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FF- Pyar, Ishq Aur Mohabbat. Ch 20 pg 51, 29th dec

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Hello guys...So this is the first tym I'm ryting a FF...Plz read it and comment abt it... Need ur encouragement Smile


Pyaar, Ishq aur Mohabbat

Index- 

Chapter 1- Page 1

Chapter 2- Aankhon ka jadoo & sanjana- The love guru Page 4

Chapter 3 - Mujhse friendship karoge- Page 5

Chapter 4 - The beginning of friendship- Page 7

Chapter 5 - Life took a turn- Page 8

Chapter 6- The pain of separation - Page 10

Chapter 7- Arohi & Anant- Page 12

Chapter 8- Best friends forever- Arjun & Arohi- Page 14

Chapter 9 - Fight for Love- Page 17

Chapter 10- Ye Rishta Kya Kehlata Hai- Page 19

Chapter 11- Mohabbat Ka izhaar- Page 22

Chapter 12- Love or Friendship- Page 25

Chapter 13- Kitani Mohabbat Hai?- Page 27

Chapter 14- The three most beautiful words- Page 30

Chapter 15- The fear of loosing someone- Page 34

Chapter 16- A new feeling- Page 37

Chapter 17- The power of true love- Page 41


Chapter 18- Hona Tha Pyaar..Hua Mere Yaar- Page 44

Chapt
er 19- Moments of love- Page 47

Chapter 20- Ritika's revenge- Page 51


Characters-

Arjun - A middle class 19 years old college guy who strongly believs in love.
Arohi- A middle class 18 years old college gal who does not want to fall in love as she just wants to love her mom and noone else.
Arjun's mom, Arjun's Dad, Arjun's Bro, Arohi's Mom.

Introduction- 
A story abt two love birds, who always had been dreaming abt their love...Wondering if love actually existed or not...Ek dooje ke bina ek dum adhoore aur jab mile to sab kuch badal gaya! 

Story- 

Ek Nayi Subah, Ek nayi shuruaat...Kuch Sapne, Kuch armaan...Arohi Ki zindagi ki ek nayi shuruat hone ja rhi hai...Uske college ka ye pehla din...Naye friends banane ki excitement...Ek nayi duniya me kadam rakhne ki khushi. Subah hote hi wo apne college ke pehle din k shuruat karne k tayyari me lag gai. Apni Maa ka aashirwaad le kar ek nayi manzil ki or badhi...

Arohi thinking- "Bachpan se hi pyaar ke baare me dekhti , sunti aur padhti aa rhi hu. Pyaar aksar is umar se hi shuru hota hai. Kya aisa mere saath ho sakta hai? Kya Pyaar Naam ki cheez duniya me hoti hai bhi? Kya koi insaan kisi ke liye uski zindagi se bhi zyada important ho sakta hai? Mere liye to meri Maa ke alawa aisa koi nahi hai apni life mai. Ye sach ho bhi sakta hai ki hum kisi ek insaan ke liye apni poori duniya chodne ko tayyar ho sakte hai? Agar meri zindagi me aisa koi aa gya to? Nahi! Mai apni Maa se zyada aur kisi se pyaar nahi kar sakti. Ye Pyaar sirf sunne, dekhne aur padhne me hi sach hota hai. Agar ye real life me sach hai to mujhe use dekhna hai"

Arohi apni car se utar kar college me apna pehla kadam rakhti hai. 

Doosri or Arjun apne ghar se college ke liye nikalta hai...Aaj uske college ke 2nd year ki shuruaat the. 

Arjun thinking- "Pyaar...Aaj phir wahi baat mere dimaag me kyo aai...Kyo mai phir us baare me aj itne dino baad soch raha hoo...Mai Janta Hoo ye feeling nahi hoti hai...Phir bhi kyo lagta hai ki kabhi mere saath aisa kuch hoga...Kyo? Aaj tak mai itni ladkiyon se mila hoo...Par kabhi bhi waisa kuch mahsoos nahi hue kisi ke liye...Kya kabhi aisa mere saath hoga ki mai kisi ke liye deewangi ki saari hade paar kar jau? Kya kisi ki aankhon me mujhe apni tasveer dekhne ko milegi? Pata Nahi kyo par aisa lag raha hai jaise aaj meri zindagi badalne waali hai" 

Arjun aur Arohi Dono hi pyaar ke ehsaas ko jaante the par kabhi use mehsoos nahi kar paye...Apne pyaar ki talaash me dono aage badhte gae...

