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Hey guys, this is going to be a short story exploring the "what if" scenario if Kesar never left for hostel and did not discover Dushy's secret for a while, his growing attraction for Gulaal and Gulaal's handling of the situation and ofcourse the confrontation after the secret finally comes out...I am not going to re-write the entire journey just some specific scenarios that will be altered to how I would perceive it but the goal still remains same in IT term this is called variable analysis throwing different information at a situation while keeping the end objective in mind...Please let me know if you guys will be interested in reading it...
Dedicated to Jzee
Clock stuck 11.00pm increasing Gulaal's anxiety manifold, all her anger from the afternoon having read a note from Kesar's School Headmaster already thing of past, Worried and fearful about his whereabouts at this late hour, she decided to go and look out for him, overruling MB's order forbidding the same...
Having searched all the known hideouts, her heartbeats were rising steadily with each failure, It was unlike Kesar not to come and seek answers to his questions, in all of last two years of knowing him this was the first time where he had decided to keep what happened in the school to himself, "Kaha ho tum Kesar, Hey bhagwaan mere Kesar ki raksha karna, main tumhare har sawal ka jawab dene ke tayar hu Kesar bus ghar wapas aa jao jaldi se"
Knowing Gulaal will not take kindly to his skirmish in the school and all his questions will meet the same fate as his past queries, he was hell bent on buying time away to reflect on all those inner turmoil that he had been experiencing off late which started from innocent remark from his classmate about having a beautiful wife awaiting anxiously his return from school, what did he really mean, and why did that other fellow smiled as if there was more to this remark and why did MB wanted him to move into a separate room now, he always slept with Gulaal since the day Vasant bha left both of them and went away never to return, Why did Gulaal get angry at his remark to Talli about not walking into their room unannounced ,he has never been shy of changing clothes in front of Gulaal but that did not mean same rule applied to Talli, after all Gulaal was his wife, that's what everyone says right...
Chapter 8 and 9 - http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2887260&TPN=19http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2887260&TPN=54
Chapter 26 Part II http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2887260&TPN=57
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Oh wow Aditi ..I want updates every hour RES
My Haseen Qatil...Tu sach mein mujhe jaan se maar degi yaar.
First of all huge huge thanks for starting this..I always wanted to write something on this.Thanks for making my dream come true.Who will be a better person than you who can delve into the mind of Kesar -a growing one and bring out the tiniest details about his changing feelings for Gulaal.
Aditi I agree with Mini...Kesar's statement was such a poignant one -"Mera bachpan chin gaya Gulaal.."
Yes!! A 12 year old boy just matures overnight into a pati.This theme is so so gripping as Teenage is not merely about growing physically but a lot more changes occurs psychologically.No wonder Teens is a very tender age..which lays the foundation of your future.I am so desperately looking forward to the updates from now on...Coz I just can't wait anymore for the little details from you..My huge hugswa to you..
Please update pretty soon
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