Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

FF The moments thing falling apart. (Page 2)

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Chapter 4:

"Meri lovely Biji, you know that I have been so fed up in this hospital bed. It has been past 4 days I have not been out of this hospital room. Please Biji can talk di and convince her for me to go for little. Be a little naughty like the all days." Biji smiles, and thinks to herself "I understand my beta how you feeling, but I am helpless? My dear." The helpless look Maanvi understood her Biji silence, when door open. Look who it was no other then Maanvi partner the one and only Virat [Virat is Viren kid brother and Maanvi best friend.] That brought the biggest smile on Maanvi face as she knew he was the only that could convince Biji and Jeevika to let Maanvi go out for a bit. Virat took blessing from Biji and say's "Biji let this Monkey go out for a bit, she give a little peace and I promise that taken the Doctor Manan permission." Biji and Jeevika smiles, and Biji "Ok beta that fine, but have some thing to eat first". Maanvi has big smiles on face and expression on voice says "Thanks Partner" in Virat ears, and Virat smiles "Any time partner".

Jeevika was notice all this and think to herself "Is there really something going between my Mannu and devar. I think it time, that I had word with them. Once Mannu treatment complete and she completely cured." Everyone had breakfast Maanvi has had quick shower, then she asked Jeevika "Di can you my hair after a long time, I'm going out and I want look good." Jeevika smiles and says "No problem Maanu, but  is this for you going out in a while or some other reason." Maanvi look confuse and wonder what Jeevika talking about, she reply "Di what you talking about." Jeevika smiles after looking at Maanvi faces, and say's "No I mean, are dressing up for Virat." Maanvi laugh and say's "Are you kidding me for that Monkey, have you look at him. He so ahhh" Jeevika has smiles on faces "My devar not that bad looking you know he has some many girl friends".  Maanvi reply and say's " So what as if I care, any way I am dressing up just because I have not been out in while that all di believe me." Jeevike smirk and say's "what ever you say, if you believe then what can I say, any way come here!"

Maanvi sat down on the chair and Jeevika starts to brush Maanvi hair, notices hair fulling more then usual. Then she remembers doctors that's there are few side effects of cemo one which hair fulling. Jeevika get sad and thinks to herself "My Maanu love's her hair, I can not see in this state". Jeevika control herself and try not show feeling to Maanvi.

PS [Next part is based on today episode which was aired, but the difference is how Jeevika deals with the bitter truth of her Mannu illness which will be update tommore.] Good night all.


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wheres the next part??? update soon and PM me Smile

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Chapter 5:

"Mah rani are you ready" Virat said waiting impotently, annoying Maanvi as usual. Then Maanvi reply "Idiot can you wait 5 minute can't you see di nearly done." Maanvi smiles are her did sweetly, and Jeevika smiles then say's "Here you go meri behna your hair down now, happy." While Jeevika really tried hide her feeling saying to herself "Please go give me strength to get through this for Maanvi sake, I can not fall weak now. If fall weak then who will  take care of Maanvi, now I can not be weak as I promise mummy & papa that I will always look after Maanvi."  

Then the door open and it was no other then Viren "Surprise!" That brought the biggest smile on Jeevika smiles, and she say's "App Viren ji, what you doing here!" Viren smiles and take the blessing from Biji, then say's "Jeevika, I have come to see meri pyari saali sibaba." Maanvi smiles and say's "Ah Jiju your so sweet, your the best Jiju in the world." Looking at Maanvi so happy, Jeevika think Maanvi so happy and say's to herself "Please god can you always have Maanvi with a smile on her face, as she full of life. She deserve to be happy, as she always bring a smile on everyone face as she everyone life." Then Virat say's "If Jiju and Sali as finish there greeting, mah rani shall we leave now. Because we need to be back by 1pm for your next treatment if you have forgot." Maanvi get annoyed and say's "Partner what your problem, you always ruining my happiness by reminding me of treatment. Any way let go, sorry Jiju I have to leave." Then quietly say's in Viren "Jiju, I know why you come really came. To take Di out, and have some romance with her isn't that right." Jeevika hear's that and say's "Chup kar, you naughty girl." Then Virat drags Maanvi hands and say's "come on, let's go". Then Maanvi say's "Ok, ok baba I'm coming any way bye Jiju and di see you guys later." Then Virat and Maanvi leave to go out.


