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Part 1 Updated

Reconding herself on a cam...

Hi, meye hoon mere papa ki princess (i am my dad's princess) Jiya...and you are watching channel...ummm Jiya ki pagalpan (jiya's madness)...

I love: My pa (though i love calling him pop but he doesnot like that so pa)
I hate: My daddy's grumpy mood
I enjoy: Jalebis and talking to my pa
My fav line: Hey DM
I miss: My Maa
I wish: My maa was with me
I cherish: My birthday...the only day my maa was with me.

Oops...cut cut cut cut. sorry got to go...pa will be waiting for me on the breakfast table...cya soon...love you all...hello hai bye bye (winking her eyes mannu(manorama) dadi's ihstyle).

Daddeee...screaming running down the stairs...bumps into anjali...

Anajli: Jiya...slow down...one day you will hurt yourself...

Jiya: No bui (bua) i am not going to hurt myself...running past her towards dinning table...Paaa hugging arnav and giving him a lip kiss...i love you pa...

Arnav: Oh i love you too baby...where have you been shona?

Jiya: Whispering not satisfied with what arnav just said...papa dont call me shona in front of others...thats during our private talks...pouting her lips...

Arnav: Holding jiya on his lap sorry princess...pakka promise this time.

Jiya: Pa you always promise and and you forget...next time you say i will not talk to you...moving her face away from arnav.

Arnav: Giving a peck holding her chubby cheeks gentleman's promise next time i will not say that in front of others...

Anjali: yeh pa aur beti mein kya khushar pushar chal raha hai? (what talks are happening inbetween the daddy and the baby?) Chalo chalo breakfast karlo (come now eat your breakfast)

Jiya: Bui...where is bhaiya (bro)?

Anjali: He went to play basket ball...

Jiya: Pa even i wanna join basket ball please...

Arnav: Baby you are still young for that...next year you can go with ayush...now come on finish your breakfast fast...its sunday

Jiya: Yeh today is the meeting day with DM...unlike other kids jiya visits Devi Maiya's mandir every sunday...

Arnav: Lets go now...i have to drop you home and then go to office.

Jiya: Will you go up with me in the temple today pa?

Arnav: Jiyaaa...

Jiya: Ok baba...i will not nag you...

Arnav and jiya goes to the temple...

Jiya runs up the stairs goes to the shop from where she takes chunri every sunday...

Jiya: ram ram kaka...

Shop owner: Ram ram jiya beta...how are you?

Jiya: I am fine kaka...how is devi? Fever hai?

Shop owner: Now she is fine...(smiling and thinking that she is just like her mother who cared for all. khushi bitiyan ki parchai hai)

Jiya: Kaka now stop thinking of my maa...i know i am like my maa...and my maa was the best...you please dont feel sad thinking about her.

Shop owner: You are also like your dad...see how you noticed what i was thinking...jiya smiled ear to ear...

Jiya: I am my dad's princess after all takes the chunri and goes to DM. Hey DM. papa ko hamesha khush rakhna...maa ki zada yaad mat dilana unko...woh dukhi ho jata hai...kisiko dikhatein nahi par i can feel the pain...kisi din humko himmat dena taki hum maa ke barein mein unse puch sakey...you know na how he scolded me when i asked bui about my maa. he told me jo kuch bhi puchna hai, i should ask him only...but seeing him like this i am not able to ask him...i am a little scared yuo know when it comes to pa. he loves me a lot but he is that strict...i am the only person in his life jisse dekhke unhe KHUSHI milti hai so i dont want to spoil his mood by asking about maa. But DM i really want to know about my maa. No one shows her picture to me and pa...you know pa...par meye itni jaldi haar manne wali nahi hoon...meye jankar hi rahungi...thows a flying kiss to DM which she claims to be her best friend like her mother. She can share anything with DM more than she can share with arnav.

Arnav: Jiya...we are getting late baby.

Jiya: Sorry pop...oops pa

Arnav: Baby promise me that you will be a good girl in the house...and no shaitani.

Jiya: Frowning her eyebrows, arent you forgetting something pa?

Arnav: Sorry baby, taking u turn goes to the near sweet shop...

Jiya jumps down the car...keeping her eyes wide open...

Shop keeper: Jiya beta here you go with your jalebis

After Devi maiya's darshan jiya and arnav goes to the sweet shop to buy jalebi's for jiya...its her favourite sweet just like her mom.

Jiya: Pa jalebi's are delecious...ummm...i love you pa for this...

Arnav: enjoying jiya's bach pana to the hilt says on you love me for this?

Jiya: No pa i love you i love you i love you for everything and kisses arnav's cheeks with her mouth filled with jalebi's

Arnav: Baby stop doing that...you always spoil my face...

Jiya: Pa you still love me doing it like that...giving him a smirk...

Arnav: Oh really, catching her chubby cheeks rubs his cheek on her...

Jiya: Aao...pa i hurts...why dont you save? all the time i have to remind you for that...meye akeli bachhi kitna kaam karooo.

Arnav: Badmash...bohot bolti ho aaj kal...

Jiya: Maa ki tarha? (like my mom?)

Arnav mood suddenly changed...listening to what jiya just said.

Next part will be coming soon. do give your imputs and comments. thanks



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great startSmile
precap seems to be interesting
do continue,waiting for the update

thanks for the pm

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very nice... continue soon :D
 
*EDIT after your 1st Chap completed
 
OMG loved the conversation between Arnav nd Jiya... I could totally imagine Arnav calling her BABY and shona..Heart it was soo cuteBig smile


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where is maa?waiting

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Awesome! Update soon!

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wowww
amazing start
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