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MG ff Love Blossoms, THD 1,THD 2 UPDATING MAR-17 (Page 81)

Donnaa IF-Addictz

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WinkAll ff writers i love u all ,u r making my day complete wit maaneet by ur writings.. i love u all.. inspired wit ur writings i falling in love wit maaaneet madly so for showing my feelings for maaneet i too started to write ff wit all ur blessings nd love.. if i hav made som mistake forgive nd support me...Embarrassed

Blossoms - 29

At around 2'clock

Maan   got up  and saw Meena was stil   wake up and massaging his legs , Maan was so shocked

Maan : maa  u didt sleep

At time Prabu came

Prabu : no Maan she wont sleep if her childrens  are ill

Meena : Mama

Prabu see Geet who sleeping on te chair itself..

Prabu : wat to do  with tis girl

Prabu carrys Geet and  placed her on te couch and tuck with duvet. He kissed her

Geet in her sleep :  gudngt paa,

Prabu  smiles : love u maa

Geet : love u paa

Maan looks at her and Meena

Meena :  wat   Maan,  in her sleep too  she will recognize  paa's touch, both girls love paa so much

Prabu : r u jealous Meena , that two girls on my side and only one in ur side

Meena : why should I feel jealous, now I too hav 2 of them in my side, my two sons, Maan and Karthi. My two sons love me more than ur girls  loves  u

Maan smiles at them

Prabu : then I should more careful

Prabu see Maan stil wake up : why Maan ur still wake up

Maan : no paa now only I got up

Prabu : yaa wen we are ill we wont get nice sleep, but I have a solution for tat

Maan : wat paa

Prabu winks at Meena,  Meena  took  Maan's head and placed in her lap and started to caress

Maan was  so shocked  and see  Meena, Meena  closed his eyes, after some time, Maan slept

Meena : Mama  u go and sleep I will look after him

Prabu : ok meena

Meena : mama u had ur medicines

Prabu : hmmm, and he leaves

Morning  Nakul came to see Maan, and he was shock to see Maan is sleeping on Meena's lap and Meena was caresing his hair, resting herself on te bed post

Nakul : maaji u didt sleep full night

Meena : shhh he is sleeping and she    made Maan to sleep on te pillow  and gets up

Nakul : how is Maan baba

Meena : now he is ok, his fever reduced little bit

Nakul  : I will bring coffee for u maaji

Meena : Nakul ji I will make coffee and breakfast for all

Nakul  smiles at her : ok maaji

Meena  got ready, did te pooja and went to te kitchen to make breakfast, Nakul helped her to get te ingredients.

Prabu was  reading news paper in te hall, and rajji came rubbing her eyes

Meena came with coffee and gave to them

Prabu : were is  Karti

Meena : went for jogging

Prabu : hmmm, how is  Maan

Meena : he is ok now, sleeping

Meena went to  wake up Maan and Geet

Meena wakes  Maan ,   Maan got up, Meena  touch his head and saw how is his fever and kissed him on his forehead

Maan was  so shocked and overwhelmed by her love,  then Maan went to freshen up,  and he took his coffee

Meena  went to wake Geet  : Geeta  wake up see te time

Geet : maa leave me

Meena : Geeta wake or else

Geet  : maa ur too bad always wakes me wen im hugging my Gurmeet, goo maa, saying tis she pulls her duvet and covers herself fully and slept again

Meena    pulls her duvet and make her to sit : Geeta I said get up

Prabu : why u  shouting at my  chellam (sweetheart)

Geet  wakes up closing te duvet on her head .

prabu sits next to her and Geet rest her head on him

Prabu : how are u Maan

Geet : ah Maan how u feel now

Maan : hmm im fine paa

Geet : fine, see ur face, with in one day u became so pale

Maan glares at her

Meena :  Geeta stop don't tease him, take ur coffee

Maan :  Geet u didt brush

Rajji came there : mama u dot know she loves to have bed coffee without brushing

Geet glares at her : no no today I forgot

Maan smiles at her

Geet : hello mister don't laugh,  yes I love to hav wat u will do go and showed her tongue to him

Meena : now every one stop, I prepare breakfast, u all go and get ready

Maan : maa Nakul is there he will prepare

Meena : no Maan I will prepare for my kids

Maan smiles at her : maa were is Karti

Meena : he went to jogging paa

Geet : Maan he wants to get 6'PACK,  with a teasing tone

Maan : wat is there any one can get tat if we do regularl exercise

Geet : no way, only my  Gurmeet, can have it, Maan u have to see his 6 pack oh god, I will die for his 6 pack , how  hot he will be

