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Posted: 11 April 2012 at 8:37am | IP Logged
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glossyglassy Senior Member
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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 4:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by princesspriyart

hiii di ,
1st of all kaan pakad kr sorry Ouch
i know m late Ouch
bt akhir aa hi gai Wink
ye story to such me choti h Confused
mera pet nhi bhara is pad kr
mujhe or chahiye di lambi wali
ok ??
Chlo abhi isi se kaam chla leti hu
awww veer is too naughty Wink
anu ko tub me fek diya LOL
veer h hi naughty hr jagh
hr ff me
ho bhi kyu na jb RAJAT naughty h to veer to hoga hi LOL
ye lo anu se panga Evil Smile
ab jhelo use Thumbs Up
subh subh duniya ki sbse tasty coffee ROFL
anu maze leing LOL
abi to suru aat h bachchu
aage aage dekho hota h kya Evil Smile
i like nivi mom Embarrassed
kitni achi h
bhut bhut bhut achi Big smile
ye veer ki sct. Veer pr hi line mar rhi h Angry
kis or ko dhund le samjhi vrna to... Evil Smile
samjhdar k liye ishara kafi h...
Thanx god veer khana office me hi bhul gya   Ermm
vrna to veer ki to band baj jaati Thumbs Down
anu ka dar LOL
or kr bhi kya skti h
vaise m or veer ek hi thali k chatte batte h
jha khana waha hm n khane me koi gadbad na ho LOL

Awww poor jerry n micky Ouch
my fav spcly jerry Cry
m sok mnati hu jerry k liye ~_~ kanha ji uski aatma ko santi dena

di moral is too good ROFL
bach k rhna re (all husbands) LOL
 

Hey dear!

waise i'm also 18...so dnt call me di

Late hua toh koi baat nahi…atleast comment toh kiaBig smile

Well mujhse zyaada lambi stories nahi likhi jati…chhote se hi kaam chala loWink

Glad u liked all the characters…& the story

Mickey-jerry ki zyaada chinta mat karo…MJ toh amar hai…(pun intented)LOL

I'm happy you liked the moralBig smile

Thx for commenting

Luv uBig smile

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Posted: 13 April 2012 at 8:37am | IP Logged
First I would say that... I love your writing...
Thank you so much for adding me to your buddy list and thanks for the pm too...Smile


Edited by aysha1989 - 13 April 2012 at 8:37am

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tejjo Goldie
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Posted: 14 April 2012 at 9:00am | IP Logged
sorry 4 late comment dear
really sorry

im little sad to know that the story is finished

but the last update is mindblowing,loved the ananya n veer's scenes,they both r so cute

omggg anu ka khana...agar veer kha leta to uska kya hota...

Hmmm...veer was so naughty...bt loved them yr
loved ur story n concept
loved ur writing...u r fabulous writer...

Thanks 4 this beautiful story dear,pls come with new story like this

thanks 4 pm
sorry 4 late comment

luv u

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sparksfly Senior Member
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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 12:29pm | IP Logged
edtd ma comnt...sorry 4 makng u wait .
P.S- dont call me di...we're of d same age !!
Rapunzzel Goldie
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Posted: 26 April 2012 at 2:17pm | IP Logged
awesome ss..
loved the way u write...
waitng to read more ff's from u
thanxs for the pm...

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 9:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sparksfly

FINALLY unresng !! LOL Yup,finally my wait ends!LOL
i just luvd it !! Star
it was hillarious !! Big smile
moral - tit 4 tat n God works in mysterious ways !! 
perfectly shown by a humurous way by u !! LOL
put a hUge smile on ma face !! Big smile i'm sooo glad to hear that!
Veer is soo...sweet n naughty !!
kya punishmnt hai !!! Embarrassed
awww...he calld her 2 dry his hair n carried her ...Embarrassed
luvd dis -
 When he tried to clear his eyes with his hands more soap got in them as his hands were also soapy. He was helpless'somehow he cleaned his eyes with the towel. And then he waited'with stinging eyes, soapy body and shivering in the cold as he was wet from the rain. He made silent pleas to Water god to rain through the bathroom shower, singing various bhajans and replacing the respective god's name with water god. And this is how poor Veer waited for the water to come soon. ROFL ROFL ROFL mujhe yeh likhne mein bhi bada mazaa aaya
bechare Veer ko aadhe ghante tak wait karna pada...n bhajan gane pade !! Wink
in husband n wife ke jhagade mein bechare rats maare gaye !! Dead woh kehte hain na...no pain no gain...bas maine pain aur gain alag alag logon ko de diya LOL
likd d names u usd 4 rats !! Thumbs Up
n unka funeral bhi maast tha !!! LOL
ab anu ka khana khaya hai to ...LOL
u r a gr8 writer !! Clap Clap Star thank uEmbarrassed
ur story has romance...Embarrassed... humor...LOL...traged (rats )...Ouch...n perfect discrption !!!Star
luvd it !! thx a lot!!
do write more...
n sorry 4 d really really l8 reply !! Cry Cry  no worriesBig smile thx for ur luvly commentSmile
best wishes 4 xams...Hug...n loads of luv...Hug
thx & wish u da same
hugs & kissesBig smile

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Posted: 28 April 2012 at 9:39am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aysha1989

First I would say that... I love your writing...
Thank you so much for adding me to your buddy list and thanks for the pm too...Smile
 
Thanks for the appreciation & ur luvly commentBig smile

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