Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2

   

OS: shower ki pani ya mohabbat ki chingari

Post Reply New Post

Page 1 of 4

Page 1
Page   of 4
Page 2 Page 4

kavyasam

IF-Rockerz

kavyasam

Joined: 02 July 2010

Posts: 7435

Posted: 30 March 2012 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
ok madhu (moonkmh) was asking me to write an OS. I cant write new one right now,  so posting the scene I wrote for shibz's  'bathroom thread'.   fun post tha. this scene is the one where arjun is in kumud's room and arohi has come to steal or keep the credit card back.  tab arjun use pakad leta hai.  but singu ke room mein agar attached bath hoti toh unhe aise scene bahut baar mil sakte the naLOL.  aise majak mein likha hai.  
 
 
so bathroom is really there in singu's room. and kumud ke room mein jo scene hua woh yaha par hua, haan kumud ko sabak sikhane arohi credit card singu ke bathroom mein chipane aayi thi aur last sec mein arjun entered leaving her shocked to wits and she had no choice but to hide


jab bahar nikalna chahi tab arjun ne pakad liya aur u know woh scene jo already dikhaya woh hua. waha se continue karenge.
arohi - 'jaane do'

arjun - 'sach'

arohi - 'please'

arjun - 'nai jaane diya toh'

arohi trying to make some deal. looks at the horrible pink bathrugs and strikes a deal with him.

arohi -'main woh bathrugs nikaal dungi agar chod diya toh'

arjun - 'rehne do mujhe ab aadat ho gayi woh color'

arohi thinks again, she is not even bothered now about the condition they are in, she only wants to make a deal

arohi - 'main woh saare towels nikaal dungi waha se'

arjun - 'woh bhi rehne do'

arohi - 'uss rack mein tumhe jyada space dungi'
arjun - 'nai chahiye'
arohi - 'yeh wall paper nikalva dungi, red and pink combinatio bahut ganda hai, pehle jaisa karvadungi'
arjun - 'humare room se match karta hai rehne do'
arohi - 'room ka bhi color change karavungi , phele jaise'
arjun tempted to take this offer, he was fed up with his room. but from what will he gain more? this is so much better compared to tolerating the pink.
arjun - 'tumhare sath rehne ke liye uski bhi aadat daal diya hai, rehne do'
arohi - 'phir kya loge'
arjun looks at her lips and returns to her eyes. she knows what he asked. even with so much water around, her throat is dry.

arohi now was not sure if she wanted to leave or stay. she too keeps staring at him

arjun - 'tumhe jaana nai?'

arohi - 'kahan'

water still hitting them both as while talking they moved again.

no bua to disturb coz when she came daadi took her to back yard to show the garden. kumud apne room aa bhi gayi, toh yeh dono apne room mein hai na ab, kyunki arjun ki own bathroom hai, so it doesnot matter even if kumud is back in her own room.

arjun - 'kahi nai, isiliye toh pakda hai'

arohi - 'kya'

arjun '- kya nahi, kise'

badi mushkil se sharafat dikhayi. kya ka bhi jawab de sakta tha.

arohi - 'oh'

she is now not even trying to make any deal.


arjun - 'u know, ek deal kar sakte hai. hum yeh jo jhagda karte rehte hai sirf ek dusre ko bhadkane ke liye, yeh sahi nai lagta mujhe'


now they are out of water, because it is disrupting them to see properly.

arjun has now left her to grab a towel. arohi is still under the impression that she is not free and holding on to his shoulder.


use pata bhi nai chala arjun phir se kab use pakda.

arohi - 'mujhe bhi nahi karni hai'

arjun - 'phir hum dono fighing karna chod de?'

arohi - 'main chod sakti hoon par tumhe sorry bolna hoga'

arjun - 'sorry kyun, mujhe aphsos nahi hai ki maine tumhe yaha rok liya'

creasing her cheeks and her lips that are wet.

he makes them more wet by shaking the head. (kitchen ke paas jaisa kiya tha).

arohi - 'aaj ke liye nahi, uss din ke liye jab dhoke se shaadi kiya tha'

arjun - 'tumhe sach mein bura laga ki maine shaadi ki, main toh uss kabootar se bachaya tumhe'

giving her back a light stroke. the purple wet tee made it not so smooth. but the effect was the same to both.

arohi - 'nai, bura nai laga'

use question samajh mein aaya but jhagda karne se accha yeh scene better laga.

arjun - 'phir hum jhagda kyun karenge'

arohi - 'nahi karenge'

arjun - 'deal?'

arohi - 'deal'

arjun - 'sorry'

arohi - '?'

arjun - 'tumhe bhigone ke liye, bura maan gayi?'

(in mind thinks, sorry tumhe dhoka deke shaadi karne ke liye aur woh magic se nikli huyi jungle track wali pics sabko dikhane ke liye)

arohi shakes her head no. (in mind thinks 'thanks last minute mien aake tumne shaadi karli varna daily tumhare gam mein chiku shake banake kabootar ke sar pe daalte rehna padta').

itna cute lagi ki isne kiss de diya. dete dete phir se shower ke neeche chale gaye. jo chingari pyaar ki nafrat ke neeche dabi huyi thi woh aag banke bahar aagayi. kiss se jyada pyaar ki nazarien jyada pyari lagi. ek dusre ko dekhte rahe ankhon mein ankhe daal ke. phir se kiss kiya, iss baar vaise ke jaise agar nafrat se nahi mohabbat se shaadi ki hoti. and that kiss melted the remaining little nafrat completely.


episode khatam hone wala hai. so they had to cut short the scene.


arohi recovers so does arjun, but they cannot forget what just happened. like in a trance they come out. daadi and bua ki awaaz aayi neeche se itna zor se ki bathroom mein sunayi diya. stylish yet dheeli construction thi, jaldi jaldi banwaya tha bathroom.


singu was never so proud of his decisions, how thoughtful of him to get his own bathroom in his own chota sa bedroom. kitna fayda hua. arohi se hug kiss and makeup ho gayi, no fighting deal ban gayi, and sorry bhi bol diya. from then on they were head over heals in love again.

kitne fayda hai apne kudhka bathroom hone se. dekho kmh2 ke purane CVs.



