you are mine only mine my BAATCUTTER!updt pg 135 - Page 3

Snigdha

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Posted: 12 years ago

Really a romantic one!!!Luvd it to d core..

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Asma

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Posted: 12 years ago

It was a romantic update. plz update next part soon nd thanks for the pm

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Jeeya_Angel

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Posted: 12 years ago

It was a cute update. Car mein romance hayeee.

Keep on updating

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kria1996

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice!!!

liked it a lot!

update soon

& pm me..😊

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703878

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Posted: 12 years ago

cute update agla part jaldi update karo intezar nahi hota and pm me

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kuhu bhatta

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Posted: 12 years ago

awww its was realy romantic,,,,,luv it

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21Neha21

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Posted: 12 years ago

wonderful update..

loved d romance bw kriyansh..

waiting for d next part..

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Shailja

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Posted: 12 years ago

this ws a reallly vala cute as well as romantic update yaar !!!!❤️

so well thoought nd executed!!!very well done yaar !!!👍🏼

hats off to u dear!!!👏

hehehe...rey ws damn cute at this lines...😳

"arey kya yar tu romantic scene mei hadi ki tarah call karte ho !!"

whenever u update do PM me !!!😊

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742902

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey guys am back with the update

chapter:2(b)

Rey n kria gets into the car n both of them sit to the corner seats..
driver:mam chale?
kria:haan chalo
driver to kria:madam aapne kuch nahi bula na uss car mein..
kria:nahi aap chaliye...
driver:ok ...
rey was confused n asks the driver:arey thumne toh muje kuch pucha nahin?madam ko hi kyun puch rahe hoo??
driver:woh kuch nahi sab madam ji he na isliye...
rey to himself:sala!mere ladki par hi line mar raha hai!
driver starts the car n they wer going...
rey calls kria silently but she could not hear him she was jus looking outside the window
rey coughs n coughs then kria notices him n see's him n asks
kria:rey aapteek tho hai na?
rey:ha mei bilku teek hun..
rey:waise akar mere pass baito na( he ssigns her to come n sit beside him)
kria(whispers):rey driver hai...
rey:koi baat nahin...plz kriya...(he makes puppy face)
kria:aww...ok ok arahi hun...
9she moves close to him. he catches her hand n kisses it.kria blushes to de core.he started moving her strips of hair n traching his fingers on her face.kria was just blushing she cannot do anythng more than that at that time.driver turns back see's them.then they see driver n comes to their normal position.kria was till side of him but they wer not holding each others hands.)
driver:saab aaop log shadi shudha ho??
rey thinks for sometime smiles n replies:haan hum shadhi shuda hai..kyun koyi prob hai?
kria see's rey with her eyebrows raised n shouts:wat??
driver: kya hua maaam saab kuch hua kya??
kria:kuch nahin bhaya mei rey se baat kar rahan hun.
driver:okk
kria (whispers):hum aur shadi shuda???
rey comes close to her n says in her ears:maine kuch der pehle hi bola na ki thum meri patni ho aur mei tumhara pati.bhool gayi ho kya??
kria(blushing):woh woh...
rey(smiles):woh?
kria:woh ...kuch nahi...
rey:arey aise kaise.?kuch toh hoga na..
then reach house n kria blushes n runs into the house.rey also goes back of her.kria went inside her room .rey was going n the whole gang stops rey n gives him killer looks by circuling him n not allowing him to escape.everyone was moving around rey in a circle with their killer look..rey was confused.
rey(confused):gu...gu..guys?
all:haan!
rey:kuch hua kya?kyun aise dekh rahe hoon sab log??
all(shout):congratz rey!!!!
rey(blushing):thnq guys...
swayam:wah blushing n all ah??
rey is blushing to de core
just then driver comes n handles rey a bracelet n says:saab,aapki paatni ne car mei bracelet gira diya...yeh loo saab
all(shocked):patni???!!!!!
vicky:rey tuje bataya nahi ki tune kisi aur se shadi kar dhi?
sharon:rey yeh shaddi kya hai?
swayam:aur ye paatni ka challar kya hai?
rey:woah woo guys !!sab eek sat?one by one pucho yar...aur driver tum jjaoo
driver goes away...
nilesh:arey sedha sedha bata ye patni ka kya chakkar hai?
rey:woh actually ...(he explains everyth
swayam:kya baat hai bhai ek raat mei hi kriya ko patni bana dhi...wah wah !
nileesh:gimee the beat guyz!!
vicky:dhumdhum chak dhumdhum chak(gives him the beatBig smile)
nilesh:"REy aur kriya kar diya appne fights ko flush
            dhono ek dusre ko dhek kar kartha hai blush
            rey ne kar diya aapne love confess
            aur kriya hogayi rey se impress
            REy ne mauka dhek ke karliya kria ko apni MRSSS"
all:wooo
(note:guyz its my own rap.plz comment how iz it😊
rey was blushing to the core...
vicky:party tho bantha hai boss!
all:haan hume party chahiye.!!!
rey:par guys kria ko nahin pata hai na!agar usse pata chala ki tum logo ko pata chala toh usne mera wat laga dhegi!

frm backside a voice in an angry tone:muje sab pata chal gaya hain!!

all turn back side with a shocked expression n see's kria standing there.rey was standing infront of her with an expression of "dead now".kria was with an angry exp cing rey..al wer standing to right n left leaving space in the middle for them with their heads down..😆😆 Edited by nishi_kriyaansh - 12 years ago

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Asma

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow such an amazing update.

loved it.

the rap was superb.

thanks for the pm and update next part soon.

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