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Hey Ani,
Its been a long time actuallyt I was busy with my exams!
Anyways the track has gone a bit too much ahead! But no worries I have updated myself! You are a superb writer and you make Virika cuter by the day!
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Hey Ani,
Its been a long time actuallyt I was busy with my exams!
Anyways the track has gone a bit too much ahead! But no worries I have updated myself! You are a superb writer and you make Virika cuter by the day!
Please PM me regularly and update soon, waiting for it!



Hey Tavishi
I hope your exams went well. Thank you so much babes... I'm updating in a few minutes 😊 And I'll Surely PM you too
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Hello Lovely People 😃
Sorry for the delay guys... I have become really lazy nowadays   ðŸ˜‰
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Part 43:

According to this FF:
Viren and Jeevika have been married for nearly 2 years... Their marriage took place in December 2009.
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November 2012
Around 9.30pm

Dadaji, Beeji, Swamini, Vanshika, the Chachus and the Chachis are all discussing about the Roka; the people to invite, preparation. They are also preparing for the Diwali Celebration in two days. They all in the Main hall. Bade Beeji is in the guest room resting.
Jeevika and Viren are in their Room. Virat and Manvi are in their Rooms.
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Viren and Jeevika's Room...

Jeevika is in the Bathroom...
Viren is busy looking at some files about the cases lined up for him. He is reading them and noting things in key points to help him.
Jeevika comes out of the bathroom and looks at Viren and smiles. While looking at him she walks towards their bed. Suddenly she trips and yells.. Viren looks up and sees Jeevika has fallen on the bed. Viren rushes towards her..
Viren: Jeeevikaaa...* helps her sit on the bed*
Jeevika: VirenJi.. I'm fine.. * shuts her eyes*
Viren: Jeevika.. What fine? How did you land on the bed like that? Please I .. What if you hurt yourself?
Jeevika: Calm Down VirenJi.. I'm fine. Just felt a bit of a pain because I fell on my stomach.. I'm perfectly fine now and so is the baby.. * touches her stomach*
Viren: Jeevika.. You have to be more careful.. God forbid what would happen if you didn't land on the bed.. * hugs her* Oh My God... Jeevika.. Look after yourself especially these three months during the pregnancy.. You have to be more careful.
Jeevika: I know VirenJi... I promise I'll be more careful.. Please don't become so tensed..
Viren: What can I do... I Love my MadamJi and baby too much.. * hugs her even more tightly*
Jeevika laughs...
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Manvi's room

Manvi is tossing and turning on the bed; she is unable to sleep.
Manvi: Ugggh.. Why! All this is happening because of Virat.. Stupid Chep... * covers herself with blanket*
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Virat's Room..

Virat is sleeping peaceful. He couldn't sleep well last night due to his and Manvi's relationship approval from Chaudhary Family.
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Manvi's Room

Manvi: Ugggh.. * removes the blanket from her face* That's it.. I'm calling Virat.. If I can't sleep.. I won't let him sleep too... * searches for her phone and finds it*
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Virat's phone vibrates.. Virat looks at the name and picks up the call..
Virat: Bolo.. * sleepy voice*
Manvi: Oyeeekumbhkaran.. Wake up!
Virat: Maanviii... Please let me sleep.. I couldn't sleep well last night..
Manvi: How can you sleep! When I can't..
Virat: Like I am right now.. * yawns*
Manvi: If you don't wake up.. I'll.. I'll.. Do something..
Virat: Do what.. * laughs*
Manvi: I'll.. I'll.. Come to your room and throw cold water on you.. Yes! I'll do that.. *cheeky smile*
Virat: Stop smiling Manvi.. I know you won't do that!
Manvi: How did you know I am smiling?
Virat: Obviously you won't be crying after that comment... * laughs*
Manvi: Haha very funny..
Virat: Manvi.. I have an idea.. Disturb someone else.. Not me!
Manvi: Mr Virat Singh Vadhera.. I'll come to your room if you don't entertain me on the phone...
Virat: Oye Hoye.. Come to my room.. I'll entertain you even more.. * laughs*
Manvi: Viraaat! Have some shame.. * embarrassed*
Virat: Haaaiyeee mere chamak chaloo Shy ho Gaye..
Manvi: Shy ho mere Jhooti.. After your useless Romance I feel sleepy.. I'm going sleep now..
Virat: Oh Madam.. Watch tomorrow.. Im going to make you regret those words.. * cheeky smile*
Manvi: Wow I'm scared!
Virat: Oh darling... You will be when I come near you and..
Manvi: And.. And do what? * scared*
Virat: Wait till tomorrow.. * grins*
Anyways Good night Love.. Sleep well.. We are going to have Fun tomorrow..Can't wait..
Manvi ends the call..
Manvi: Maanvi.. What are you going to do? * panicky* What will he do? Oh My God.. Crap.. Why did I...Oh nooo...
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Around 6am

