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you are mine only mine my BAATCUTTER!updt pg 135

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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Hey guys thought of writing an OS on KRIYAANSH...hope u ppl lik itSmileSmile

CHAPTER :1
Past story:LOUSIANS hav completed their college life.swayam n sharon r a couple ,rey still hav feelings for kria n kria thinks rey as "sirf acche dost".Their collge life completed .all goes to diff places to pursue their dance carrier .rey n kria miss each other ,but they liv in diff states .swaron live together and after two years swaron mariige will be fixed they will invite the whole gang for the marrige .The marrige is for 5 days.all wer happy to listen abt the news of swaron's marrige.Especially Rey becoz he was feeling like hell without kria,he decides to express his love to her at the marrige cermony.

Present story:marrige is held at Mumbai ,its morning 7:00 am n everyone reaches the marrige place.rey see's kriya n feels happy.they smile at each other.(Note:whole gang knows about "kriyaansh" ).TongueTongue
whole gang always tries to bring them together.swaron thinks of a plan n they throw a party ..all had attended the party.On the way back to home swaron somehow manages to send kriya n rey alone in a car in a dark nightBig smile.however rey n kria goes in a car .On the way in the car...

Rey:hi kriyaSmile
kria:hi rey!
Rey:kaise ho?kaise chal raha hai life?
kria:acha hai waise bhi itni interesting nahi hai..
Rey(murmurs):mere bina interesting kaise hogi baatcutter..
kria:kya kaha aapne??
rey:kkk kuch nahi...
kria:hmmm
rey:waise any bf's?
kria:ha...(rey kept a sad baby face ) nahi...(rey gave his million dollar smile)
(while they wer talkin suddenly the car stops as ther was something pprob with the car.Actually car tyre was puncturedBig smile)
kria:kya hua?
(rey gets out of the car n checks what the problem is.kria came out of the car n saw that tyred punctured n starts talkin to her very own UNIVERSE JI!SmileSmile)
kria:hey UNIVERSEJI !!aapne ye kya kar dhi??itni raat me ab ham kaha jayenge??hum kaha hai woh bhi nahi pata!(she checks her cell for signal n ther is no signalBig smile)dheko universe ji ab signal bhi nahi hai?ab hum kya karenge?
(all the time rey was jus cing kria with a smile on his face)
rey to himself:waisi ki waise hai meri baatcutter ..
(kria see's rey ,rey was still lost in her)
kria:rey
rey still watching her with a smile
kria:rey!!!!!!!!
rey:HAAA kria kya hua ?kyu chilla rahe hoo??
kria:ab hum kya karenge?(with a sad baby face)
rey:wait lemme call swayam!
kria:signal nahi hai
rey:oh!toh mai chek kartha hun ki koi stepnee hai ki nahi..
kria:ok wait mai bhi aati hun...
rey:muje chodkar nahi rehsakthi ho baatcutter?
kria:ah...ha...waise nahi hai...bahut andheri hai na muje andheri se dar lagta hai
(Note:there is a street light ova therBig smile)
rey:street light hai na?
kria:phir bhi...
rey(smiles):ok aao
(they check but ther is no stepnee.kria goes on checks her mobile to her luck they got signal for only few mins they called swayam n swayam says that he will send another car by morning n says them to stay ther till morning)
rey:kria tum andhar baito na...
kria:nahi ...
(suddenly the street light gets offBig smileBig smile but ther is moon light n the atmosphere is very romantic)
kria hugs rey tightly!
kria:rey muje bahut dar lag raha hai!!plz muje chodke kahi mat jana!!
rey:kria daroo mat mai hoo na !mai tuje chodke kahi nahi jaunga
kria(hugging):sachi?
rey:(smiles):muchi..Smile

Rey lifts kria's face n kria's face is cupped in rey's hands.
rey:keep looking at me...

