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you are mine only mine my BAATCUTTER!updt pg 135 (Page 6)

alex714 Senior Member

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 11:14am | IP Logged

Thanks for the pm and yaar the nil's rap was sooo nice and hilarious and the update was really fantabulofantastic and mind blowing hai and update ASAP:):):):):):):):)

KriYaansh960 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 11:16am | IP Logged

21Neha21 Goldie

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
amazing update..
loved d rap..
waiting for d next part..
sujana9 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 1:34pm | IP Logged
wow super cute
thnx for d pm
tinatartari IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 2:08pm | IP Logged
besutiful dude
srsly ur writng has a fun filled dose in it
kria1996 Senior Member

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 6:24pm | IP Logged
really good!!
i likd ua rap!!
thank u for the pm..
Zehnaseeb. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 6:43pm | IP Logged

loved the update... mostly the rap... it was amazing...

plzz pm me next timeSmile

nishi_kriyaansh Newbie

Joined: 10 March 2012
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Posted: 18 March 2012 at 4:12am | IP Logged
hey guys back with the updateSmile...


(note:hey am posting u a link so plz  listen to the music n read the scene coz during this scene the background music is playedSmile)
[here is the link:]
frm backside a voice in an angry tone:muje sab pata chal gaya hain!!

all turn back side with a shocked expression n see's  kria standing there.rey was standing infront of her with an expression of "dead now".kria was with an angry exp cing wer standing to right n left leaving space in the middle for them with their heads down..LOLLOL
music stops...
kria comes near rey with an angry look...rey gives an exp of "am sorry"...kria immediately turns toward the gang n says...

kria(fake smile):hey guys!acha hua ki tum logo ko pata chal gaya...
(all wer actually afraid as soon as they see kria smiling they all come n hugs her ...rey thinks that "baatcutter itni jaldi mangayi ..kuch toh gadbad hai"..all wer hugging kria...kria gives them a smile n see's rey with a firce look...rey understood that she is still angry n says to himself "beta rey tuh toh gaya !abb manan padega!kya hoga?universe ji plz iss bar mera saath dhona."...all breaks the hug n pushes kria near rey...kria was about to slip but rey holds her by waist tightly n kria's hands resting around rey's neck..hawa hawa look lookDay Dreaming...all say in unison:awww!!!!...then they both come to their sense n straightens themselves...kria was continue giving firce look to rey n giving fake smile to their friends...rey knew that kria wont fight in front of all she is jus acting that she is okay with it...
sharon:guys!rey n kria commiteed they accepted abb toh party karna padega!!!
rey pulls kria by her waist n towards himself n smiles at them n says :yes...
all wer busy shouting saying:omg kria aur rey!.
but swayam was watching them
he goes near kria's ear n whisper:sorry baatcutter ...maaf  kardhona!
kria:kabhi nahi!!(by saying this she stamps his foot)
rey leaves kria's waist n shouts "ouch!ouch!"
vicky:kya hua bhai??
rey:woh kuch nahi!!maine aapne pao ko hi stamp kiya bymistakenly...
nilesh:guys pyaar andha hai!ye uska best example andha hoke aapne pao ko hi stamp kar raha hai!
rey:nilesh !shut up!
kria:guys mei fresh hokar aati hun!
rey:arey aise kaise??
rey:i mean aise kaise ja rahe hoo muje akela chodkar ..mere pao mei chot lagi hai na...(by saying this he ishara swayam  for help.swayam understand n says "arey guys wo dhono ko akela chod dho nayi nayi pyaar" sharon says "but rey ka pao?"..swayam keeps hands on sharon's shoulders n says "kria hai na ...rey ka PATNI" everyone says :haan haan kria hai na...
by saying this everyone leaves the place n rey starts shouting:AAHHH!!!!KRIYA BAHUT DARDH HO RAHA HAI!!
kria thinks that she had stamped a little hard..she feels sorry for rey n takes his hand n places it around her shoulder's n make rey walk...he was still acting n limping...kria takes rey to her room n makes him place on the bed n she goes for bringing ointment..rey to himself "thnq universeji ek chance dho dhene ke liye!ye hi mauka he kria ko manana padega"...then kria comes n starts applying ointment to his leg...all the time kria was seeing rey was lost in her eyes ...few strips of hair fall on kria's face its irritating her a lot...rey slowly puts the strips of her back n starts tracing her cheeks with his fingers n says her "mere bahut fikar hote hai na tumhe?" kria doesnt answar instead she jus continue applying ointment...rey again asks "mai tumshe hi baat kar raha hun"...kria doesnt respond to him..he immediately pulls her by waist so close towards him their bodies look lik one..but kris was seeing down n saying "rey chod muje!"
rey:jab tak tum meri baat nahi manaugi tab tak mai tumhe nahi choodunga..
kria:rey muje appse koyi baat nai karni...
kria :haan
rey:kria am sorry meine intentionally nahi kiya tha...woh galti se boldiya...ab bahhut force kar rahe the isliye...
kria doesnt respond ,she even doesnt see him
he lifts her chin but she dint raise her eyelashes...
rey:kria pla aise chup mat raho ...i cnt bare it...aise lagtha hai ki koyi muje mar...
as soon as kria hears the word "mar" she see's him n closes his mouth with her hand  n says :"aise baate math karna"(by saying this she has a tear in her eye)
rey see's the tear , wipes it n holds his two ears n says:"am sorry baatcutter..plz maaf kardho na"
kria was touched by his way of saying sorry so she immediately hugs him...rey was shocked by her action but happy that kria mangayi...

precap:bedroom romance...cute  scenes.the gang interrupts then...teasing sessionSmileSmile..

Edited by nishi_kriyaansh - 11 April 2012 at 3:17am

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