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ArShi Poem: Pain that I don't want to give you

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey guys this is my first time writing at Indian-Forum. I hope you all like it. Please let me know. 😊
 
I opened my heart and let you come in

I started to fall in love with you

I can't take my eyes off of you

I hope you have the same feelings for me

I have suffered pain now I want love

And don't want to feel the pain to lose you

I want to be with you for the rest of my life

But something always stops me

I being to hate you.when truly  I love you.

I try to hide my feeling but always end up hurting you.
 
The pain I give you is the same pain I get when I hurt you.
 
Guys please do tell me if it's good so I can write more. If its not good still please tell me:(
Edited by arnavkhushi01 - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
this is soo sweet!!!!!!!!!!! <3 I write poems tooo heeheee check them out they're on my index!!! <3 

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Posted: 11 years ago
that is wonderfully written dear..πŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
it s beautiful
the pain i give you is the same pain i get when i hurt you
nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
it was sweet n nice
Wonderfull attempt
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely beautifully written
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Posted: 11 years ago
ossum..!!!
loved it..:)
m gonna steal it 4 sum1..:P
nt officially..act.gonna note in dwn on my diary..n wud uhmmm...u no wt i mean..
bt trust me wont b copyin it w/o ryts..:)
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