da best story evaaaaaaaa please continue soon, i was waiting for some1 to make a fan fic that makes prem jealous cause mukit is with another guy and this story is just simply perfect, please do continue soon!!!!!!!!
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HELLO ERVY1 UM BAK WITH A NEW FRESH IDEA..AND I WILL S0ON UPDATE MY NXT PART AFTER DIS..WELL SOM OF U HAV SEEN IT AND SOM OF U HAVNT IF U DIDNT DEN CHECK OUT MA 1ST PAGE..YOULL SEE WHAT IT IS SO FOR DA PPL WHO SAW IT PARTICIPATE IN DIS LIL GAME..ILL EXPLAIN DA GAME NOW
1. I HAVE A STATEMENT ON DA 1ST PAGE IN BOTTOM OF THE 3 CHARACTERS PICTURE {ASK ME IF U DON KNO WAH I MEAN..} 2.EVERY WEEK I WILL UPDATE DAHT STaTeMeNT ON DA 1ST PAGE ACCORDING 2 MY Story line 3. I WANT U GUYZ 2 POST YOUR OWN STATEMENT ACCORDING 2 MY STORY LINE EVRY WEEK. DA PERSONZ STATEMENT THAT IS DEEP AND DA 1 DAH IS DA BEST THATS PERSONS STATEMNTS GOS UP FRONT wit the pics
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recap-prem slaps mukti
mukti- wah da hell do u think of yr self? tumne mujhe mujhe thapar mara
prem- ha mara kya ker logi..u kno waht mein samajh ta tha ke tum bohot achi ladki ho baki stupid ladkiyon jaise nahi ho..jo kuch bhi karay per aaj tumhara character saamne agaya hai..
mukti- thats it keh diya jo tumhe kehna tha tum mere character ke baray mein kuch nahi keh saktay do u get that pahle appne app kko dekho phir logo ke baray mein jo kehna hai kehna. or ha may appne hada ko janti hu so plz leave me alone
prem holds her tight and tellz her look mukti mein janta hu ke wo tumhara boss hai per itnay karib janay ki kya zarrorat thi?
mukti shocked oh my god..how dare u this is my personal matter so plzz stay out of it..
prem- gets mad at her and holds her really tight and sayz tum appne had mein raho kyunki jab tumhare baba ko pata chalayga tab tum janti ho kya hoga
its raining hard and really wind mukti is scared of thunderstorm da loud sound scares da hell outta ha and she quickly gos 2 prmz arm..he is shocked..buh with a pleasant smile..he looks at her..
mukti comz 2 her sence and sayz sorry..
and leaves frm there..prem is happy buh also sad he said alot of bad things and also slapped her
samarth comz bak and drops mukti home.
samarth gos 2 the same club prem went to 😆
prem is totally drunk..and da slap scene is keep flashing in his mind he brakes a glass..with frustration
b4 he can fall samarth holds him and says
kya baat hai sir..yr drunk plz sit down
prem starts 2 talk 2 him
prem- app?
samarth- mein
dis grl pops out all of a sudden..and hugs samrth and is talkin g2 him he suddenly realises he left prem alone in the bar so excuses himself and god bak
prem- hey yr bak..acha yeh batao yeh pyar kya hota hai?
samrth- to aap ek aashiq hai..lol..anywayz nahi mein nahi janti ha per itna janta hun pyar mein neend or bhuk nahi aati..and pyar insan ko bohot satata hai..thats all
prem- tumne kabhi kissi se pyar kiya?
samarth- nahi abhi tak to nahi..
prem- good very good kerna bhi maat
prem- idher aao..close 2 hiz ears he says maine kiya hai kissiko batana nahi 😆 top secret..actually mein khud hi nahi janta but man never fall in love..kyunki pyar bohot assu deta hai especially ppl like me..jab tumhe pyar hoga tum samjho ge
prem sayz out loud maine usse inhi haaton se zor ka cata mara pucho kyun?
samarth- kyun.
prem- kyunki wo meri dil ki dhadkan hai i know sounds 2 filmi per its true mein usse kissi aur ke saath dekh nahi sakta..how funny naa jis ladki ne meri zindagi badal di mein usse itna pyar kerta hun..anywayz sorry yaar app logo ko bore ker diya maine
prem sees this girl with this guy he says good very good tum dono ko appne pyar milla na?..i wish ager mujhe bhi mil jata som ppl arnt that lucky u know with tears in his eyes he repeats ever and ver agaian SOM PPL ARNT LUCKY SOM PPL ARNT LUCKY and brakes another glass samarth tries 2 control him buh he says no dont touch me
prem- ye pyar bhina insan ko poori terha pagal ker dayta hai..pagal jaise mein wo mujhse nafrat kerti hai or mein ussay pyar per kya faida usski nafrat meri zindagi ki sabse bari haar kash mujhe ussay itna lagav nahi hota..kyun kyun mein usske itna kareeb chala gaya...
and he faints..samarth feels sad for him and says
pata nahi bechara kiss ke baray baat ker raha hai wo itna pyar kerta hai ussay or wo haiki usske dil ke baat nahi samjh rahi anywayz i think i should drop him home
umm sorry evry1 plzz sorry music on plz..every1 is dancing
mukti is in her room and is smiling with tears in her eyes..aaj mujhe assa kyun laga ke prem badal chuka hai usski aakhen muhjhse kuch kehna chchati thi..or mujhe or samarth ko saath dekh ker ussay utna bura kyun laga...kya wo mujhse pyar kerta hai..with a sad face she says nahi assa nahi ho sakta prem kabhi nahi badal sakta..wo jaise tha waisa hi hai.. 😭 😭 😭
samrth is confused he dosnt know what 2 do..he says yeh kaha rehta hai god knows..he takes out prems cell frm his pocket and tryins 2 find som1z numba so that thy can tell him his address..he sees a number thats says mother india..
samarth0 mother india?..okkk
prerna- hello
samarth- hello is this mother india 😆
prerna- confused look..umm prem?
samarth- um dekhiya yeh numba mujhe ek aadmi ke cell se milli ahi he is drunk and i was just hoping 2 drop him of mere paas address nahi hai to..
prerna- drunk?..are u talking about prem wo mera beta hai kya hua ussay?
samrth nutttin really wo to sirf he is just 2 drunk bayhosh hai plz give me your address...
prerna- says its ok..h she will come and take him..
samarth- no dont worry hell be safe ill drop him
prerna- ok per samal ke
samrth drops him off and premz eyz are half opened he says mein kaha hu
samarth- look mister.. yeh appka gher hai cmon ill take you..continue s0on...sorry buh got some work 2 do 😊
WOW SUPERBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB omg i love the dialogues...the way you have linked everything!superbbbbbb wonmderful!Amazing!I cant WAIIIITTTT to read the next bit..Have added this on to my fav fan fic list 😃 😛
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