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Bella-Jacob SS updt pg 8

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Posted: 29 March 2012 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
Hi Guys...im Monica..u can call me Monu / Moni whatever u want..lol
Im new in twiligt forum...hope to make friends n hav lots of fun
but not new to IF!!
i just love Bella Jacob pair !!... specially Jacob/Taylor !!..
so i thought to write down something...its short
as i didnt found FF OS SS here
but i did not have the courage to post it
because its my 1st try n im not a writer but a great reader..lol
n dont know if it will appreciate or not!!
so now im ready n posting it!! 
 
--Part 1--
Bella's POV
 
And I was there right in front of him, Jake, my best friend, the only person I cared still something, the only reason why I was still living, after he (Edward) was gone and had left me so .
Jake was there watching me, with his smile was very contagious and I immediately I returned the look, but I soon discovered that he had something strange...he  was ... different.
I could not make sense to look that way but I did not care, he was with me and would always be there, he had promised, and I trusted him blindly.
I looked around and it was all so familiar, I was in Jake's garage, which had now become my hiding place from the outside world.
When I was there a hole in my chest vanished, everything came back to make sense.
I was happy.
Suddenly Jake came up with two huge steps, as always, was shirtless, but now i had got used to it, it doesn't made me embarrassed.
Then he took another step and was now even closer to me ... too close, I felt his hot breath on my lips, I looked up at that new look, more intimate.
Inexplicably that absurd situation did not bother me actually, made ??me feel good ... but it made no sense what was happening, Jake was my best friend, my best friend and that's all!
Then suddenly he whispered  
<<Bella  ... I love you >>
He lifted his huge hand and touched my cheek and I raised my head and crossed his beautiful brown eyes, he was beautiful, bronze complexion that suited him partcularly ..
The head began to spin, but I did not understand why ...
What was happening to me?
Yes, the situation was strange, but why suddenly could not feel my legs anymore?
Why does my heart beating fast every time I looked at him?
I didn't know ... I didn't understand .. anything ...
 
 
Index
 
part 1-pg 1
part 2-pg 4
part 3-pg 8
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Edited by _Monu_ - 25 May 2012 at 2:34pm

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Posted: 30 March 2012 at 8:58am | IP Logged
I like it. <3 would love to read the next chapter.

-Jot.

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Posted: 30 March 2012 at 12:00pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by *Harjot*

I like it. <3 would love to read the next chapter.

-Jot.
 
finally after 36 views someone has like it!!
thanx a lott Jot yaar!!
 
 
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Posted: 31 March 2012 at 3:32am | IP Logged
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Edited by swaron502 - 31 March 2012 at 3:32am

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Posted: 31 March 2012 at 7:48am | IP Logged
Lovely work Dear..Clap

Really i liked it  a lott ..Heart

waiting 4 next part .Day Dreaming

keep it upThumbs Up

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love is never so wonderful in any other story.a perfect combination of  emotions and imaginations.hello to all edward bella fans

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i like it 

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Posted: 02 April 2012 at 5:37am | IP Logged

hey lovely work dear!Clap

i like it.Smile

waiting for next chapter...!Smile

thanx for pm!Hug

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