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Chapter 6:
Viren notice Jeevika being disturb as the drop Biji back home. Viren say's Biji "Can I please take out Jeevika for lunch before Maanvi next treatment if you don't mind." Biji smile and say's "That fine beta, take Jeevika for lunch. As she need a break as this past week she running around after Maanvi treatment." Then Viren and Jeevika out for lunch. Whilst having lunch Viren asked Jeevika "Jeevu are you okay, I have notice since Maanvi left with Virat you been disturb. Is everything okay." Jeevika has tears in her eye's and say's " You know today when I was brushing Manu hair, I notice a lot hair come out. Which was usual but the I had remembered Dr Manan words that cemo and Radio theory will have the side effects. But this soon I did not realize that. You know Viren ji, Maanu had wake up so many time's as she was sick and she had high fever. I can not see her this state Viren ji." Viren console Jeevika and say's "Hunny I can understand where you coming from, but babe you need be strong for her." To cheer up Jeevika up Viren started telling her about about Chuta Daji Solok [Solok known as Chuta Daji is Viren first cousin, his dad brothers son {his chatu}], how Solok was trying give Viren advise on maths that brought a smiles on Jeevika face's. Whiles Viren thinks to himself "That like my Jeevu, I did not know where the smile had been lost, after finding out about Maanvi illness your smiles just been lost. The smiles was the thing I had fallen in loved with, which I have missed." Viren smiling away in his thoughts, when Jeevika clicks her finger at Viren and say's "what happened viren ji where you lost and what so funny." He smiles and say's "Nothing, I had lost something but I found now."

Jeevika looks confuses and say's "What you talking about Viren ji, I don't understand. Why don't me tell straight up." Then Viren put his arms round Jeevika and say's "My darling Jeevu, I had lost very praise which I had lost but thanks to you darling I found it." Jeevika doe's not have a clue what Viren is talking about and say's "And what that Viren ji." Viren come closes to her and bring Jeevika very closes to him, with this Jeevika get shy and Viren kiss her on chick and say's "Your lovely smile." Jeevika blushes whiles everyone at the restaurant are looking but they do not notices until everyone claps. They both get shy and let go each other as the realize they are romancing in the middle of the restaurant.


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Posted: 05 April 2012 at 5:51pm | IP Logged
Awesomee ! lovin ure ff yah! Virika r sooo damn cuteee!!!  pls update sooon!!!!!
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Its so good.and thnx 4 a quick update.cntinue soon
Amii90 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 06 April 2012 at 12:11am | IP Logged
I just LOVE your work- brilliant ideas penned down beautifully! Looking forward to read more!!! 
indian10 Goldie

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Chapter 7:
Mean while Virat takes Maanvi to her favorite place to Lakshman Jhula [that a famous bridge in Rishikesh] that brought tear's to Maanvi eye's which Virat had notice he said "Kya hua Maanvi, why you crying?" When Maanvi smile's and say's "You know Virat me and di since we where kids we use come here every day and make a wish. Do you know what that wish was?" Virat look confuse and reply "Kya?". Then Maanvi say's "That we made promise that we will never leave each other. But today I feel that I am betraying di and leaving her to face the world by herself. You know Virat I put a brave front on to fool people, but deep inside I am scared what if tommore something happened to me. How will my di live without me? You I see the fever in di eyes every day that she might loss me. " Virat comforts Maanvi and give her hug, then reply "Kuch nai ho gaya tume, I promise you Maanvi I won't let any thing happened to you. I make sure your promise is fully to your di and that my promise to you." Maanvi and Virat give each other tight hug not realize what the doing at the time, as soon they realize they get embarrassed and think's to them self "What just happened there." 

Then Maanvi break the ice and say's "Kya Partner, you to are doing this emotional drama. Please Partner stop this it doe's not suit you." Then Maanvi see Dabu and the kid's [Dabu is Maanvi fathers, brother, son so basically her chacha son. So that Maanvi first consin.] Then Maanvi scream's "Aye Debe" Maanvi call's him that for fun all the time. Dabu and the kids get happy, and run to Maanvi "Maanvi di, app. What you doing here? Aren't you suppose be in hospital?" Then Maanvi reply "Thank's to Partner Biji and Jeevika agreed to let me out for a bit. Any way leave that tell me the latest gossip Mera bhai." Then Dabu tell Maanvi what been happening and Maanvi is laughing away. Seeing this Virat keep looking and Maanvi and think to himself "I feel so happy when see Maanvi smile, I feel so sad when she is sad. Why do I always have on my mind what happening to me. Kya!" Virat has puzzle look on his face and think to himself "Who can help me get the answer? Let me think?" After Virat think to himself for a while he finds the answer "Bhai, yes he be able advise me why feeling like this."

But the after while Maanvi start's to laugh a lot, the all of a sudden she start feel dizzy and weak, then fall on the floor. Everyone panic and then Virat take her on his shoulder and put her in the car, and drive straight to the hospital. 

Edited by leena2311 - 06 April 2012 at 3:46pm

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