: Yes Dhruvie..
Dhruv: Mummy why are you ill? * upset*
Jeevika: Im fine Bacha... Now be a good baby and smile and sit down.
Everyone has their lunch quietly.

Around 6pm

Everyone is in the garden.
Viren and Jeevika are walking around the garden.
Dadaji, inder and Shlok are teaching Dhruv chess.
Swamini, Vanshika and Kadambari are playing snakes and ladders.
Manvi is sitting on a swing while Virat is pushing her swing.

Jeevika rests her head on Viren's arm; Viren immediately places his arm around her.
Viren: Why are you so quiet today?
Jeevika: Just listening to your heart beat * giggles*
Viren sighs.
Viren: Waise Jeevika.. You know after 3 or 4 years.. Not now.. Should we have another baby?
Jeevika is shocked and looks at him.
Jeevika: VirenJi.. Are you serious? * shocked*
Viren: Yes.. We should minimum have
4 children.. Or more.. * winks and comes close to her*
Jeevika: Accha Ji.. So more than 4 children.. Right?
Viren: Right
Jeevika: have you gone mad VirenJi.. The labour pains and this pregnancy. It's not a joke! You try getting pregnant.
Viren: I won't mind. * winks*
Jeevika: Sshhh stop this besharam talk.. The two little ones are here too..
Viren: Let them hear too.. They will know our plans in advance. * laughs*
Jeevika: Virenji.. * embarrassed*

Manvi: Pati dev.. What happened to you? Why is the swing so slow?
Virat: Sorry MadamJi.. I forgot. Bandaria * sticks his tongue out*
Manvi: stop sticking your tongue out at me! * smiles*
Virat ( What the hell.. How did she know? Bandaria. I hope the baby is not a bandaria warna my whole life will be hell)


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Kays94 IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 4:42pm | IP Logged
OMG What a fabulous update!!!!

I am sooo glad your continuing this story, it really brightens up my day and I can never get enough of it. You know how to describe everything so perfectly that it makes me want to read this over and over again Big smile I really love the cute nicknames and I love both the couple sin your story, its just way over amazing. I have no words for you. Thanks for continuing and I can't wait to read more of your updates Tongue

Edited by Kays94 - 30 January 2013 at 5:09pm

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maria_awan IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 4:53pm | IP Logged
They r so cute dear thanks4 updating

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x.Henna.x Goldie

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
Awhhh, Smile
This is really good.

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 9:31pm | IP Logged
Fabulous update ! You have to continue now for sure !!

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Kanwal_chohan IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 30 January 2013 at 9:41pm | IP Logged
Wow yaar I'm so happy you update
Amazing update loved it to the core
Hope you do continue

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