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ANOTHER LOVE STORY ch 38 pg 146 may 20

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Posted: 26 March 2012 at 11:35am | IP Logged
hi friends...this is a small story...it has limited number of updates...daily update i will try my best...

                     ANOTHER     LOVE STORY 


ch  : 1

it was night 12 clock...in the mumbai airport...



sharma:take care of them beta...(tears welled in his eyes)

shaan:dont worry papa...(pressing sharmas hand...)

vidhya: beta...do u remebered wat i said...

khanak:ummm...(looking far distance)

khanak was standing like a doll...

nikil: mumma...

khanak got nikil from sharmas hand...

vidhya: beta ...i have kept food for nikil in this bag...give him...

khanak just shook her head...

shaan :ok papa  mom take care... we will call u when we reach there...

sharma:bye nikil ...

vidhya: bye beta...

nikil  was shaking his hands  and smiling at them...

shaan:shall we go...

khanak started to walk carrying nikil in her hands...

shaan walking behind them pushing the trolly with luggages...

nikil :mumma...mummum...

khanak stopped and she sat near a chair...nikil  was sitting in next chair...

shaan was looking at them standing near the trolly...

khanak took the bag and took the box and started to feed nikil...

nikil :papa...(opened his arms and calling shaan)

shaan came to him and hugged with smile and placed him on his lap...

khanak was not happy on seeing that...she was expressionless...

khanak was just feeding him...nikil  showing some things and talking in his child 

languagge with shaan...shaan also talking to him smiling and saying 

somethings making him smile...

khanak:nikil ...look this side... eat...

shaan turned on hearing it his knee touched her knee...khanak felt a shiver when his lap

and knee brushed hers...she moved her leg little...

shaan:look here nikil...mummy  is calling na eat...

shaan moved little closer again so that nikil can eat...

khanak felt uneasy...she quickly gave the food and wiped his face with tissue...

they started to walk...khanak carried nikil and walking besides shaan...

they went near the counter to get boarding pass...shaan kept luggage for checking...

boarding pass counter...

lady: ticket please...(with a smile)

shaan:ummm...(with a smile)

lady:shantanu khandelwal...

shaan:ya me...

lady: khanak khandelwal..

shaan:she...she is my wife...

khanak felt shiver and she was about to cry...

lady: nikil  mehra...

khanak:my son...

khanak holding nikil  tighter...tears formed in her eyes...

shaan:my son...

khanak looked at him in tears in eyes...it may fall any time...composed herself quickly...

lady:thank you sir...ur boarding pass for newyork...

they got boarding pass...they finished security check and they got inside the flight...

nikil  was sitting in khanaks lap...

shaan:nikil  ...wana come to me...

khanak :he is my son i can keep him... 

shaans face frowned...but nikil came to shaan pushing khanak ...

shaan had nikil  in his lap and telling him somethings...

khanak layed back in seat closed her eyes thinking of her past life...


hey friends tell me if u like it...

ch 1-pg 1


 














 











 









my first FF LOVE STORY
http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2440139
my second FF KYA JODI YAAR


regards
nikita...



Edited by niki_rbo - 20 May 2012 at 11:01am

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Posted: 26 March 2012 at 11:44am | IP Logged
Yayy first to comment sounds goood niki, keep updating

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Posted: 26 March 2012 at 11:45am | IP Logged
hey niki i was waiting for the new story

seems to be pretty interesting

wht i figured is that its khanak's 2nd marriage

she was 1st married to mehra and yashwanth is her child from the 1st marriage

but em lukin fwd to wht u've stored

update soon

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Posted: 26 March 2012 at 12:18pm | IP Logged
Good story...i think dis is khanak's second marriage..bt i don't like her son name..plz change it...

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Posted: 26 March 2012 at 7:59pm | IP Logged
hey very nice FF...intersting...
khanak's second marriage with shaan and she z having a child...
waiting 4 da next update...

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it seems interesting...egarly waiting for next update

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Posted: 27 March 2012 at 12:06am | IP Logged
hey niki awsome start...Big smileBig smile
i jst wanna knw yashwant is shanak son????? hope so...
n u cn extend dis ff to 20 updates it has so much scope...bring it on niki..
waiting fr nxt part...Wink

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Posted: 27 March 2012 at 12:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aasma1

Yayy first to comment sounds goood niki, keep updating

thanks aasma...

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