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Posted: 25 March 2012 at 9:41am | IP Logged
Hi Fellas ! this is surabhi again.Many of you all know i had my 12th boards exam which ended and now i am back with a all new idea i hope you all like it.

Note - I recently read Chetan Bhagat's Revolution 2020 and i am highly inspired by that novel so here is a prolouge. 

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Three mistakes of My life

As i stepped out of mumbai airport my gaze felt on the black mercerdes standing infront with a man wearing a black suit. I remembered him but now he changed completely changed. He was though not facing me but i know he has the guilt somewhere which he still instills in his heart. whenever i called him from london he talked with me as i was someone unknown to him. what happened with him , how it happened i dont know and that the question for which i have been seeking answers for long and now i will surely and somehow find it . I kept my hand on is shoulders to which he reacted instant. he turned and smiled "i know this was you raghav " he said and hugged me tightly . though it has been long but his excitement still prevails in his heart "ohh comeon samrat , how you always find that out " . he left out a chuckle "side effects of friendship still prevails " we HI 5 'ed each other and seated inside his car . "it has been years " i spoke seeing the roads of mumbai the place where i used to live years back "10 years approximate " he corrected "man you will never change !" i knew samrat from childhood and i also knew whatever twist or turn takes in his life he never changes his habit of correcting other . 
"so how have been your life " i asked he smiled , there i remember this smile obviously he is hiding something "full of mistakes " he left out a laugh but i sustained my straight face "i would like to learn about that " he looked at me , eyes not so happy "you will get bored " i smiled "i will never get boared learning about your life " he shook his head "its a long story " but i still stood firm on my decision "and i love long stories " he again looked at me " you sure ? " and i nodded and finally he started " then now hear the 3 biggest mistaked of my life " he spoke with teary gaze.

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i hope you all like it do leave comment
love surabhi


Edited by sweetsurabhi94 - 25 May 2012 at 1:38am

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Posted: 25 March 2012 at 10:14am | IP Logged

hahhah exams khatam hogae aur tum agayi na ROFL

ok so revolution 20-20 is a very good novel Embarrassed
and the prologue is nice
interesting
continue soon Hug


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Chapter 1:when i met her first...  http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2902294&TPN=5&#54964226

chapter 2 : reviving the past http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2902294&PID=57780413&#57780413



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Posted: 25 March 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
oopss i think i messed up ur index
i think meine yaha sandwitch banayi hy [=))

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Posted: 25 March 2012 at 10:21am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ramyayuppy

hahhah exams khatam hogae aur tum agayi na ROFL

ok so revolution 20-20 is a very good novel Embarrassed
and the prologue is nice
interesting
continue soon Hug
hey rammy baby...
ji main agayi kal hi toh baat ki thi lol LOL
thanks m glad u liked it Wink
i will for sureEmbarrassed

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Originally posted by ramyayuppy

oopss i think i messed up ur index
i think meine yaha sandwitch banayi hy [=))
nah nah its k ...mujhe chapters ka idea hi baad main aaya tha lol so just chill Big smile

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Posted: 25 March 2012 at 10:37am | IP Logged

WOWW greatt concept!!

eagerly waiting fr ur further updates!!

thanks fr the pm!!Smile

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