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Where should I start with 😆...I kept searching for the 'Pink' part in these two updates..but I guess we need to wait for that! 😆
How can anyone not think of MSK in physical terms! Geet is different...but when it comes to the MSK..he can make anyone weak..wait wait...weak as well as strong!Haaye!! 😍
He is truly amazing!!
"He kept staring. She just lifted her hand and clutched her phone as if clutching his hand. He seemed to notice. One by one his lines of worry started to ease.
Finally his face and eyes relaxed. And he gave a small smile. Geet wiped her tears and smiled back."
Please don't kill us with such lines!! 😍(Well don't take this literally please...you continue with such lines in your updates 😉 They are nothing less that a rocking treat!)
I love it when Sir says..."Geet now go home"..I have been noticing this line frm many updates and I absolutely love it!! 😆
Here Geet seems like a little kid!!
So she was again thinking about the two most important men in her life while swimming..Her father and Maan Sir!! I love her swimming sessions!! 😃
Do I need to mention that I fell in love with that line 😍
"Sir, might I add you look very cool in casuals Sir."
Strangely in this FF..I'm falling in love with the dialogues and monologues more than anything else!!😆
Hmmm..coming to the other part ...well I wasn't sure if I should write this thing or not..but since every word you type needs a lot of thinking work..I felt that it's your right to know what impact your updates have on your readers. 😛
TBH after reading the whole update..I read ,re-read ,re-re-read Romeo-Geet convo especially those lines Maths being an absolute truth and then the line about Money being in the mind-set of the societies.
This part of the update seriously reminded me of my college seminar...hmm..well how do I put it..Actually when we have seminars for both undergrads and postgrads together we don't easily get all the things that prof talk about ,so we usually write down all those terms and then God knows what all we do after that 😆...I felt the same after the update.
When I read that line about the money what I did was I started re-reading one of the readings of my course where there is a para about working on the basis of trust!! I kept reading that one and I started re-reading all my assignments and then here comes the other line..
Men of science rarely made it big in terms of money. Probably because they did not understand the language of money or simply did not care. Their joy lay in finding the absolute truth. And nothing could be farther from truth than money.
I don't know why this line caught my eye..this one seriously reminded me of something and I again indulged myself in reading some random articles ,after reading all that..I started pointing out mistakes in my own assignment making me realize my stupidity..Now again I called my friend to discuss something regarding that and all this because of this update..You are Freaking Awesome!!!! I mean you can seriously make any-one think!!! I absolutely loved this update!!😲 I don't even know how to express my excitement and all!!! 😆.
..Ermm.. I feel so stupid after writing all this ...'coz it might not make proper sense but again if I wouldn't have written this I would have felt this comment being incomplete or something like that!!! 😆
Lastly...I loved the update but I'm eagerly waiting for that This part!!! 😆
Edited by World-of-Dreams - 11 years ago
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