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Posted: 01 April 2012 at 2:21am | IP Logged
COLLEGE MAIN YEH ANOKHI DAASTAAN
Hi all. i just had an idea about a new ff. i know the college idea is already out there but this is my story so this is definitely going to be different and it has nothing to do with the current storyline at all... do let me know if you want me to  continue. i'll update the prologue as soon as possible.
NOTE: the dialogues will all be in english except a few word like devi maiyya and stuff... WinkSmile

Character Description:

      Arnav Singh Raizada:

His same old self though in this story he is 22 years of age and is doing 3rd year in Fashion technology engineering. He was the youngest businessman to take over his father's company and saved it from bankruptcy after his parents died in a mysterious manner and his dad's brother ran with a lot of the company's money. He and his elder and younger sisters were taken care of by his nani and mama and with a small financial help and after dropping school for a year brought back his dad's business in fashion industry and then rejoined school in order to complete his schooling on his nani's insistence. Stays in a cottage nearby his college and handles all the major conferences and takes all major decisions in his family and AR designs. He is well off In the studies zone as fashion comes naturally to him. He can do anything to see a smile on his family member's faces. Well almost anything.
He is also a college boxing champion.

      Anjali Jha:
Arnav's elder sister and 25 years of age. She is married to shyam jha. She adores her brother and is the one out of the three people who can control her brother's anger. She completely loves her brother and her husband and loves her son named Arjun. She handles the AR company on behalf of arnav and is out on tour around the world to expand the business with her husband.

    Shyam Jha:

He is NOT a snake. He is in love with his wife, Anjali and cannot see tears in her eyes. He is an accomplished lawyer and handles the work of AR industries. He helps Anjali during his tours in order to meet the demands of clients all around the world.

      Arjun Jha:
He is a small naughty boy who loves pulling pranks. He is full of mischief. He loves his mamu(Arnav) the most and thinks the world of him. He is still in nursery, and lives with his mamu as Anjali and shyam are always out on a trip to handle business. He is another person whom arnav can never get angry on as he loves arjun very much.

      Depika Singh Raizada:
is arnav's younger sister and is 19 years of age. And is also doing fashion technology engineering and is in her first year. She looks exactly like Anjali but is a bit modern. She loves her brother and always wants to follow his footsteps and hopefully contribute towards AR in the future. She is the third person who can calm arnav's anger. Arnav loves her a lot and never lets tears fill her eyes. He loves to spoil her. She stays in the hostel as she wants to experience the life instead of staying at arnav's place.

      Akash Singh Raizada:
is the same as in the show. He is 22 years of age and also in arnav's class. He loves his cousin arnav very much and can do anything for him as arnav is his role model. Akash was in awe of his brother because of all the activities that arnav could do. Arnav was a great multitasker and arnav considered akash as a very good friend and smaller brother. He stays with arnav and helps him raise arjun.

      Payal gupta:
she is 19 years of age and is also in the same class as akash and deepika. She is one of the two gems in the gupta household. She is shy at times and mostly quiet. She loves her sister khushi.

      Khushi Kumari Gupta:
she is the same bubbly girl as in the show. She loves studying and Is in the same class as her jiji.payal is about 3 months elder to her and hence she calls payal "jiji". She is the second gem of the gupta household. Her babuji loves her very much. garima loves her two daughters and has never made khushi felt like she was an orphan or that she was adopted. She was always made to feel loved. Khushi was really sad to go to college as she had to shift into a hostel along with payal as the college was in another city in the hills. She wants to become a professional designer for ethinic indian clothing as she loves the indian culture. She wants to complete her college as soon as possible and start work in order to earn and help her babuji with the financial problems in her house.

      Naniji, Mama, Mami, Shahi Gupta, Buaji and garima are the same as shown in the show.

      Lavanya kashyap:
Completely modern and is in the same class of payal and the rest. she gets a crush on arnav as soon as she sees him.

      Aansh Chopra:
is in arnav's class. He hates arnav and arnav hates him. He is in the boxing tournaments as well. He hates arnav  as he is the major attraction in college and of his attitude. He hates each and everything about arnav and always tries his hardest to cause some damage in arnav's life.

      Raj Chopra:
aansh chopra's younger brother. In the same class as payal and the rest.

Well that's all for the character sketch. if I introduce new characters, I shall give their brief description later on. But I have covered most of the important characters.

