At the risk of sounding hormonal π But er... how long till you update????
All my thoughts have been captured by the comments above. I actually feel thrilled that you have a Khushi here whos traditional but sensual and aware of her sexuality. Is she pregnant?
Garimas story is heartbreaking... the poor womans lived her life knowing shes second best which can never be a good thing.
Anjali/Shyam - haila! Now theres a twist! :o
And Arnav... his love/hatred for Lavanya is passionate, his desire for Khuhsi is passionate, In fact Im just going to say that this guy follows his passions like instinct. I absolutely cant wait to read more