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Posted: 27 March 2012 at 5:01pm | IP Logged
dude your FFs are awesome!!!
Loved how you describe Arnav, as a yuvraj, quiet fitting.
Plz do continue soon!!!

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Posted: 29 March 2012 at 6:16am | IP Logged
i read the update in ur blog...
r u going to post only on blog or in IF's also??
and plz pm me for next update...

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Posted: 29 March 2012 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neenamallireddy

<font size="4" color="#990033">i read the update in ur blog...
r u going to post only on blog or in IF's also??
and plz pm me for next update...</font>


I will update on blog only and will pm all you guys. This is a bad work week and will update weekends only
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Posted: 30 March 2012 at 5:23pm | IP Logged
itz really interesting! <33
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Posted: 01 April 2012 at 4:56pm | IP Logged
very interesting premise for a  story
Loved reading it
Can't wait for you next update
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Posted: 01 April 2012 at 10:05pm | IP Logged
Chani, you are the best!!!! Can't wait for your updates!!!
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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 2:20am | IP Logged
Ola Chani!!! Hug
I AM Terribly Sorry for not commenting on any of your updates!Confused Leave alone comment, I didn't even read it properly earlier, but yesterday I got some time out, and I sat here reading all of your updates from Chappy One to Chappy Thirteen!! And My, My!!! It couldn't have been better!!!
You are a phenomenal Writer, Chani Di!!! It is AWESOME, AMAZING, BEAUTIFUL, ENCAPSULATING, LOVELY, HORRIBLY GOOD!!!!! All the BEST adjectives in the dictionary, can be used to describe this Phenomenal, Historic Story!!!!! Dancing The backdrop is one of the most perfect one's you'll ever get, for their Never Dying Love!!! Embarrassed
Every chapter had at least a small scene comprising of their encounter or fall out, anything, but you gave us lethal doses of them in every chapter, with sensuousness Blushing weaved in through and through from the start to the end!!  Day DreamingI, at a time, actually felt like I was reading a Mills n' Boons story, written by YOU!!!! God!! Embarrassed Wouldn't it be lovely to publish it into a book, in the category of Historical Romances, that has just released a few of it's first ventures this June!!!!!! Wink
I would like to dedicate a poem written by me to you and your Magnificent story... Here goes...


Bas..Chhod Diya Yaheen..

Suno suno, yeh taare mere..
Jade hue hain jo iss kaale andhere mein..
Maa-baap ki jo chhaaya deti hain mujhe..
Tujhse ek baat kehni hain..

Zindagi ne aapko chheen liya mujhse..
Le gayi voh vaapis aapko vahi pe..
Jahaan sab hain baraabar ki baat, baraabar ka pyaar
Aur khwaahishon ki bauchhar..

Chhod gayi mujhe akela,
Ladne duniya se yaheen..
Rajkumari hoon ya nahi,
Bataake bhi nahi gayi..

Bas.. chhod diya yaheen..

Yaadon ke saath ji rahi hoon apke,
Sapnon mein ud rahi hoon khulke,
Aazadi jo di thhi aapne,
Chhin gayi ek hi pal mein..

"Sapne dekhna koi paap nahi,
Puraa karne mein koi rukaawat nahi",
Kahaan thha Aapne mujhse yaheen..
Saath nibhaane ka vaada kiya toh nahi,
Lekin maine maana yahi,
Par le gayi mujhse door apko zindagi,

Bas...Chhod Diya Yaheen..

Ladti rahi main Khud se,
Unke rang mein na dhalne ki koshish se,
Unke rivaazon mein na bandhne ki koshish se,
Apna haq maangne ki chaahat se,
Udne...ki chaahat se, Azaadi ki maang se,
Ladti rahi Main, Apne aapse..

Phir ek din, aayi main yahaan,
Ik jagah jahaan,
Baatein karti thhi Hawaa,
Jahaan thha khula Aasmaa.

Ek din, Voh mila mujhe,
Jodhpur ke Yuvraj thhe,
Chhua usne mujhe aise,
Ki Dill khil uthha Khushi se..

Dikhaaya usne mujhe apni Zindagi,
Sparsh thhi har jagah, Prakruti ki,
Khushboo thhi Azaadi ki,
Aur Asmaa.. bas khatam hi nahi hoti thhi..

Udne ki koshish toh ki,
Par main bandhi hui milli,
Pankh lage thhe lekin,
Udne ki chaahat...Voh nahi milli..

Makhmali Chaadar ki tarah, Usne mujhe odhliya..
Chhukar, yeh ehsaas dilaaya,
Ki, Main hoon ik Naadaan Parinda...

Jaise jaise pal beet-te gaye,
Vaise vaise hum paas aate gaye..
Aur ek din vahi hua jo hona thha...
Humein ho gaya...Pyaar.. ek doosre se..

Saasein thhami,
Dhadkane milli,
Nazrein doobi nigaahon mein, ek doosre ki,
Rishta aise juda ki,
Ban gaya ek atoot sa vaada,
Jo pura hoti hi gayi...

Humaari aatma ek ho gayi...

Sapne hue sach mere,
Sapne hue sach uske,
Kyunki dono ke thhe vahi sapne..
Jab jud gaye hum is atoot se rishte mein,
Toh pata chala ki hum dono hain,
Iss duniya mein Naadaan Parindey...

Ghar laut ke aaya mera mann,
Vaapis laut ke aaya mera tann,
Bandhi hui Naadaan main,
Azaad ho gayi ek hi jhatke mein..
Udne ki chaahat puri hui meri,
Saans lene ki Raahat aakhir mein mill gayi..

Lekin aisa kyun hota hain,
Ki sapne dekhte hain,
Aur puraa kar bhi lete hain,
Uss Khushi mein jab hum behte rehte hain,
Lehre jab humein pyaar se chhoote hain,
Unhi lehron ki aakaar itni badi ho jaati hain,
Ki sab...sab kuch ek hi pal mein,
Kho jaata hain...?

Dhoka milla mujhko,
Zindagi se,
Dhoka milla mujhko,
Pyaar se..
Chhin gaya voh sab kuch mujhse,
Jo bhi thha bacha paas mere...

Thod diya mere dill ko usne,
Vaade nikle sab hi jhoote,
Thod diya iss rishte ko usne,
Itni Asaani se,
Ki pata bhi chalne nahi diya,
Ki sab khel thha racha uska...

Jo pehle hua, hua vaheen,
Zinda Khushi ko maar daala vaapis yaheen,
Saason ko le liya, bas shareer ko chhod diya yaheen,

Bas..Chhod Diya Yaheen..

Ab bataaon mujhe,
Taare mere,

Kya main Zinda hoon?
Kya main...Zinda hoon?

*wiping tears and sweat off my eyes and forehead, respectively* Phew!!! *sniff* Well, I was actually crying while writing this thing out!! Cry You know, I wanted to feel the pain that she went through after the announcement of Arnav's marriage to the Princess of Merwar/Mewar!! Broken Heart Of course this is from Khushi's point of view! Because most of the story focuses more on Khushi rather than Arnav!! :D Well, it's my POV!!!
Thank you for all the PMs, Chani Di!!! Hug
Love ya loads!! Heart

Annie Star
P.S.: Do tell me how my poem is!! I'll be posting it in my collection!!! :D



Edited by AnnieKittWatt - 07 June 2012 at 11:13am

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Posted: 07 June 2012 at 10:04am | IP Logged
Annie my sweetheart what a wonderful comment i have tears in my eyes . Thank you . It was a very trying day for me today and this really made me so happy.

Thank you thank you

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