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The Bet: Thread 3 {Jun. 19 - Pg. 113 NEW!!} - Page 70

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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG OMG OMG !! 
that was an awesome update hun 
the kiss was soo  wow !! i loved it =D 
n everything else was great 2 
do continue soon n thnxx 4 the pm 

p.s : nyc user hun .. its really cute 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Shreya!
This is first of the many comments from my side :) 
To start off with, i was hooked to your other story Fatal Attraction! i read that in your blog and was total Fida over that fiction!it had my 100% attention each time i come online!
Also, pardon me for this, i had no idea about The Bet and each time i saw a new part of this fiction i used to think, damn, if it wasn't for this FF, FA would have been updated!
**ducks the chappals thrown**πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Okay, then i thought to give this a try! You wouldn't believe it, i finished all the chapters back to back! I was hooked, booked , sold for this Fiction! 

The passion in here is so Raw! you can feel it man! 
Reianna, Aryan ,Rahul are so cute and Unique! Awesome!

Arnav steals the show here! his commanding stand on everything is such a turn on!😳
The prologue, i was searching that paragraph in each chapter.. finally it appeared on The Playing Dirty!  It gave me goosebumps! that was one perfect use of pool! πŸ˜‰

And the previous chapter just got better! I read the previous chapter for continuity and still reeling from the awesomeness dripping from it!πŸ˜ƒ
"Do you know what kind of boys go to prom?" He continued sternly. "Boys like Rahul."
^^🀣🀣

I hope he doesn't approve of Prom and Rei and Khu end up going ;) and Arnav follows, of course! Khu's past has kept me keen! 
*calms down*
i'm gonna stop my rambling with an update soon ;) 
Paru
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Posted: 11 years ago
very very loving..
so well written
thanks for PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lol Shreya I loved the update soo much! <3
 
Ahaha Aryan and Rahul in the background were so hilarious. Why doesn't Arnav let them go to prom? Just a quick question btw, does this take place in India? Are there proms in India?
 
Anyways the kiss in the beginning was ☺️ So cute!
 
I loved it (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome very hawt loving the chemistry
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful update... sweet kiss β˜ΊοΈ
rehiana wants to go to prom but arnav didnt allow her for 2 promos already!
hope he allows this time as khushi is not going if rehiana doesnt πŸ˜”
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Posted: 11 years ago
Irresistible attraction, loving it!!! Love the way they can't help clashing, one way or another...
Which reminds me, when will they kiss in fatal attraction? πŸ˜›
Thanks for the pm to yet another great update!! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
great..asr s got a taste of his own medicine
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Posted: 11 years ago
heyyy loved the update...I loved how khushi just blasted arnav...😊

i love ur siggy too!!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
res res res...will unres by tonight :P