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x_Roxy_x

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Chup Chup Ke

 

Characters:

 

Angad Khanna: A Famous chef no parents has 1 sister and his a sweet humble guy who has a childhood Kripa he loves her a lot but she just doesn't know yet

 

Kripa Sharma: A famous chef her has 2 sisters a sweet bubbly gurl her childhood friend angad she luvs him but he doensnt know it yet

 

Sabina Khanna: A model luvs her brother and has boyfriend raj luvs him a lot wishes she and her bro angad and Kripa were 2 gether.

 

Asha Sharma: A businesswoman luvs her sisters a lot and angad and has boyfriend name Aryan

 

Selina Sharma: married has 2 kids name sasha and Natasha lives in canada luvs her sister a lot and angad 2

 

Angad's friends

 

Josh

Rahul

Rohit

Tanya

 

Kripa's friends

 

Josh

Rahul

Rohit

Laila

 

Will start part 1 2morrow



Edited by x_Roxy_x - 12 August 2006 at 6:24pm

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it luks interesting. i bet it will be! i am waitng for the first part.

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hey that sounds brilliant nisha!! start soon

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sounds good

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sounds brilliant! Wink Embarrassed

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sounds interesting! please cont soon!

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Part 1

 

One day a beautiful nice sunny day we see a house near beach and 2 cars one a silver Ferrari and purple Lamborghini both convertibles a pool and hotub with 8 rooms they were 2 chefs and 2 maids and 2 people living in there. One a guy and gurl they were both brother and sister living the life of luxery.

 

Angad khanna one of the most eligible bachelors of London is one of the best chefs he is known all over the world and very famous for it. His best friend Kripa and he own a restaurant which is highly successful everybody just loves the food there all the celebrities they are usually busy Kripa and angad have been friends forever.

 

Angad: Sabina where are you

Sabina: coming bhaiya

Angad never liked Sabina's boyfriend raj because raj made a girl pregnant he tortured her till death she committed sucide but the fact is Sabina doesn't know about that

 

Sabina: sry bhaiya I was talking to raj

Angad (thinking): OH GOSH HOW I HATE RAJ I SWEAR IF HE DOES ANYTHING TO MY BABY SISTER ILL KILL HIM.

 

Angad: hmm that's nice anyways breakfast is on the table eat it really quick

 

Sabina: ok bhaiya are you going to work your already late Kripa is goin to be so mad

 

Angad: I know

 

As Angad was leaving Kripa calls

 

Angad: oh god here comes yelling queen

 

*Phone*

 

Kripa: ANGAD WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU MAN I HAVE BEEN WAITING SINCE FOREVER GET UR BUTT OUT OF BED RIGHT NOW AND COME TO THE RESTAURANT NOWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Angad: Kripz chill im comin im not in bed I was talking to Sabina

 

Kripa: OH YA I NO YOUR EXCUSE YOU WERE PROBABLY SLEEPING

 

Angad: no…..i was getting ready come on baby girl im coming in 15 minutes

 

Kripa: DON'T YOU DARE CALL ME BABY GIRL I DUNT WANT TO TALK TO YOU IDIOT JUST COME NOWWW

 

Angad: k im coming bye

 

Angad went in his car he was listening to music just then his cell rings its Tanya

 

*phone*

 

Angad: Hey Tanya how are you

 

Tanya: oh my god angad where are you the restaurant is so busy

 

Angad: what did Kripa Madame tell you to call me

 

Tanya: angad im serious rush or do something Kripa is really getting mad

 

Angad: k im coming let me drive now bye

 

Tanya: ya bye

 

Angad: gosh these women never leave you alone

 

Angad finally reached the restaurant as soon he came he found the place all mad and crazy everybody running around everywhere.

 

Kripa: angad you finally came please come and help me

 

Angad: alright im coming

 

Angad entered the kitchen the crew was so happy same with Kripa

 

Kripa: oh my god thank god you came everybody is making a huge mess the dishes are turning bad one person put salt instead of sugar and when they are making veggie dishes they are adding meat and all the customers are leaving and getting mad and everything all I can say is everything is a disaster.

 

Angad: OH MY GOSH AND YOUR TELLING ME THIS NOW?? WHY DIDN'T YOU CALL MY HOUSE PHONE I WOULD HAVE BEEN HERE EARLIER

 

Kripa: I did like a million times but the tone kept on saying busy also your cell you weren't picking up

 

Angad: what that's cuz my cell battery died and Sabina was talking to raj

 

Kripa: oh god I hate raj

 

Angad: I also do to alright im getting to work

 

Angad and Kripa made an anncoumnet

 

Angad Kripa: listen everybody we have something to say important we are laying off people im sorry but we have no choice because we found that someone has been adding poison into the foods therefore we firing these people and we reported them to the police they will not get a job and they are going to jail.

