Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Behnas and Bhaiyas FF. Thread 1!! - Page 25

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Posted: 12 years ago
great part but short...!!
It was excellent..:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
its cute how they are both talking with their brither /sister about their feelings:)
i liked it!!
please continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Wonderful update πŸ‘

very interesting part

thnx for the PM 

Am waiting for your next update 

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow... ani its really interesting good work yar...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
wowww interesting... loved it...now waiting for karva chauth. scenes... 
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww...so cute.lovely update.cntinue soon.and thnx 4 d pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
LOVELY ,FINALLY MAANVI AND VIRAT REALISED THEIR FEELINGS  AND JEEVIKA  AND VIREN ARE TOO GOOD.
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Posted: 12 years ago

lovely update jus saw now that part 18 has been updated , ani tussi sach main great hau heheπŸ˜‰

 
please update fast and sooon!! πŸ˜†πŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
Aww that is so cute I just hope jeevika is like this on the show please PM me when you update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hello Lovely People... πŸ˜ƒ
Thank you for the comments and likes 😊
Silent readers... I hope you are liking the SS πŸ˜‰

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The sentences between the lines represent thoughts of a character..

Part 19:



8pm at dinner table...

Viren and Jeevika sitting together and Manvi and Virat sitting opposite them...

Chachi: Haaiye ni... Tum log kya passing the parcel ki Tara Aapne seat change Kar rahe ho...
Viren: Woh chachi... Just like that...
Everyone smiles...
Jeevika holds Viren's hand under the table... Viren is shocked
Jeevika: Oye Hoye mein marjaawa... * mumbles*
Viren: Please Jeevikaa * whispers*
Manvi: Kuch kaha Jeeju? * looks at Viren while eating*
Viren: Nahi toh...
Jeevika: Soniyooo... * holds his hand tighter*
Viren frees his hand Harshly...
Viren: Phewww...
Virat: Bhai everything okay? * concern*
Viren: Yes yes I'm okay...
Jeevika strokes his thigh and Viren wiggles..
Virat: Bhaaiii... What's wrong?
Viren: Nothing...
Everyone is looking at him now... Viren is embarrassed...
Vanshika: kya hua beta?
Virat: Woh Maa... Bhai is wiggling... * smiles*
Vanshika: Tum Teek ho Na beta?
* concern*
Jeevika: Yes VirenJi aap Teek hai Na? * cheeky smile*
Viren just nodes and gives jeevika a ill get you back for this expression...

Swamini: Kadambari, Vanshika, Jeevika aur Manvi hum tumse Baat Karna chate hai about tomorrow so after dinner please come to my room...
Virat looks at manvi and They smile at each other...
Virat ( This is your first Karwa chauth due to my prank... Maybe next year you will be do it truly for me... )
Manvi ( Virat I'm doing this for you but I won't let you know about it)

Viren: Bade Maa please let us know the plans too...
Swamini: Us?
Viren: Me and Virat...
Swamini: Viraaat... Are you fasting too? * shocked*
Virat: Jee Bua... Just giving Bhai company this year
* embarrassed *
Swamini: That's strange in a way but good... How about you guys cometoo... There are some changes to plans from last year...
Virat and Viren : Okay... * smiling *

Everyone finish dinner...

Swamini's room

Swamini: Vanshika tum ne Sargi toh tyaar ki hai Na?
Vanshika: Ji Didi...
Swamini: Good...
Kadambari: I'm toh very excited... Kal mera get up kuch hatke hai...
Virat: Haaaiyeee Chachi... At least tell me...
Kadambari: Kajol from Kabhi khushi kabhi Gham
* whispers in Virat's ear*
Virat: Oye Hoye Chachi... Kya Baat hai...
Everyone is just smiling at this exchange...
Swamini: So everyone come downstairs by 4 am to eat before sunrise...Teek hai?
Everyone nodes... Manvi is shocked...
Manvi: Bua Ji so early?
Swamini: Yes Manvi... I'm sure Jeevika will wake you up
* smiles*
Jeevika: Ji bua Ji... Don't worry...
Swamini: Viren and Virat you too have to come down by maybe 5... I'm being nice to you two..
Virat: Seriously... Okay Bua...
Viren: Sure Bade Maa...

