OS Virman: To new beginnings, part 3(last) on pg10 - Page 4

Originally posted by: nishi12345

i liked it a lott

and it was short yaar

bt i dont mind u please pm me soonwen u cont

loved it

Hey, I just read both parts and loved it! Your writing style is really good, Eagerly waiting to know what happens next 😊

Wow... Dear loved it... U r awesome in moulding things man... Really dis s d perfect scenario... D bedroom tension... Virat and manvi both confusd nd tensed... Will be waiting 4 next update... How dey overcome dis tension... And lot more things... Hats off 2 u... U convertd 2 words in an awesome ss... Love u...

Originally posted by: Shivrajput52

Wow... Dear loved it... U r awesome in moulding things man... Really dis s d perfect scenario... D bedroom tension... Virat and manvi both confusd nd tensed... Will be waiting 4 next update... How dey overcome dis tension... And lot more things... Hats off 2 u... U convertd 2 words in an awesome ss... Love u...

Originally posted by: booksfreak07

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[DIV]I have no idea whether there going to be sexual tension, but lots of tension otherwise, Awhh... Thank u dear... Will be waiting..!!

that was a nice update pm me the next 1!!!!

hey
It was really cute . Waiting for the next part. So u gotta update soon.

Great update..!

Omg! 

loved it!!! THX FOR THE PM!!! keep writting!!!