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Hail guys!
Don't kill me for this. I know its bit apprehensive but when a thing comes to my mind, I just pen it down and later the urge to post never keeps me off posting.
Here's my new FF. Though I don't know how long it would be as i have not decided the next parts yet.
The story is completely different from the serial so don't judge it on the basis of it.
Please do comment and tell me how u liked it. It will only make me decide whether to continue it or not.
Here's an Intro to the FF and characters. And a short start.
Hope you all will like it.
Author's intro to the story
The story revolves around two cities- Rishikesh and Chandigarh. The story of three girls - Maanvi, Jeevika and Maya; and of two boys- Viraat and Viren.
The story of love which got messed due to certain circumstances. Unusual circumstances. Fate played a vital role in making them meet and then separating them.
Its due to the unexpected events that happened in their lives, making it most confusing but a unique Love story.
Author's Intro to the characters.
It was a VirMaan SS, so i had to write from the perspective of Viraat-Maanvi. According to the story Maanvi and Maya are sisters unlike serial.
Maanvi - she is bubbly and chirpy but has an unique quality to understand people's psyche. She is a bit serious on worldly matters unlike our Maanvi.
Maya - her character is similar to that of in serial with only addition that she is possessive and impulsive.
Jeevika - she is very good friend of Maanvi though she doesn't like Maya but do not hates her.
Where as Viraat and Viren are college Friends. They met in college campus and became 'Hi-Bye' friends. The only thing connects them is their friendship with the same girl!
Wrongly Love
[Just a start]
Packing almost done.
"clothes"
"kept"
"sweaters?" Maanvi asked. looking up from her novel- Jane Eyre.
"No, I would not need them. If i'll then i'll buy one or two there." answered excited Maya.
"Mannu... I am so excited." Maya cried with a bright smile on her face. "I am so lucky na... finally Biji agreed to send me to Chandigarh for this short trip. I am on cloud nine.. pinch me pinch me let me know its not a dream." she jumped and danced in excitement.
"This is the truth... you are actually going to Chandigarh. I am so happy for you... who else is going from your batch?" Maanvi smiled seeing her sister happy and asked quietly.
"Shubhi, Kalika, Dolly, Viraat and Viren and I" she told.
"But they all are your seniors. I am asking -from your batch who is going?" Maanvi again tried to inquire.
"No one from my batch is going. They all are cowards. I am going with my seniors." Maya said making faces. "actually Viraat invited me for this tour and you know I couldn't just say a NO to him. And you know his family lives their in Chandigarh. He wants to introduce me to his family." She hugged Maanvi in happiness.
Maanvi sighed. she smiled and said," So finally you both decided to take your relationship on next level" she hugged Maya back.
*~*~*~*
Okay that's it!
hated it or liked it?
do respond.
There is much more to come in this FF don't be disappointed after all its just the beginning.
Love.Priya
Don't kill me for this. I know its bit apprehensive but when a thing comes to my mind, I just pen it down and later the urge to post never keeps me off posting.
Here's my new FF. Though I don't know how long it would be as i have not decided the next parts yet.
The story is completely different from the serial so don't judge it on the basis of it.
Please do comment and tell me how u liked it. It will only make me decide whether to continue it or not.
Here's an Intro to the FF and characters. And a short start.
Hope you all will like it.
Author's intro to the story
The story revolves around two cities- Rishikesh and Chandigarh. The story of three girls - Maanvi, Jeevika and Maya; and of two boys- Viraat and Viren.
The story of love which got messed due to certain circumstances. Unusual circumstances. Fate played a vital role in making them meet and then separating them.
Its due to the unexpected events that happened in their lives, making it most confusing but a unique Love story.
Author's Intro to the characters.
It was a VirMaan SS, so i had to write from the perspective of Viraat-Maanvi. According to the story Maanvi and Maya are sisters unlike serial.
Maanvi - she is bubbly and chirpy but has an unique quality to understand people's psyche. She is a bit serious on worldly matters unlike our Maanvi.
Maya - her character is similar to that of in serial with only addition that she is possessive and impulsive.
Jeevika - she is very good friend of Maanvi though she doesn't like Maya but do not hates her.
Where as Viraat and Viren are college Friends. They met in college campus and became 'Hi-Bye' friends. The only thing connects them is their friendship with the same girl!
Wrongly Love
[Just a start]
Packing almost done.
"clothes"
"kept"
"sweaters?" Maanvi asked. looking up from her novel- Jane Eyre.
"No, I would not need them. If i'll then i'll buy one or two there." answered excited Maya.
"Mannu... I am so excited." Maya cried with a bright smile on her face. "I am so lucky na... finally Biji agreed to send me to Chandigarh for this short trip. I am on cloud nine.. pinch me pinch me let me know its not a dream." she jumped and danced in excitement.
"This is the truth... you are actually going to Chandigarh. I am so happy for you... who else is going from your batch?" Maanvi smiled seeing her sister happy and asked quietly.
"Shubhi, Kalika, Dolly, Viraat and Viren and I" she told.
"But they all are your seniors. I am asking -from your batch who is going?" Maanvi again tried to inquire.
"No one from my batch is going. They all are cowards. I am going with my seniors." Maya said making faces. "actually Viraat invited me for this tour and you know I couldn't just say a NO to him. And you know his family lives their in Chandigarh. He wants to introduce me to his family." She hugged Maanvi in happiness.
Maanvi sighed. she smiled and said," So finally you both decided to take your relationship on next level" she hugged Maya back.
*~*~*~*
Okay that's it!
hated it or liked it?
do respond.
There is much more to come in this FF don't be disappointed after all its just the beginning.
Love.Priya
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