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The Punishment : SS (Part 8 on Page 24) (Page 11)

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Posted: 08 May 2012 at 7:09am | IP Logged
Awww that was one of these most cutest chapters I have ever readBig smile

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wow... super duper update... now quickly quickly update next par and PM me...Smile
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Haha, SHYAAMMM ROFL Loved The ArHi Part Blushing
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hahahaha!!! in your face snakewa!!!
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"Once the rituals were over, Khushi bent down to touch Arnav's feet and just like reflex action Arnav pulled her over and hugged her.. without realizing that all the family members were shocked to see this. When he realized, he gently let go off khushi who was bewildered at this gesture.

 

He glanced at the others and saw that Shyam was twitching his face and looking mean, and he suddenly realized what happened. This was the same place where he saw Khushi hugging the creepo and something clicked him ' that means, just like he hugged khushi all of a sudden, this mean also did the same and it was, Shyam hugging Khushi and not the other way round. He felt like taking Khushi in his arms again but he controlled this urge and fed some food to Khushi after some water."


WOW!! PERFECT way to  end the misunderstanding!!!! Tongue

Hope that the CV's are taking notes from our IF SS/FF/OS writers, which are, in my poinion, far more creative!!!

And, mrin0709, I l-u-v-e-d the endling!!!!

Keep writing...



Edited by babli0204 - 08 May 2012 at 10:03am
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omg...shyamu cobra ki to watt lag gayi. ROFL
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