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minu..
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and hey i am expecting pm the moment you pen down another superb creation
.. again.. Thanks a lot for your lovely comments.
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In glowing white radiance as bright as many Suns, as cool as many Moons, it is the space of eaternal bliss. This is my abode, far away from everything & everyone. I have been living here at peace since so many Kalpas, alone.
Many Kalpas back I was not alone, she was with me, my Shaki was with me. I was complete with her. She was everything that I am not. She was life, the power , the beauty, the radiance, the magic, the mystry, she was my other half. I had never imagined myself without her. Till one day I heard Brhma needing the power to create, expand the universe. That was none other then her. Brhma asked me to part with my life, my Shakti. We are responsible for creation, nourishment & distruction of the Universe. I had give what Brhma needed. Had to part with her. She too understanding her important role, agreed to expand the creation. But while leaving she looked at me, there was an assurance in her eyes, that we will unite again.
As Sati, she has taken a human form now. Human body is made of 5elements. Has very limited powers, has limited life. From everything infinite what she was is living as a mortal human today, bound by so many rules, regulations & limitations. How she must be living this life as an ignorant soul, wheras in reality she is not. I am incompelete without her.
Shiv sees a Golden radiance at a distance. Is surprised to see that, thinks, so finally it has happened. Sati has realized her true self. With her strong determination, she has made it possible. The Golden radiance reaches near him, says see I have reached here to meet you. From here The entire Univrse looks as part ofus, we are present every where in everyone. I have fulfilled my duty for the creation of this Universe. Now I am eager to return back to my original place. Shiv is at loss of words just keeps on looking at her.
The golden glow starts going down. Shiv thinks she is going away again. I won't let this happen. Suddenly realizes he is in the state of Samadhi. He comes out of his Samadhi, opens his eyes, gets up. Nandi notices a smile on his face. Shiv tells him to prepare Kailash for Sati's arrival, she will come here soon.
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. Very Nice attempt, Minakshi!!! 
The Spiritual Elements introduced in it, are making it very Special . Do keep it up Dear! 
. ... While going thr' the second part, I was just thinking that, as you have mentioned Shiva as the 'Realised One', (i.e.- doing Meditation, having the 'Complete Knowledge of the Creation'), so is it 'in tune' with his character to FEEL (rather 'react') the same emotions as Sati? As we can observe that Sati is feeling the painful separation because of her Ignorance of the Truth (that she is ALWAYS there WITH Shiva). But Shiva already knows this truth and thus maintains his Peaceful Nature, the Perfect Poise in his character ... I feel, BOTH of them are 'Complete and Supreme' , it is only because of the Love they share that they divide themselves and appear as Separate Identities, but the 'True Knowledge' is there in both of them (i.e.- in their 'Realised Self'). , as I think about Shiva and Sati. Just wanted you to explain this part a bit more . The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:
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. Very Nice attempt, Minakshi!!! The Spiritual Elements introduced in it, are making it very Special . Do keep it up Dear!
. ... While going thr' the second part, I was just thinking that, as you have mentioned Shiva as the 'Realised One', (i.e.- doing Meditation, having the 'Complete Knowledge of the Creation'), so is it 'in tune' with his character to FEEL (rather 'react') the same emotions as Sati? As we can observe that Sati is feeling the painful separation because of her Ignorance of the Truth (that she is ALWAYS there WITH Shiva). But Shiva already knows this truth and thus maintains his Peaceful Nature, the Perfect Poise in his character ... I feel, BOTH of them are 'Complete and Supreme' , it is only because of the Love they share that they divide themselves and appear as Separate Identities, but the 'True Knowledge' is there in both of them (i.e.- in their 'Realised Self'). , as I think about Shiva and Sati. Just wanted you to explain this part a bit more .
Compeletely agree with Both are Compelete & Supreme. But this show portrays a human Sati, who doesn't know about her true power. So there is some scope to show realising her true self by various ways. I thought this can be the one.
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...its really nice to read it The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:
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