hey there girl
I thought of braving it out and commenting on another fic I follow
So here goes. Anyway this is besides the point but Dex does end up with Rachel right?
Cause I wanted to know
. Actually don't tell me it would ruin the suspense of your fic
Why did I ask?
Lets just forget it! And focus on your fic here:
Chapter 1 and 2:
She was keying his car?
no she wasn't it was her sister
and then he thought it was her?
his little sister is really mischievious isn't she?
but he just loves khush khush's arms doesn't he? and cornering her. Man this man got issues
He opens her zip?
chi chi Arnav bitwa that is absolutely terrible! how could he?
I mean that is just NO!
and even if it is Arnav thats not on
but having said that, its an excellent potrayal of his character, it shows so much which is I bet what you wanted to achieve?
and thats good right? but she cut herself too? and then not admiting it or what happened, Khush Khush is a silent pain-er meaning she doesn't make her grief known, is that right about her?
And now in his house, this man has a thing for manhandeling people! really. But once again it is an excellent potrayal of what he is like, it shows his 'mean' element in a way. One shade of many
And isn't Arnav good at hiding things?
Chapter 3 & 4:
WHO IS THE CREEP?
Oh no khush khush is hurt naa? real bad
why do I get the feeling this guy is not going to be in jail for long
keep him there! Stupid pedo! I bet he is one, are we allowed to use pedo on IF?
oh well, I said it
. Bua-ji seems nice here
. UH-OH! TRASH? arnav loves picking on her doesn't he?
same old same old. And khushi is as fiery as ever, didn't she turn around and punch the tire
hahaha! that cracked me up! SHES NAKED?
woah! intense, in his shirt?
this is going to be interesting. Looks like Arnav can't afford en-suite showers anymore
. OMG IS HE GOING TO SEE HER NAKED?
Chapter 5 & 6:
he saw her! woop ti doo
why I am happy is beyond me, but maybe it will begin the tension between the two
what am I saying there already is tension, it would bring more tension
the 's' tension that is. I can't say it the word is forbidden on I-F << hopefully that should help you figure it out! Like JUSTIN BIBER GIRL FANS!
aww he finds her adorble! <3 that so cute
And I can just imagine him in a suit
so hot! I like rahul! <3 he seems like the easy go going kinda guys! thats a nice touch to the fic, considering Arnie is so full of hot steam
Aryan does not talk much does he?
they are drunk?
falling in love?
OMG! I am squeeling Reya! you have no idea, I can't wait for this. Really. And Simran take your claws of my man! yes he is mine! stupid simran! kwack? hahaha
Chapter 7 & 8:
Yes they are actually doing it! *squeels* now I am over over joyed!
AWW SHE SLEPT ON HIM! that soo sweet, its like they are comfortable with each other without even realising it, but they will
and Arnav is already jealous! boy I am really really happy
really, wait Arnav why are you still in the shower?
another shade of him eh? too many shades? the last line is jsut a killer
HE SAW HER FULLY NAKED NOW?
SHITNESS! I would've died to shame! but been like its Arnav!
Family jewels eh?
isn't that funny! and he wants to show her the family jewels? isn't someone getting ahead of themselves?
He liked the slap? aww! well love/lust is in the airr!
Yeah Aryan does not say much
but thats okay. Rahul is enough
THE LAST DIALOGUE! OHMYGOD! HE DARED?
thats soo cute! I don't know why I find it cute XD but its just the teasing? that is adorable, its like they are that comfortable with each other to actually tease like that!
OKAY! I NEED TO GO EAT, but I will be back to comment on the rest of them!
Chapter 9 & 10 & 11:
PERVERTS! they are both PERVERTS!
wait there is a scar? NOOO ITS THAT PEDO isn't it? stupid pedo...stupid stupid pedo! OOO someone has got mooves like jagger eh? loving it, there is an elegance to khushi as well as a fiery spirt which I love! who was Arnav talking to? ohh no! he seems stressed
oh well I'm sure Khushems will help him out! Ohmygod that raj guys is a peeerrrvveerrtt I would've kicked him in his family jewels! stupid
but ARNAV! oh Arnav why so protective? see a new shade! << I AM SOO RIGHHT!
but thats good?
and also they kiss! that is so cute
and hot! and its and and its just sooo yeah its hot
I love it, but Arnav will probably think she has done it to provoke him? or anything else? just like the naked incidence
but thats so typical arnav :( OH WELL! can't wait to see the majnu-ness which may not be soon but i look forward to it,
Please do pm me, I will give lamba lamba comments I promise