 

David

Samantha

Danielle

Derek

 

Angad: That's it

 

Just the police came and arrested those 4

 

David: you will pay for this angad and Kripa

 

Angad: whatever get out here never show us your face again

 

The police took away those four the restaurant was still disaster angad and Kripa cooked everything givin all the workers are break

 

Angad: Kripa hand me the fish

 

Kripa: here pineapple

 

Angad: thanks baby girl

 

Tanya: hey guyz just checking haila you guyz are the only two who are working where is your staff

 

Kripa: we gave them a break

 

Tanya: k well need help

 

Kripa: please ask all the waiters to come take the food

 

Tanya: ok

 

All the waiters came and took the food the customers were happy

 

Kripa: oh my god we did it angad our restaurant is back to normal

 

Angad: I know baby girl we did it

 

Angad and Kripa gave each other nicknames angad's was pineapple and kripa's was babygirl and angad also gave a nickname to Tanya which was babydoll.

 

Tanya: heyy Kripa wow you guyz are finally done so where are you headed

 

Kripa: hey tanu nothing after im gonna go catch a movie with laila come with us we are going to see fanaa.

 

Tanya: omg yeah im coming what about angad

 

Angad: what about me I dunt wanna see no chick flick ill hang out with the guyz

 

Kripa: alright we will see you at 9 love you pineapple

 

Angad: love you both bye baby doll and baby girl

 

Kripa went home and changed into something just then laila called

 

Phone

 

Laila: hey you guyz coming or what

 

Kripa: yeah we are on are way

 

Kripa laila Tanya they went to see fanaa Kripa as you know loves popcorn goes crazy for it she orders large for herself.

 

Tanya: Kripa are you crazy are you sure your gonna eat that

 

Kripa : umm ya

 

Tanya and laila just ordered nachos and they went and sat in the theatres while they were watching a movie some fat guy drops coke all over kripa got so mad

 

Kripa: WHAT THE HELL IS YOUR PROBLEM MAN CAN'T YOU SEE IM WATCHIN A MOVIE OH MY GOD YOU WILL HAVE TO PAY FOR MY DRESS

 

Guy: what ya gunan do about little girl its my seat I can do whatever I want

 

Kripa : OH SHUT UP FATTY GO TO HELL

 

Tanya and Laila: yeah FATTY GO TO HELL

 

Laila Tanya and Kripa went to the office and get there ticket refunded.

 

Lady: excuse me miss how may I help you

 

Kripa: yes I want my ticket refunded and my money back please someone spilled coke all over my dress.

 

Lady: oh my god here is your money please come back Madame sorry this happened

 

Kripa: its ok

 

Laila kripa and Tanya went to angad's house seeing kripa's house is being fumigated for termities. They saw josh rohit Rahul angad playing cards

 

Josh: hey kripa laila Tanya

 

Ladies: hey

 

Angad: babygirl you came from the movie already how was it

 

Kripa: LEAVE ME ALONE

 

Kripa stormed off went to her room and took a shower trying to take a shower when she came out she is refresh then she realized she spazzed out at angad. Kripa came downstairs

 

Kripa: pineapple im sorry

 

Angad ignored her and was mad

 

Kripa chased after angad kripa couldn't handle the silence so she made angad turn he had his arms folded without that kripa gave angad a long kiss on lips. After 5 minutes they pulled apart kripa was blushing angad could see that they looked in each other eyes they saw mixed feelings for each other.

 

Angad: kripa what was that for

 

Kripa: umm uh……im tired going to sleep now

 

Kripa was just to embarrassed that she couldn't say anything and ran upstairs to her room meanwhile angad sat on the couch kept picturing that kiss

 

Angad: kripa ur crazy that's what one thing I love about you is you make me go crazy

 

Kripa was in her room just thinking about that kiss she knew what angad was thinking

 

Kripa: omg why did I do that angad must be thinking why can't I tell him that I love him

Why cant he figure out my love for him did that kiss mean anything to him I don't know oh angad I just wish you understood my love I want to mean more something then a friend I guess Im hoping it for it to happen.

Angad came upstairs went straight to his room to sleep but before that he really wanted to tell kripa something important.

 

Angad knocks on kripa's door

 

Angad: kripa can I come in I want to talk with you

 

Kripa: come in

 

Kripa felt awkward talking to angad after that incident

 

Kripa:so erm..uh what did you want to talk about

 

Angad: ok kripa from the first time I met you were like an angel came from above ever since childhood I have always had crush on you even when you danced with all those guys it made me jealous kripa I love you more then a friend until you hadn't kissed I would have never figured out that you loved me all I want to say is kripa that I want you to more then a friend I want to be my girlfriend kripa im saying this from my heart I love you forever will if u reject my love we can always remain friends I have kept quiet about my love for you until you hadn't kissed me I wouldn't have the strength today to tell you how much I love you.

 

Kripa was in tears she was waiting for the same words

 

Kripa: angad do u know how long you took in saying that to me I have always loved you since childhood ur the one I want to spend the rest of my life with I love you a lot

 

Angad: I love you kripa

 

Kripa: aww pineapple you will always be knight and shining prince

 

Angad: And baby girl you will always be princess

 

Angad and kripa were really close to each other they could feel each other heart beats they kissed you know what happens next

 

Note this fan fic will be updated every Friday

 

Preview: New characters

 

 

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oye hoye...Nisha ji, ur on a roll! A kiss in the first part Big smile

Awesome job!....hmm...the preview kinda scares me....are the new characters gonna be positive or...? Ouch

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