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ArShi Poem: Pain that I don't want to give you

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Posted: 03 April 2012 at 8:32pm | IP Logged
Hey guys this is my first time writing at Indian-Forum. I hope you all like it. Please let me know. Smile
 
I opened my heart and let you come in

I started to fall in love with you

I can't take my eyes off of you

I hope you have the same feelings for me

I have suffered pain now I want love

And don't want to feel the pain to lose you

I want to be with you for the rest of my life

But something always stops me

I being to hate you.when truly  I love you.

I try to hide my feeling but always end up hurting you.
 
The pain I give you is the same pain I get when I hurt you.
 
Guys please do tell me if it's good so I can write more. If its not good still please tell me:(


Edited by arnavkhushi01 - 02 August 2012 at 6:47pm

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
this is soo sweet!!!!!!!!!!! <3 I write poems tooo heeheee check them out they're on my index!!! <3 

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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 8:46pm | IP Logged
that is wonderfully written dear..Clap
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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 9:06pm | IP Logged
it s beautiful
the pain i give you is the same pain i get when i hurt you
nice
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Posted: 01 August 2012 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
it was sweet n nice
Wonderfull attempt
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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 5:08am | IP Logged
its nyc!!!!
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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 9:17am | IP Logged
Lovely beautifully written
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Posted: 02 August 2012 at 12:13pm | IP Logged
ossum..!!!
loved it..:)
m gonna steal it 4 sum1..:P
nt officially..act.gonna note in dwn on my diary..n wud uhmmm...u no wt i mean..
bt trust me wont b copyin it w/o ryts..:)
SmileSmileSmileSmileSmile

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