Viren places his hand on Jeevika's side but she isn't there.
Viren sits up and looks around the room..no sign of her.
Viren: Jeeevika...
No response..
He gets up from the bed and walks towards the bathroom rubbing his eyes. The bathroom door is a little open. Viren is suprised to see what he saw.
Jeevika is standing in front of the mirror with her top rolled up so that her stomach is visible. She has a measuring tape in her hand and a big grin on her face. Viren opens the door a little and leans on door frame. He has his arms folded and is looking at Jeevika with a smile on his face.
Jeevika: Hmmm... Not bad! So baby you have grown a little. My tummy is coming out a little. Should I measure my waist? Maybe not. Oh my god after a few months.. My Stomach will look like a watermelon.. Sorry Baby.. Not Watermelon..
Viren sighs and Jeevika looks towards the door and sees Viren looking at her. Jeevika gets conscious and pulls her top down.
Jeevika: VirenJi.. When did you come? Well actually I was... * looks down on the floor embarrassed*
Viren walks towards her and hugs her from behind...
Viren: So Madam... I saw what you were doing.. * smiles*
Jeevika looks up and sees him through the Mirror..
Jeevika: Actually.. * shy*
Viren: You weren't this shy even on our first night..
* laughs*
Jeevika: VirenJii...
Viren: So JeeevikaJi.. I saw you Tummy is coming out a little .. * smiles*
Jeevika turns around to face him.
Jeevika: You think so.. *excited*
Viren: Yes... * smiles*
Viren goes on his knees and places his hand on the stomach.
Viren: Good Morning Mera Bacha.. I'm sure you had a good chat with your Mummy and I hope you heard the bit where your mummy called you a watermelon.. * laughs* I know.. Your mummy is very mean.. We will bully her once you come out.. *smiles*
Jeevika has tears in her eyes. Viren gets up and looks at Jeevika.
Viren: Jeevika.. * cups her face* Are you okay? I'm sorry.. I didn't..
Jeevika: VirenJi.. Why are you so perfect? * tears roll down her eyes*
Viren: Jeeevika.. Oh noo... Please don't cry..
Jeevika: VirenJi... You are a Perfect son, Perfect brother, Perfect Brother-in-law, Perfect Husband and Now Perfect Father.. I'm so lucky to have.. * tears roll down her cheeks*
Viren: MadamJi... If you become soEmotional.. The baby will become unhappy.. The baby will say.. Why is my Mummy crying? Did I do something to her? I have a benefit from this... The baby will be on my side...
Jeevika looks at him and smiles lightly..
Viren: MadamJi... At least give us a big smile.. * smiles*
Jeevika grins..
Virens hugs Jeevika...
Viren: Love you so much.. * kisses her shoulder*
Jeevika: Love you tooo...
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Around 6.30am

Virat's alarm goes off...
Virat: Yes...had a good sleep.. * stretches his arms* Manvi get ready.. * grins*
Virat goes to the Bathroom.
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Manvi's Room

Manvi's Alarm goes off too...
Manvi: Oh God.. ShivJi... Please Help me or rather protect me from Virat.. stupid chep... Uggghhh.. Manvi.. Let's skip breakfast; that way you won't have to face him.. No ways I'm very hungry.. So I have to eat.. ShivJi... Pleaseee... Help me... Give Virat Ghajini memory for a day. Help ShivJiii...
Manvi walks to the bathroom..

Ani