Edited by kavyasam - 30 March 2012 at 3:35pm

The following 19 member(s) liked the above post:

anjaliarora311MsFuzzybear69-anzaeram-arjuhi4evr-Nili-MsSweetheart96KaranKittu4evamysticlovercherry227arjuhi4evalazybluesaparna4karanika.vrshn.shibzpunam2712Arjuhisis...vibha...moonkmh.Dulcet

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "OS: shower ki pani ya mohabbat ki chingari" in Kitani Mohabbat Hai - 2 forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

cherry227

IF-Rockerz

cherry227

Joined: 17 April 2011

Posts: 7086

Posted: 30 March 2012 at 3:47pm | IP Logged
awesome kavya! 

i relived the entire kmh2 magic in this one scene! arohi was such a goner in that scene too LOL 

arjun - 'tumhe jaana nai?'

arohi - 'kahan'

arjun - 'kahi nai, isiliye toh pakda hai'
arohi - 'kya'

arjun '- kya nahi, kise'

badi mushkil se sharafat dikhayi. kya ka bhi jawab de sakta tha. Embarrassed LOL 

super cute! you should really write more of such scenes which the CV's messed up or didnt use to its potential in the serial Clap

The following 3 member(s) liked the above post:

KaranKittu4evakavyasampunam2712

KaranKittu4eva

Goldie

KaranKittu4eva

Joined: 16 August 2011

Posts: 2086

Posted: 30 March 2012 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
LOL at title sooo Cute and steaming Hot Wink
Hahaha Arohi is damn hilarious bechari lost her senses common anyone would infront of singhu Embarrassed
LOVED it Kavya di once again u created kmh magic Big smile
Yaar sachi kitna faida hota agar bathroom Arjun ke kamray mein hi hotah humein aur bhi hot hot scenes miltay! LOL But I don't think many ppl realized washroom blooper toh koi nahi. Yes Kavya di plzz write more cute scenes can nvr get enough of Arjuhi Heart

- Meera

Edited by KaranKittu4eva - 31 March 2012 at 5:05am

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kavyasam

MsSweetheart96

Goldie

MsSweetheart96

Joined: 02 June 2011

Posts: 1866

Posted: 30 March 2012 at 3:55pm | IP Logged

Absolutely awesome title di :)

Lol.. I love this OS.. kitna fayda hua jus bcos they had a bathroom lol..
this was also very cute.. dialogues were really amazing..
do write more os' like this.. they are such a pleasure to read
nd they bring back so many memories..

Thanks for the pm nd do write more x


Edited by MsSweetheart96 - 30 March 2012 at 4:10pm

The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:

KaranKittu4evakavyasam

AAKMH2

IF-Rockerz

AAKMH2

Joined: 11 February 2011

Posts: 7275

Posted: 30 March 2012 at 4:49pm | IP Logged

lolx . . .cutest os !

seriously ye post Cvs ko dkna chahey. .unhe bhi pta chle washroom k kitne fayde hen. .

haha . . amazng dailouges

u shud write more . .realy enjoy it.

i also had write a scene of washroom in seducing. . if u time,hv a luk.

thnkx 4 da pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kavyasam

aparna4karanika

IF-Rockerz

aparna4karanika

Joined: 30 April 2010

Posts: 6880

Posted: 30 March 2012 at 6:30pm | IP Logged

Thmbs up...awesm diii

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kavyasam

punam2712

IF-Sizzlerz

punam2712

Joined: 18 May 2011

Posts: 20391

Posted: 30 March 2012 at 9:04pm | IP Logged
LOVELY OS
JUST WHAT WE WANTED IN THE SHOW
LOVED HIS WORDS 

BATHROOM KA FAYDA HO GAYA

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kavyasam

sreeja_rox

IF-Sizzlerz

sreeja_rox

Joined: 07 January 2011

Posts: 19748

Posted: 30 March 2012 at 9:50pm | IP Logged
res...wat a title!!!luvd it...will read and cmmnt soonSmile

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

kavyasam

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
FF:KMH2~Mohabbat Reloaded~Updt Pg 38~Nte Pg 43

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 42 43

--Ari-- 340 16420 09 February 2012 at 6:32am
By cherry227
Mohabbat Lounge~The Mohabbat Lives On...

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 47 48

--Ari-- 382 19080 06 February 2012 at 11:33pm
By nammu_23
Which scene was hotter...Shower

2

Aneeka_GS 11 871 08 March 2011 at 6:17pm
By Kudi_NextDoor
Tip Tip Barsa Pani... : SBS (Written) -SweetGirl- 9 1210 24 November 2010 at 7:19pm
By Sandstone
Live UD: Tip Tip barasa pani

2

lilindiangurl13 11 901 23 November 2010 at 9:36am
By wida

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.