SS: Part 5 My Avenging Angel (Jealous Khushi) - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update.πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘β­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈβ­οΈ
Loved it. WHy couldn't they say that they missed each other. Ufff😑😑😑
Can't wait to read more.
Continue soon. Thanks.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
oh god!i can feel all d bottled up emotions u tried to portray...it was very emotional...can fully understand their pain...they both do not want to let go yet r doing so 4 d apparent happiness of their partners which they do not realize lie with both being together...very beautfully written...cud u plz pm me when u update next tym???
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Fantastic .. Really good at writing .. I can so picture this scene .. It made me cry !! continue ! x
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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
oh HOW I LOVE AGGRESSIVE KHUSHI AND  SOBER  ARNAV...;-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Loved it   😊 !!!!  You are an amazing writer !!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh gosh! This party has become an emotional show down! Arnav still wearing the ring is too cute, him taking it off and giving it back to her made me wanna cry out!! Oefff you laad governor! And the princess, princess makes me wanna slap him! Hahahah plus I love Anjali going back to the real Anjali - not the dreamy: I'm a barbie girl, living in a barbie world one we see sometimes! Great update!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Loved it.
Waiting for the next part.
Hope both of them realize the concern for each other.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
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I was quite curious about your SS. I read all the parts and I am liking this.

Even though never have been fan of melodrama, but I am liking yours.

This seems Khushi does not want his guilt, but she wants him to fight for her. While Arnav has given up on Khushi as he thinks she is better off without him.

I had a feeling you will show a jealous Khushi and I am glad you did. 

Please bring that original ASR back.This does not suit him lol.

You have written their parts well. 

Please do continue. 




Edited by sunflower52 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
very thoughtful and wonderful...great😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
Wow!.. This Is Relii Awesome.. Keep It Up!..