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Arhi FF: Ripped * Part 9 Update-pg23 19th Oct*

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Posted: 31 March 2012 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
OK. so.
i know it's terrible. and short.
i really don't know whether i should continue this.
i don't even have a name for it.
but DO tell me what you think.


Prologue -

Arnav Singh Raizada sighed as he watched his sister and grandmother gushing back and forth happily as they leafed through the pictures the aunties had brought with them. He shuddered as he turned his back on them, determined to put a stop to all this potential rishta nonsense.

He was not ready to do this. He was not over her.

"Look Nani, she is so pretty!"

"Really? But she's wearing an off shoulder top!"

"Uffu, fine, how about this one?"

A faint smile tugged at his lips as their words made their way to him. His heart glowed warmly as he climbed the stairs to his room, and he felt a rush of affection towards the two women sitting in the living room, hell bent on getting him settled down.

And it was always the same argument, when he would ask them why.

"Because it has been four years, Chotte!"

*

Four years.

Four years that she had not seen him.

Four years that she had not lain with him.

Four years since his voice had last whispered against her skin, as they climbed their way together in passion.

Four years since she had given birth to his child.

And she had had enough.

Lavanya Kashyap was going back.

*

Chapter One and Two - Page 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2911961&TPN=2

Chapter Three - Page 4: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2911961&TPN=4

Note on Page 7: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2911961&TPN=7

Chapter Four - Page 7: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2911961&TPN=7

Chapter Five - Page 10:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2911961&TPN=10

Chapter Six - Page 14: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2911961&PID=56171263&#56171263

Chapter Seven - Page 18: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2911961&PID=56853125&#56853125
 
Chapter Eight - Page 21: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2911961&TPN=21

Chapter Nine - Page 23:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2911961&TPN=23

My Arhi SS(completed): Feelings (based on Arnav discovering Khushi and Shyam promo) - 

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2780981





Edited by cmileyfreaky - 18 October 2012 at 11:48am

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interesting.. continue!

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Posted: 31 March 2012 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
Very intriguing!
Please continue soon with part 1!!
Please add me to your pm list!!!

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Posted: 31 March 2012 at 10:45pm | IP Logged
Short, yes...
Terrible?! No, sir!! :)
You should continue soon!!! :-)

Thanks for the pm...

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interesting. please continue soon. 

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interesting concept la and asr have a kid please continue soon can't wait to read more 
 
     

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oh teri !!! la n asr has a kid ?! n his family will get him married again ?! uh uh...tension tension...

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