Originally posted by: sweetdollashitaRes
unresyayayayyayaa first one to commentfinally got an update after so long n thanks for making it long🤗what to say about this part...😛it was freaking out of this world update...👏i'mliterally speechless after reading it...it was just mindboggling...mother son bond was just perfect...loved their relation n mostly love the way how you portray it...👏i was laughing throughout it 🤣n was in aweee after reading every line...it was just beyond words...dhruv complained to jeevika about viren n virat was damm cute😃when dhruv asked jeevika about her stomach i was like😆it was sooo amazing when he placed his hand on her stomach n ask the babies not to trouble his mom...😊Dhruv: Yaaay.. That means I will have four babies calling me Bhaiya...Dhruv: If Mumma has two babies then Maanu Maasi you also have two babies so total is...four babies..these lines were sooo adorable...virika scene in bedroom was outstanding🤣viren is thinking of having 4 babies awww poor jeevika.😆loved the morning scene of dhruv. viren n virat n vvbros convo was sooo emotional...viren trying to make dhruv ready 😃...as a whole it was worth waiting for this update...continue soon dear...🤗
Originally posted by: Charucrazyres
unres
2nd yaaayyayyy
Victory Dance lalalalala ... lol
So cuteee
Dhruvieee is going to be a bhaiya soon :D
Protective brother* ;)
4-4 Babies calling him bhaiya :P
Virika planning for another baby in a few years hahah Poor Jeevika :P
Cuteeely awesum update <3
Just love it...
Getting dhruv ready phewww better Viren learn it coz he'll be handling 3-3 babied in a few months :Pheheh
When r we expecting the next update huh?
Originally posted by: kryanvirika05
OMG THIS IS AWSOME!!!!i cant type properly coz im still lauging at dhruv!!!!!I LOVE HIMM!!!! everytime he comes on i have a massive smile on my face!!!HE IS SO CUTE!!And viren is so naughty!!4 kids! LOOOL!!!My stomach is hurting from all that laughing! and you write so well that i can actually imagine everything!!!CONTINUE SOON!!
Originally posted by: x.Henna.xWOOOHOOO!
Awhh I love the bit between Jeevika and Dhruv bit and Jeevika telling him about the babies and Dhruv calling his dad and Virat bad boys and asking his mum to puish them if they did it again and i really loved the bit when Dhruv thought his masi also had two babies 😊
I really wish I could pull Dhruv's cheeks, he just tooo cuteee! 😃
I love how Jeevika was so busy, she didn't hear what Viren was asking and kept replying with hmm, 😆
I loved the VV bros talk.
Amazing update!!!
Originally posted by: Sweety1234556Part 54!
First of all,I love your story! U r an amazing writer!The update was superb!!Everything was so cute!Love how u show virika and their cute moments with dhruv!Jeevika singing and dancing and viren was listening to her was soo sweet!Virat and viren teasing dhruv😆Jeevika talking to her babies😃Aewsome!😊
Originally posted by: Kays94RESERVED!!!
I NEED TO GIVE A VERY VERY LONG COMMENT SOON😆okay, let me start off with saying that thank you so so so so so much for this long update and treat! I cannot begin to tell you how you're stories release my stress. I read them every time I take a break from studying and they motivate me to get back to studying so I can come back and read more. Like literally when I have nothing better to do, I reread this entire story from the very beginning! I cannot get enough of every update of yours. You really have the talent of making Virika so special and unique in your writing, so fabulous job👏i will come back and write more because you want a very long comment and i shall give you one ...I'M BACK!!!! YEAH SO PLEASE EXPLAIN TO ME HOW YOU ARE SO BRILLIANT???okay firstly Dhruv's and Jeevika's relationship is like to die for! they have such a great understanding that its so damn adorable! The way he loves hs mom and is so worried for her and tells his little siblings not to bug his mommy, you should got me emotionalThen the way Dhruv tells Manvi he's going to be a big brother, and he assumes 4 little sibling are coming, omfg soo funny😆Then the way you show Viren explaining to Virat and consoling him, just awww!!! Viren truly is so amazing. I fall in love with him more and more as I keep rereading your story! Then him and Dhruv are like the best, its hilarious seeing him handle Dhruv! I really hope you do add more funny scenes between the father-son duo, its just bloody amazing! Thank you for an amazing update, and I know you might say no but its worth a try😭So please update earlier if you CAN! My life would be just perfect, thanksss!!!!
Originally posted by: 2189mansiHey anika, finally ur back wid updates of this story. M so so so happy..:-)
I read all the way from part 47 to 55. And must say hw nicely the story is flowing bt i am very very sad angry and disappointed. U updated so many chapters and not even a single pm.
Incase u plan not to send pm to all the people on ur list atleast send it to those who has liked or commented on the story. U noe i was so disheartened wen u had decided to stop writin this story and i am happy dat ur finally back wid a bang..yipee;-) :p
Neways getting back to the story..dhruv is so cute naughty and adorable. I jus love him <3 and yipee finally all goin to hrishikesh.
Continue soon and pm if poss.
Originally posted by: -Anika-
WOOOW 😃
Thank you thank you thank you!
Your comments are a treat to read... They kind off motivate me to write more!
Love it!!!!!!
Love 🤗 ❤️ 🤗
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