Viren and Virat leave whereas the other are still in the room discussing about tomorrow...

Virat: Greaaat... 5am..
Viren just smiles...
Virat: Seriously Bhai... How have you been doing it? I mean firstly getting up so early then having food and to top it all not eating for the whole day...
Viren: Mere Bhai.. To tell you the truth I do it truly because I love Jeevika and if she is staying hungry and fasting for my long life then why can't I do the same.. Think of it like this and trust me you won't feel like eating or rather won't even think about food...
Virat: Okay Bhai I'll try... I don't know Bhai... Sometimes I think you know all the women in the world must be really strong.. I'm not being biased or anything but I mean starting from following all the hard rituals, fasting, the labour pains, looking after the whole family... The list goes on Bhai.. I mean seriously they all have a superman's power

Viren Laughs
Viren: I know they are way more stronger than us... Mentally and physically..
Virat: Please Bhai do me a favour and wake me up in the morning... I don't trust my alarm in the mornings
Viren: Sure mere Bhai... Now go to sleep so that you are ready for tomorrow... Good luck and sleep well...
Virat: Good night Bhai...
Viren heads to his room and so does Virat.

Everyone leaves Swamini's room and head towards their room...

Manvi: Jeeevika Di.. Wake me up in the morning..
Jeevika: Maanuu Yes I'll wake you up.. Mannu listen.. Are you sure you want to do this fast? I don't want you to get weak and faint...* concern*
Manvi: Di this time I'm mentally and physically prepared...
Jeevika: Mere Maanu tu kitne bade hogaya hai... I know you are doing this for Virat.. * smiles*
Manvi: Dii... How did you know?
* shocked*
Jeevika: I know you better than yourself...
Jeevika and Manvi: Aaker Behen hai hum khoon ka rishta hai Humara.. * both laugh together*
Jeevika: Chal Good night... And I'll wake you up...
Manvi: Good night Di...

They both head towards their room...

Manvi in the guest room...
Manvi: Shiv Ji thank you for making me realise I like Virat... Please take care of me tomorrow... You know I'm doing this for my Chep...Chalo Shiv Ji Good night...

Virat's Room
Virat: Dude Good luck for tomorrow... God look after me... I know you will because Im doing this for Manvi...

Jeevika enters the room and finds Viren reading a book on their bed...
Jeevika: You are not asleep yet...
Viren: I was just waiting for you...
Jeevika: waiting for me..?
Viren gets up and takes few steps towards her
Viren: So.. You think you can control me and embarrass me in front of everyone..
Jeevika realises what he is saying... And she walks towards him. Viren is shocked...
Viren ( Ab yeh kya.. Jeevika should be walking away from me but right now she is approaching me)
Jeevika has her hands on her hips.
Viren has a shocked and scared expression..
Viren: Dekho..mein.. mein... Dekho Jeevika... I didn't mean to say...
Jeevika: Say what? * raises her eye brows*
Viren: Dekho Jeevika I'm going sleep.. I have to... I mean we have to get up early in the morning...
Viren turns around and walks towards their bed... But suddenly stop...
Jeevika:
* * *Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maanu
Mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye * * *
Viren turns around and sees Jeevika walking towards him while singing this...
Jeevika:
* * *Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta
Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yahi marna issi ke liye * * *
She reaches Viren while singing this... Viren is smiling... Jeevika touches his cheeks and ends up pulling it... Viren grins... Jeevika ruffles his hair and Viren just shuts his eyes and listens to her singing.. Jeevika hugs him while singing and Viren hugs her back...
Jeevika:
* * *Kehte hain khuda ne iss jahan mein sabhi ke liye
Kisi na kisi ko hai banaya har kisi ke liye * * *
Jeevika ends the hug while saying this and caresses his face...

Viren: Waah Waah JeevikaJi... Nicely sung...
Jeevika: Thank You Pati Ji

They both go to sleep...


Guys Listen to the Song called Raabta (Kehte hain khuda ne) from Agent Vinod.. It's an amazing song!

Ani