Maan chock te coffee, and glares at her. Meena  taps his head to soothe him

Prabu : Maan  r u alright

Maan : hmmm paa

Then every one  went frehen up

Meena brought te breakfast to  Maan's , and everyone  settled they to  have breakfast together

Maan : Karthi u went  for jogging

Karti : yes mama

Maan : Karti u can use  my gym, all equipments are there

Karti : really mama,thanku mama

Maan : ahh u can use and make ur body fit

Geet : but only for four days, them Maan will go to Delhi

Every one : WAT

Geet :  ahh maa he is going to his home

Every one became sad

Maan stare at her

Geet : now wat I did  

Maan : maa I will cum often to see u all, pls maa

Meena smiles : its ok Maan u have to go, naa ur family is there

Prabu : don't worry Maan  we know our Maan will cum to see us

Maan smiles

Meena feds te  idle  with  sambar to him, and  Maan ate

Geet : Maan till u get well , u hav to eat only tis idle no pasta wasta

Maan glare at her

Karti : maa I will drop Rajji to te college and u Geet ,

Geet : no im in leave till Maan is fine

Maan  looks at her

Rajji : if ur RAKSHASHAN BOSS scolds u

Maan  glare at Rajji and then Geet

Maan : Geettt

Geet : so wat I will resign him from his post

Maan  cough  and Meena  gave him water, while everyone started to laugh and Maan smiles

Nakul was watching all these from outside and had tears in his eyes and went out. At tat Dadi calls Nakul

Nakul : hello

Dadi : Nakul, wat happen to Maan's phone, its switch off, were is he

Nakul : Dadi he is not well

Dadi : wat , how, why u didt inform me

Nakul : Dadi first listen to me  and he started  to say everything wat happen and how Geet's family taking care of him

Dadi was so happy and had tears : Nakul u gave a very good news, im so happy, ok look after him, I will call u later.

Dadi (st): now my Maan got a family  through   Geet, she was so happy and prayed to god to give tis happiness forever.

Te days went , like Meena look after him and  Geet spending her time with him.

After  two days ,

Maan : maa I want  to go to Delhi 2mor morning flight

Meena : wat

Maan : yes Maan, in office some problem, so I hav to look after tat

Prabu : ok Maan , Meena pack his dress, and Maan today we spend our day with u

Maan : ok paa

Meena cookes all Maan's fav , and every one had they dinner and wa  chatting te whole night

Morning , Meena  wake everyone and gave them coffee and Maan started to get ready. All went to airport to send off him

Geet was so sad : Maan take care

Maan smiles at her : yes Geet, I will call and we will be in chatting

Geet : hmmm

Meena : Maan  take care of urself and she gave  packet

Maan : wat is tis

Prabu : some sweets and gifts for ur family

Maan :paa, and  he bends and took they blessings

Prabu hugs him and Geet pouting her lips

Maan : Geet I will promise I will call , now smile pls

Geet : ok, then after u reach ur home  u should call me

Maan : hmmm

Geet : no tension, or stress , still u are not fully recover

Maan nodding like a child : hmmm

Geet : I will miss u Maan

Maan looks at her : me too Geet, and thanks

Geet : for wat

Maan : for everything

Geet : Maan if u say thanks I wont talk to u

 Maan : ok ok im sorry and bites his tongue, no thanks and no sorry

Geet smiles at him , Geet and Maan was looking at each other

Geet : bye Maan

Maan : bye Geet

Karti and  Rajji : bye mama

Maan : bye

Geet : Nakul bhaiya bye take care of Maan

Nakul : yes baby, and bye

Maan left te airport  and Geet's family  went to home.






next part - part 30



Edited by Desigirls12 - 12 November 2012 at 7:08am

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tamanna1391 IF-Stunnerz

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finally maan left awsem update

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Fantabulous they all cared for maan aur maan back to delhi feels sad par precap sounds interesting

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kavya.sravya Goldie

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Posted: 01 November 2012 at 6:17am | IP Logged
so maan left to delhi... a changed person ! now what is going to happen ? how they are going to meet again ? when will this friendship change into something more deep...

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wowww u update let me read first 

nalni dii fast fast update dooo

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wowww u update let me read

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