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prologue is below(scroll down).Smile

link to chapter 1:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=5&#55222185

link to chapter 2:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=10&#55319131

link to chapter 3(PRECAP):

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=55362114&#55362114

link to chapter 3:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=18&#55377598

link to chapter 4:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=25&#55433497

link to chapter 5(PRECAP):

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=30&#55461243

link to chapter 5:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=55478675&#55478675

link to chapter 6(PRECAP):

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=39&#55539830

link to chapter 6:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=55560771&#55560771

link to chapter 7(PRECAP):

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=47&#55619153

link to chapter 7:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=55645252&#55645252

link to chapter 8(PRECAP):

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=56&#55709141

link to chapter 8:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=55754913&#55754913

link to chapter 9(PRECAP):

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=64&#55787895

link to chappter 9:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=68&#55805634

link to chapter 10:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=55847893&#55847893

link to chapter 11:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=55887215&#55887215

link to chapter 12:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&TPN=96&#56031525

link to chapter 13:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=56127189&#56127189

link to chapter 14:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=56211053&#56211053

link to chapter 15(part1):

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=56402162&#56402162

link to chapter 15(part2):

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2912126&PID=56433035&#56433035

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Link to THREAD 2 :

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2954375



Edited by daredevilpreyas - 15 June 2012 at 4:17am

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tht sounds pre gud ... if u start this story than pm it too e its interesting :) 

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Prologue:

Khushi and payal were really unhappy when the day arrived for them to leave to their college. It was far from their home and was located near a hill station. It was a secluded college.

The thing that excited the girls was that it was a beautiful location for a college and that they will definitely be enjoying their stay in the college hostel. They had packed their bags and shashi had driven them to the college.

They had settled down in their room and noticed that they had another room mate who had not yet come. Shashi had decided to leave so that the girls could go around and make some friends. Khushi and payal both had tears in their eyes.

Khushi: bye babuji. Please take care of your health. And don't make me remind you everyday about your medicines. Same goes for buaji as well. Don't let her forget to take her course of medicine everyday.

She said all of this very fast and started panting.

Shashi: bitiya breathe. Don't worry I wont forget. Anyway you both concentrate on your studies. We at home wont be too worried about you nor should you be too worried about us.

Saying so he hugged both khushi and payal and bid farewell.

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arnav and akash had come to drop deepika to her hostel. They were a bit late as arnav wanted to go to the hostel to drop her after all the remaining parents had gone.

Deepika: bhai, what if the warden doesn't allow me so late in the night? What if she gets angry at me on the first day itself?

Akash smirked and looked at his brother,

Arnav: I am going to be the student council's president this year. I have already spoken to the warden and she was the one to ask me to bring you in late. So stop stressing over such a small thing princess. Already I am not feeling safe leaving you in a hostel alone.

Deepika smiled and hugged arnav.

Deepika: don't worry bhai. I am not going to be alone. There are so many other girls from my year who will be in the hostel as well. And don't get too worried. I wanted to experience my hostel life. I want to experience individuality.

Arnav: and you take a lot of liberty because I never turn you down. So please don't break the trust I am having sending you to a hostel.

Deepika:don't worry bhai. I wont let you down.

Saying so she hugged arnav again.

Akash: hey sis, don't forget me. I am here as well you know.

Deepika smiled and hugged akash as well.

Deepika: whats the big deal akash bhai, we both are in the same college So how is it going to matter? We will see each other everyday.

Akash: deepu, stop calling me bhai all the time. Makes me feel old.

Deepika: sorry bhai, but naniji has taught me a lot. Even if the world is moving at a fast pace you shall be elder to me and you shall always be my sweet bhai.

Emphasizing on the 'bhai' part. Akash smiled and shook his head.

Akash: don't worry. I was just kidding. After all I call arnav also bhai even though we are in the same class.

Arnav: akash you wait near the car. I'll go drop deepu and come.

Deepika: bhai it's a girls hostel and you are going in there so late at night?

Arnav sighed.

Arnav: I have taken permission to go inside. So stop fussing around like Anjali di. You look like her but please don't act like her.

Deepika: All right bhai. You take the bags and go I'll just call Anjali di and naniji and inform all of them that I have reached safely.

Arnav takes the bags and goes into the hostel.

------------------to be cont---------------

if i get some positive response that is...

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great  loved it pls continue

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Posted: 01 April 2012 at 3:29am | IP Logged
loving it
adorable characters cont soon 
cant wait

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Interesting concept.ClapClapClapClapClapStarStarStarStarStar
Can't wait to read more.
Continue soon. Thanks.Big smile

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really good one so u need to continue this and i m waiting for part1

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 the prologue was amazing...
u shuld continue...
wuld be waiting for the update...
plz pm me wen u update...

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