Rey n kria HAWA HAWA LOOK LOOK (BG tune:hayee ram)...rey comes closer to kria,he wants to close the gap between them ...he comes so close to her that their two bodies look like one.
kria:rey...
rey:hmmm...(still aiming for her lips)
kria moves away from rey n rey comes to his sense they felt awkward n   wer silent for about 5min .then rey thought of expressing his love for kriya but he wanted to know what she feels for her.kria is leaning towards the car n was lookin here n there.then rey comes close to her ,their starin session continues for 2 mins n kria comes to her sense n tries to escape frm rey's trap .she goes to left but rey blocks with his hand n she goes to her right but ther was no luck fr her rey trapped her with his handson both sides.
kria:rey aap...
rey places is hand on her mouth
rey:kria thume mera saath hone se kuch alag feel nahi hota?tum muje specially nahi dhekthi ho kya?
kria:rey aap mere acche dost ho..
rey:kria jhoot bolna bandh karo muje patha hai ki thum bi mere liya kuch feel karthi ho..
kria:mei kuch nahi feel karti hun
rey:sachi?
kria:haan!
he comes closer n says :agar mei itni pass hota ho tho tumhe kuch farak nahi padtha?
butterflies r flying in kria's stomach.she however controls her feelings n answers:nahi!
he comes more closer :abhi bhi:?
kria finds it difficult to breath but she replies:nn..nahi...
he kisses her on the jawline n asks:abhi?
he goes n kissing...he kisses her cheeks ,fore head,eyes,nose n by kissing he see's every reaction of kria.kria places her two hands on his masculine chest .he feels happy to see that she wants him soo much.he starts aiming for her lips  he comes closer n closer .he clears the gap between their lips .
he kissed her soo passionately ..then kria came to her sense n pulled him n ran few steps from him n starts thinking what had happen.rey was feelin bad he thought that he had done a mistake n think of appologising her.he goes near her ,kria's back is facing him..he says
rey:kria am...am...sorry ...muje pata nahi yee kaisa hogaya but one thnk is true that I LOVE U SOO MUCH n I WANT U IN MY LIFE FOREVER..
anything related to u matters me soo much ...muje pata nahi mai kaise tumhe batadoo ki mai tumhe kitne pyaar kartha hun.mei tumhare binna incomplete hun..i jus cant live...
before he could complete his kria kisses him tightly on his lips .rey was first shocked abt her action but he felt very happy.she kisses him so passionately n rey was on cloud 9.
kria:mai bhi tumse bahut pyaar karti hoon..mai bhi tumhare bina nahi reh saktha hoon.
rey felt very happy by hearing her words
rey:I LOVE U KRIYA !!I LOVE U SOO MUCH!
kria hugs him very tightly .rey hugs her back even more tight.
rey(hugging):baatcutter tum yeh baat mujse kyun nahi kaha jab hum colg mei the?
kria:thab mei dar gaya that muje laga ki aap casinova ho aur...
rey keeps angry face ,then she see's him n says
kria:par aaj muje yeekin hogaya ki aap mujse kitna pyaar karthe hoo.
by saying dis she places her lips on his cheeks n hugs him n says
kria:muje kabhi chodke maat jana rey..
rey(hugging):sochna bhi maat (kisses her fore head)
then rey lifts kriya in his arms n places her in the backseat of ther car n says tum so jao mai bahar khade rahunga
kriya huggs him tightly n says:nahi...aapne wada kiya ki aap muje kadhi codkar nahi jaoo ge..aap mere saat hi raho...agar mere saat nahi raha tho mei aapse bath nahi karingi(keeps a baby face)
rey:ok meri maa !mei yahi rahunga n sayin this he kisses her on the cheek
they sleep in each others arms the whole night...
hope u ppl will lik it...SmileSmile
plz comment karna SmileSmile...aur bada bada comments dhena plzz...Big smile



chapter 2(a):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=3
chapter2(b):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=5
chapter3(a):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=7
chapter3(b):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=9
chapter4(a):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=12
chapter4(b):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=19
chapter5:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=23
chapter 6(A):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=27
chapter 6(B):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=32
chapter 8 :http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=34
chap 9:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=45
chap 10 part 1&2:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=55
chap11:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=66
chap 12:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=73&#56980432
chap 13:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=78
chap 14(a):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=80
chap 14(b):http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=90
chap 15:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=108
chap 16:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=116
chap 17:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=119
chap 18:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=131
chap 19:http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2861655&TPN=135



Edited by nishirockzzz - 20 May 2012 at 9:14am

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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 9:29am | IP Logged
it was awesome, superb and very cute and romanticClap
loved it very much
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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Awesome loved it!!!
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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 9:52am | IP Logged
amazing but plz continue it and pm me if u do or if u write something else it was amazing 
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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 10:25am | IP Logged
amazing tha yaar...
so cute...
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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 11:03am | IP Logged
it was awesome. kriyaansh confessed after their college is over. Sharon getting married wow u made it in this os together gr8. plz pm me wen u update next and continue.

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Posted: 10 March 2012 at 11:17am | IP Logged
 yipppeee...our *kriyansh* BACK
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This is so cute yar... Keep writing such os again n again..

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