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For people who are crying buckets of water... (Page 2)

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
Originally posted by purvimehta


LOL
pichli kavita zara jyaada hi sad ho gayi. maine apne aap se waada kiya hai aur kuch forum wasiyon se bhi ke mein likhti rahungi jab tak Siddhi hosh mein nahin aa jaati. shaayad meri taklif sunke hi bechari jaa jaaye. Cant see Kunal crying anymore...LOLLOL. I know the above dialogue is like nach basanti nach...jab tak tu nachegi...iski saas chalegiLOLLOLROFL. what to do...I have lost it, so please bare with me..

Meri aankhon ke yeh labs...tu samaj nahin paayi..
jo kaha karti hai yeh tujhse...tu sunn nahin paayi.
Khaamosh ehsaas aur bheegi tanhaai hai inmein..
teri yaad mein barasti in aankhon ko, tu padh nahin paayi.
Yun to abb khamosh rehne ki aadat hai inhe..
Samaj sakho to fir bhi bahut kuch kehti hai yeh..
Kaun kehta hai ki roti hai yeh...
rota to mera dil hai...buss kehti hai yeh...
Panabta hai dard mera inmein, sadiyon se abb
aur veeran dil ki tamannaein ..
chalkati hain yeh aankhein...CryCry

For all you lovely people out there...mere gum mein shaamil hona zaroori na samajhna
                                                                    Zinda hoon mein abb bhi, mujhe mara hua mat samajhna..LOLLOL
Thankyou all for reading it.
LOL

Well said - I know action speaks louder than words but it is important for the words to be spoken most  of the times so that MU does not occur -

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 9:03am | IP Logged
Hey,Purvi... awesome poetry by you again...
Really loved reading it & as usual would again like to contribute a bit to your creativity..

Guess, I can't hide my inner shayar on reading your posts... LOL

Here are my lines on Kunal's present state:
"Geele kagaz ki tarah hai zindigi apni,
Koi likhta bhi nahi, koi jalata bhi nahi,
Is kdr akele ho gaye hai hum akjal,
Koi satata bhi nahi,koi manata bhi nahi.."

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 1:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sks18

Hey,Purvi... awesome poetry by you again...
Really loved reading it & as usual would again like to contribute a bit to your creativity..

Guess, I can't hide my inner shayar on reading your posts... LOL

Here are my lines on Kunal's present state:
"Geele kagaz ki tarah hai zindigi apni,
Koi likhta bhi nahi, koi jalata bhi nahi,
Is kdr akele ho gaye hai hum akjal,
Koi satata bhi nahi,koi manata bhi nahi.."


Haye Haye...maar hi daloge..LOL.
shaayri sunke aapki...hum shaayri bhool gaye.
aise likha kuch aapne...
charcha hua buss aapka...aur log humein bhool gaye...LOLLOL

Sorry yaar...iskaa meter zara thik se baitha nahin...do minute mein buss yahi likh paayiWink



Edited by purvimehta - 05 April 2012 at 3:11pm

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Thank you once again guys...keep reading, keep liking ...so that it inspires me to write more and more...
aur zaroori nahi appreciate hi karo.
agaar galti ho hamaari...to hak se kaan bhi marodaa karoLOLLOL

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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 1:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Indomitable

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Originally posted by purvimehta


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pichli kavita zara jyaada hi sad ho gayi. maine apne aap se waada kiya hai aur kuch forum wasiyon se bhi ke mein likhti rahungi jab tak Siddhi hosh mein nahin aa jaati. shaayad meri taklif sunke hi bechari jaa jaaye. Cant see Kunal crying anymore...LOLLOL. I know the above dialogue is like nach basanti nach...jab tak tu nachegi...iski saas chalegiLOLLOLROFL. what to do...I have lost it, so please bare with me..

Meri aankhon ke yeh labs...tu samaj nahin paayi..
jo kaha karti hai yeh tujhse...tu sunn nahin paayi.
Khaamosh ehsaas aur bheegi tanhaai hai inmein..
teri yaad mein barasti in aankhon ko, tu padh nahin paayi.
Yun to abb khamosh rehne ki aadat hai inhe..
Samaj sakho to fir bhi bahut kuch kehti hai yeh..
Kaun kehta hai ki roti hai yeh...
rota to mera dil hai...buss kehti hai yeh...
Panabta hai dard mera inmein, sadiyon se abb
aur veeran dil ki tamannaein ..
chalkati hain yeh aankhein...CryCry

For all you lovely people out there...mere gum mein shaamil hona zaroori na samajhna
                                                                    Zinda hoon mein abb bhi, mujhe mara hua mat samajhna..LOLLOL
Thankyou all for reading it.
LOL

Hey are you a writer? if so you are suppose to be in entertainment industry where your talent can be properly utilized. Really Hats off to you poetry.ClapStarThumbs Up


Thank you yaar...its very flattering, but industry mujhe bardasht nahin kar paayegi aur mein industry ko bardaasht nahin kar paaungiLOLLOLLOL. its a very amateur writing. Its just all you people on the forum have been very kind to me and my writingWink
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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 9:44pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by purvimehta

[QUOTE=sks18]Hey,Purvi... awesome poetry by you again...
Really loved reading it & as usual would again like to contribute a bit to your creativity..

Guess, I can't hide my inner shayar on reading your posts... LOL

Here are my lines on Kunal's present state:
"Geele kagaz ki tarah hai zindigi apni,
Koi likhta bhi nahi, koi jalata bhi nahi,
Is kdr akele ho gaye hai hum akjal,
Koi satata bhi nahi,koi manata bhi nahi.."


<font color="#FF0000">Haye Haye...maar hi daloge..LOL.
shaayri sunke aapki...hum shaayri bhool gaye.
aise likha kuch aapne...
charcha hua buss aapka...aur log humein bhool gaye...LOLLOL

Sorry yaar...iskaa meter zara thik se baitha nahin...do minute mein buss yahi likh paayiWink
</font

@Purvi: Ha ha...I liked your above lines even though you wrote them in 2 miniutes (and you mostly praised my writing in them... ;-) )
This prooves that you really are a powerful writer...

Guess, mere jaise ordinary poets ka bhi kuch bhala ho jayega aapke posts se... LOL




Edited by sks18 - 05 April 2012 at 9:55pm
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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sks18

Originally posted by purvimehta

[QUOTE=sks18]Hey,Purvi... awesome poetry by you again...
Really loved reading it & as usual would again like to contribute a bit to your creativity..

Guess, I can't hide my inner shayar on reading your posts... LOL

Here are my lines on Kunal's present state:
"Geele kagaz ki tarah hai zindigi apni,
Koi likhta bhi nahi, koi jalata bhi nahi,
Is kdr akele ho gaye hai hum akjal,
Koi satata bhi nahi,koi manata bhi nahi.."


<font color="#FF0000">Haye Haye...maar hi daloge..LOL.
shaayri sunke aapki...hum shaayri bhool gaye.
aise likha kuch aapne...
charcha hua buss aapka...aur log humein bhool gaye...LOLLOL

Sorry yaar...iskaa meter zara thik se baitha nahin...do minute mein buss yahi likh paayiWink
</font

@Purvi: Ha ha...I liked your above lines even though you wrote them in 2 miniutes (and you mostly praised my writing in them... ;-) )
This prooves that you really are a powerful writer...

Guess, mere jaise ordinary poets ka bhi kuch bhala ho jayega aapke posts se... LOL




No art is ordinary ...yaar.. and whatever you wrote is mindblowing, no way can it be termed as ordinary...Clap

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 12:33am | IP Logged
Thanks,Purvi!! Big smile

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