Arohi ke pehli class...Pehle din hi uske 3 dost ban gae...Gauri, Ritika aur Sanjana...Wo bahot khush the. Interval ka time hua. Sab canteen me gae. Arohi canteen me apne friends ke saath enjoy kar rahi the. Tabhi Arjun apne friends ke saath wahaan pahucha. Dono alag table pe baithe the. Achanak Arjun ki nazar Arohi par padi aur hat gai. Par wo use wapis dekhne se nhi rok paya. Uski aankhe maano feviquick ki tarah Arohi ke chehre par atak gai...Arohi kaafi der tak anjaan rahi...Kuch der baad use ehsaas hua ke koi use dekh rha hai...Idhar Udhar dekhne ke Baad uski nazar Arjun par padi...Ye dekhte hi Arjun ne apni nazre hata li... Par Arohi ko us wakht kuch bhi mehsoos nhi hua...Par phir bhi wo chup chup kar use dekhti rahi...Arjun khud ko roke bina interval ke baad Arohi ke peeche peeche chala gaya...Uski class tak...Waha kaafi der tak khidki se chup kar use dekhta raha... Uski wo smile, wo adaa mano use dewwana bana gai...Use yakeen nahi hua ki wo kisi ke liye ab deewana ho gaya hai...Wo khud ko rokne ke bawajood nahi ruk paya...Arohi ne ye sab notice kia...Par use ladkon par wishwaaas nahi tha...Use laga ki wo uske saath shayad flirt karna chah raha tha... Par wo chup rahi...Aisa kai dino tak chalta raha...Arjun ki raaton ki neend aur din ka sukoon sab ud gaya...Arohi bhi kabhi kabhi raat me uske baare me sonchne lagti the par use dar tha ki kahi use pyaar na hojae...Woh apni Maa ke alawa aur kisi se pyaar nhi karna chahti the...Kyonki uski Maa ki zindagi me uske alwa aur koi nahi tha aur naa hi arohi ki zindagi me uske maa ke alwa koi aur tha...Uske Papa uske bachpan me h guzar gaye the... 

Ek din interval me Arjun Arohi ko chupke se baat karne aaya jab unke aas paas koi nahi tha...

Arjun- Hi!
Arohi- hi
Arjun- Tumhara naam kya hai? (Waise toh usne sab pta kar lia tha, par phir bhi dosti badane ke liye puch rha tha)
Arohi- Kyo?
Arjun- Tum is college me nai aai ho, Mai yaha ka senior hu...Tumhara naam bhi nhi pta rha to kaisa dost hu mai?
Arohi- Dost?? Hello mai aapki koi dost nahi hu..ok? Mai to taapka naam tak nahi jaanti
Arjun- To usme kya hai...I'm Arjun (wo haath milaane ke liye haath aage karta hai)
Arohi- Dekho mujhe aapse dosti karne me koi interest nahi hai ok? I'm sorry...Plz bura mat maan na...Bye

Arohi waha se chali jaati hai...Arjun ka dil Poori tarah se toot kar reh jaata hai...Par usne tai kar liya...

"Jis pyaar ka intezaar me itne dino se kar rha tha, use mai itni aasani se nahi khone doonga...Arohi I love you...Mai itni jaldi haar nahi maanoonga! "

To be continued soon...


Edited by arjuhi4evr - 29 December 2012 at 7:36am

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bura hi sahi plz comment guys... UnhappyI will try to improve! 
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res..congo dear on ur first ff.add me 2 ur pm list:) will read and cmmnt soon

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Originally posted by sreeja_rox

res..congo dear on ur first ff.add me 2 ur pm list:) will read and cmmnt soon

Thank u!! Big smile
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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 2:25am | IP Logged
@ Arjuhi4evr : Congrats for your first FF. Thumbs Up
 
Story seems to be interesting. For Arjun, it is Love at First Sight...and Arohi is someone who runs away from Love. I can see a glimpse of me in Arohi...LOL Was the same in my college days..LOLLOLLOL
Pata nahi kitno ka dil dukhaaya hain..D'oh
 
You made me recollect my college days dear...Hug
 
Update soon.

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Originally posted by arjuhi4evr

bura hi sahi plz comment guys... UnhappyI will try to improve! 
 
Awww, don't get upset dear...I am sure all will comment when they come Online. So cheer up nowSmile

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Posted: 14 March 2012 at 2:32am | IP Logged
wow
welcome dear
nice update
ya ofcourse continue
and pehle hi najar me pyar 
arjun clean bold hahahhaha

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Originally posted by cooljaya11

wow
welcome dear
nice update
ya ofcourse continue
and pehle hi najar me pyar
arjun clean bold hahahhaha
chal jaldi mission karo apna complete do ghante me nai to tera hitlergiri jo shona kehti hai aj mai khatam kar dungi.:-P hahaha

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