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It is just amazing I just read the FF on IF I don't watch the show because it is getting boring and I'm missing shakti a lot in the show can you please PM me when update and PLZZZ continue writing

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i didn'tlike it.

i loved it.

plz continue writing such sweet ss and os.

plz pm me when u write next

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Hey guys am back with the updateWink...sorry for the late updateUnhappy...But will make sure that u ppl will lik this post ...will try my level bestSmileSmile...
chapter:2(a)

Its morning...rey n kriya r sleeping in each otheres arms ,they r looking so adorableDay DreamingDay Dreaming..kriya was holding rey's hand n was resting her head on his shoulder n rey was holding kriya's hand n was resting his head on the seat...sun rays falls on kria n she wakes up n see's rey sleeping he is looking so adorable lik a small baby enjoying his peaceful sleep..sun rays was disturbing rey from sleeping so she slowly removes her dupatta ,moves closer to him n holds the duppata in front of rey's face so that sun rays would not fall on him..she was soo close that she could not breathe properly.she was afraid to breathe because she thought he would wake up by sensing her near him..(note:rey was already awake but pretends that he is sleeping because he wants kriya to come more closerLOLLOLLOL)...he still moves his face as if sun rays is still irritating him..so kria moves a lil bit forward now there is just a millimeter space between their lips..she slowaly comes to kiss him on his lips then he opens his eyes...she felt soo awkward n went back n moved to the other corner n was seeing outside the window.Rey noticed that she was feeling awkward so he comes near her.she was back facing him.he comes near her ear n whispers "its ok baatcuutter mei hi hoon awkward feel math karo ".by saying this he moves her hair n kisses her shoulders,jaw line.kria wanted him more n more.she jus turned back facing him.he cupped kria's face in his hands n started kissing her eyes n says ""in badi badi ankhoon ne muje pagal kardhi".he kisses jawline ,slowly comes up n kisses her cheeks n starts aiming for her lips..he touches her lips with his thumb she shudders with his touch n closes her eyes in reply of acceptance.he was aiming at the lips was coming closer n says "ye thumhare lips muje thume hamesha tere taraf kichtha hai ..aise kichtha hai ki mei apne apko control nahi kar saktha hun.aur lagtha hai ki agar maine thume kiss nahi kiya tho mere jan nikal jatha hai." by saying this he softly presses his lips on her..then rey phone starts to Beep !...he gets irritated as his kiss was disturbed LOLLOL.but he doesnt want to break the kiss he was just ignoring it n kissing passionately.kriya see's the phone n breaks the kiss n says "Rey aapke phone baj raha hai"...still staring at her lips he says "toh bajne dho"..kria replies "Rey utaona lagta hai swayam hoga"..

kria:rey!
rey:hmmm...(aiming her lips)
kria:REYY!!!!
rey comes to his sense :kria kya hua kyun chila rahe hoon???
kria:rey aapka phone bajraha hai lagtha hai swayam hoga utao
rey:arey disturb math karo yar ...waise bhi kitni busy hoon dekh nahi rahe hoon...maine tumhare kiss ke liye salon se intezar kiya.aaj jab mauka mila toh !!(makes an angry baby face)
kria(smiles):arey baba romance toh hum gar jane ke badh bhi kar sakthe hai na...ab hone uta
rey:par sirf ek condition pe..
kria:kya hai woh condition ?
rey:tumhe nibhana padega warna mei tumse baat nahi karronga
kria:ok baba pehle condition toh bata
rey(comes close to her ):gar jane ke badh tume muje akele milna padega aur...
kria(raising her eyebrows):aur????
rey:ek kiss dhena padega...
Rey has that mischevious smile on his face he knew that she wont do it so he jus smiles at her .kria keeps on thinking n lastly she see's him n says "ok!".Rey was totally shocked but he was happy(Rey ke man mei laddo phoot raha haiLOLLOLLOL).Then he checks the phone ther wer already 20 missed calls of swayam.Then he immediately calls swayam n says "arey kya yar tu romantic scene mei hadi ki tarah call karte ho !!" swayam was about to shout at rey for not lifting the call .as soon as he listens rey saying romance he was very happy n replies "matlab tuh aur kriya??tune confess kar le??" rey blushes n replies "haan".(actually till now the call was in conference Big smileBig smileso every one heard it n all wer very happy they all shout at once "congratz Rey".Rey was shocked to hear that everyone knows the matter he did not tell kria that he bymistakenly had said it to everyone.(as soon as swayam lifted the call.kriya went outside the car n was taking to her mom on the pphone) rey in a worried tone says "guys agar kriya ko pata chala ki thum sabko pata hai toh woh muje mar dalige .so pretend karo ki tum sabkho kuch nahi pata" all agrees n says "ok rey as u say"..then swayam says that he had send a car n it ma be arriving at anytime.then reys says "ok "  cuts the call comes outside,same time even kria cuts call n comes near rey n asks "kya hua swayam ne kuch bola ??car bhej rahe hai ki nahi?thumhare baat hui swayam se?" rey pulls her close to him n keeps one hand on her mouth n the other hand was holding her waist tightly. rey says "itne sawal bina break liye?ur such a baatcutter ha!" she sighns him to remove his hand .but rey doenot understand her sighns he go on sking "kya hua?" then she points out her mouth then he understands wat she was saying n removes his hand.he remembers that she was talking with someone on de phone so he asks "tum kisse baat kar rahe the kuch mins pehle?" kria was in a teasing mode so she replies "aapne boyfrnd se " but Rey innocently replies "par mei toh yahi hun na.." kria holds his cheeks n says "aww kitne innocent aur cut ho tum" rey blushes n replies "woh toh hun"..but he asks the same que abt whom was she talkin to then she replies "maa se...bahut dar rahi thi ki mein teek hun ki nahi" rey says "oh sasuma!waise kaho ki tum Rey ke saath ho i mean uske damad ke sath ho vo tention lena bandh kar dhegi" kria shockingly says "humne aab shadi ki kya ..meri maa ko sasuma keha rahe ho aur aapne apko damad keh rahe ho?aur mei aapki patni?" rey smiles n comes close to her n says "shaadi toh mei karlungi woh bhi tumse hi dho mahino ya dho saal ke badh .aur tum mere patni ho officially nahi but tum meri patni aur mei thumhara pathi.samja na ?" kria replies "wah wah kya planning kar li ...planning toh koyi aapse sekh le.." rey smiles n says "woh toh hai.."they smile at each otherSmileSmileSmile
Then a car arrives n the driver asks them whether they r rey n kria.after confirming they get into the car...

Precap:kriayaansh romance in the car...will kria meet rey ??will kria gives a kiss to rey??how will she escape from her friends n go to him??

hope u ppl will lik itSmileSmileSmile



Edited by nishi_kriyaansh - 11 April 2012 at 3:16am

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awesome part...loved it very much
it was very romantic
waiting eagerly for next part continue soon

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Really a romantic one!!!Luvd it to d core..

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