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you are mine only mine my BAATCUTTER!updt pg 135 (Page 5)

nishi_kriyaansh Newbie

Joined: 10 March 2012
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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 9:03am | IP Logged
hey guys am back with the update


Rey n kria gets into the car n both of them sit to the corner seats..
driver:mam chale?
kria:haan chalo
driver to kria:madam aapne kuch nahi bula na uss car mein..
kria:nahi aap chaliye...
driver:ok ...
rey was confused n asks the driver:arey thumne toh muje kuch pucha nahin?madam ko hi kyun puch rahe hoo??
driver:woh kuch nahi sab madam ji he na isliye...
rey to himself:sala!mere ladki par hi line mar raha hai!
driver starts the car n they wer going...
rey calls kria silently but she could not hear him she was jus looking outside the window
rey coughs n coughs then kria notices him n see's him n asks
kria:rey aapteek tho hai na?
rey:ha mei bilku teek hun..
rey:waise akar mere pass baito na( he ssigns her to come n sit beside him)
kria(whispers):rey driver hai...
rey:koi baat nahin...plz kriya...(he makes puppy face)
kria:aww...ok ok arahi hun...
9she moves close to him. he catches her hand n kisses it.kria blushes to de core.he started moving her strips of hair n traching his fingers on her face.kria was just blushing she cannot do anythng more than that at that time.driver turns back see's them.then they see driver n comes to their normal position.kria was till side of him but they wer not holding each others hands.)
driver:saab aaop log shadi shudha ho??
rey thinks for sometime smiles n replies:haan hum shadhi shuda hai..kyun koyi prob hai?
kria see's rey with her eyebrows raised n shouts:wat??
driver: kya hua maaam saab kuch hua kya??
kria:kuch nahin bhaya mei rey se baat kar rahan hun.
kria (whispers):hum aur shadi shuda???
rey comes close to her n says in her ears:maine kuch der pehle hi bola na ki thum meri patni ho aur mei tumhara pati.bhool gayi ho kya??
kria(blushing):woh woh...
kria:woh ...kuch nahi...
rey:arey aise kaise.?kuch toh hoga na..
then reach house n kria blushes n runs into the house.rey also goes back of her.kria went inside her room .rey was going n the whole gang stops rey n gives him killer looks by circuling him n not allowing him to escape.everyone was moving around rey in a circle with their killer look..rey was confused.
rey:kuch hua kya?kyun aise dekh rahe hoon sab log??
all(shout):congratz rey!!!!
rey(blushing):thnq guys...
swayam:wah blushing n all ah??
rey is blushing to de core
just then driver comes n handles rey a bracelet n says:saab,aapki paatni ne car mei bracelet gira diya...yeh loo saab
vicky:rey tuje bataya nahi ki tune kisi aur se shadi kar dhi?
sharon:rey yeh shaddi kya hai?
swayam:aur ye paatni ka challar kya hai?
rey:woah woo guys !!sab eek sat?one by one pucho yar...aur driver tum jjaoo
driver goes away...
nilesh:arey sedha sedha bata ye patni ka kya chakkar hai?
rey:woh actually ...(he explains everyth
swayam:kya baat hai bhai ek raat mei hi kriya ko patni bana dhi...wah wah !
nileesh:gimee the beat guyz!!
vicky:dhumdhum chak dhumdhum chak(gives him the beatBig smile)
nilesh:"REy aur kriya kar diya appne fights ko flush
            dhono ek dusre ko dhek kar kartha hai blush
            rey ne kar diya aapne love confess
            aur kriya hogayi rey se impress
            REy ne mauka dhek ke karliya kria ko apni MRSSS"
(note:guyz its my own rap.plz comment how iz itSmile
rey was blushing to the core...
vicky:party tho bantha hai boss!
all:haan hume party chahiye.!!!
rey:par guys kria ko nahin pata hai na!agar usse pata chala ki tum logo ko pata chala toh usne mera wat laga dhegi!

frm backside a voice in an angry tone:muje sab pata chal gaya hain!!

all turn back side with a shocked expression n see's  kria standing there.rey was standing infront of her with an expression of "dead now".kria was with an angry exp cing wer standing to right n left leaving space in the middle for them with their heads down..

Edited by nishi_kriyaansh - 11 April 2012 at 3:17am

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-FrozenRain- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 9:10am | IP Logged
wow such an amazing update.
loved it.
the rap was superb.
thanks for the pm and update next part soon.
Snigs. IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 19719

Posted: 17 March 2012 at 9:11am | IP Logged
Sach mein..loved d rap!!
HR-DMG4life IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 9:18am | IP Logged
thanks for the pm i loved the update :D
The007Shivani IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 9:58am | IP Logged
LOved it and awesome rap and plz update soon and thanks for teh pm loved it tons
crazysky IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 17 March 2012 at 10:26am | IP Logged
he he it was so funny n awesome loved ur rap n

all turn back side with a shocked expression n see's  kria standing there.rey was standing infront of her with an expression of "dead now".kria was with an angry exp cing wer standing to right n left leaving space in the middle for them with their heads down.

this was so fab loved it
Khush94 Senior Member

Joined: 13 September 2011
Posts: 471

Posted: 17 March 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged
it is really very good. keep it up dear
luv_arsha IF-Sizzlerz

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Posts: 10322

Posted: 17 March 2012 at 10:53am | IP Logged
waooo its awesome...loved it very much and that driver hahaha kria par line mar raha thaLOL and kria got to know every thing ab to bechara rey gaya kam se LOL
and the rap was awesome, tooo good

continue soon waiting eagerly for next part

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