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The Bet: Thread 3 {Jun. 19 - Pg. 113 NEW!!} (Page 18)

-Devanshi- Goldie

Joined: 10 September 2011
Posts: 1701

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
SillyWoohoo!!!what an update!!!superb!!Clap
From the first to the last sentence...absolutely fabulous!!
What i loved(and i loved a lot of stuff!!!)
1)how khushi saved reihanna's neck for the second time i guess!!!
Though it was for saving the booth too but still it counts!!!Smile

2)the "no you are not"!! Omg!!that is possessiveness now!!! And i loved her reaction...yeah i am..she is staying true to her you cant order me around!!!EmbarrassedDay Dreaming

3)the effect she had on him!!finally an pov from arnav!!I was waiting when he would say this!!!Embarrassed

4)loved how she answered back to would you know?have you kissed guys??poor guy must be sooo embarrassed but he didnt have any business poking his nose and teasing her like that!!!LOL

5)the reaction of mya...she had run away like she had been released from prison!!poor girl...must hve had to probably kiss guys who had never heard of mouthwash!!ROFL

6)ewww...who knew guys named raj could be sooo creepy and desperate!!!but i like him coz without him we wouldnt have "the kiss"!!Hug

7)and finally the last but its never the least!!!
THE KISS!!no no no...sorry..THE TWO KISSES!!you sure know how to reward your readers!!!i was totally expecting an argument after the "you!"...but then i read on and my eyes popped out!!!hahaha..arnav's wish finallly fulfilled!!!actually both of their wishes fulfilled!!loved how he pulled her back as if "i just not done come back!!!"...they didnt even care that everybody was there!!!too good!!and the ultimate reply...why are you such a good kisser...that was the last thing i expected!!i was like what the-!!!!the next chapter is gonna be sooo much fun read!try not to be a devil... dont keep us hanging for the next update now!!im waiting to see reihanna and prctically everyone's reactions!!Dancing
My reaction after reading the update:
Once again...a superb update...i didnt even realize i wrote such a long comment...but it was deserving!!!see...this what you get when you give such awesome updates!!!

P.S:Congrats on your new thread!!!hope you have many such threads for your FFs!!!

Edited by DM1810 - 04 April 2012 at 10:06pm

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ipkkndbestshow Groupbie

Joined: 22 February 2012
Posts: 102

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Luved the was jst as promised!! Jealous Arnav does things that drives everyone crazy..."good kisser"!!

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...manal... IF-Dazzler

Joined: 04 November 2011
Posts: 3088

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 10:08pm | IP Logged
I am still in a trance ! Day Dreaming

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desisweetheart9 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 11 June 2008
Posts: 5781

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM. Congrats on the new thread. Nice update. Wow. 2 kisses. Good that she did not have to kiss Raj.

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mistyrains IF-Dazzler

Joined: 27 January 2012
Posts: 2822

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
Thread 3 , YAY Party
This one was so frigging awesome, jealous-protective Arnav is a treat Clap 

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medha16 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 20 September 2011
Posts: 5169

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 10:37pm | IP Logged
congrats 4 third thread
this maha update was super awesome!!!
ilove seeing a jealous n possessive arnav
n d kissing booth idea was fab though i never imagined khushi to b so daring coming from a modest lower middle class family...
oh god,even arnav is mesmerised by her...he just cant stop kissing herrt!!this was amazing!!
khushis last dialogue was EPIC!!!im actually wondering what reihanas reaction will b to dsee her brother n best frnd kissing away to glory ion public!!!now cant wait 4 next update...continue asap...

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adiya1714 Senior Member

Joined: 20 November 2011
Posts: 763

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 10:39pm | IP Logged
Congrats on the new thread!
Love seeing a jealous arnav:)
Thanks for the pm

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Psychedelic Goldie

Joined: 09 October 2011
Posts: 2140

Posted: 04 April 2012 at 10:46pm | IP Logged
Wow! He kisses her TWICE!! lol

I wanna be kissed by Arnav too!

(Yes, I know he is a fictional character)

But my curiosity will not allow me to rest until I know, first hand, if he kisses as well as KKG claims he does! :P

Thanks for the PM!! :)

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