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crack.doll

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Posted: 08 March 2012 at 9:56am | IP Logged
frnds this is the 1st time i m writing something...i always used 2 read ffs here..so i felt like writing too..I have written a short peice hoping u all will like it...though I never liked it much...plz point out my mistakes so that I can write better..here i go...



Girl's pov-oh its 10:30 still i dont want 2 get up ..but its better to get up b4 mom comes and i
get a gud bashing early in the morning!! Lol not early but still its the beginning of the day...let
me check whats happening on facebook..cause a fb addict like me does that everyday..and then i
remembered something i actually wanted 2 check out the guy whom i added
yesterday...i went through his profile and saw his pic and then i said to myself "man he's
cute..." after that i wanted 2 talk 2 him but i dint cause i dint want 2 take the 1st step...i believe i fell 4 him after seeing him...may b it was love @ 1st sight..i just always
wished he messaged me someday...
days passed waiting 4 his 1 msg but may b he din't even know that i was in his list...
then 1 day i saw a message in my inbox i immidiately opened it and found that it was him
believe me it was one of the best days of my life...we talked or i'd rather say v asked
questions to each other...then he said i looked smart..and i smartly replied,"since
childhood"...after this conversation v never talked...
But after a month v talked 2 each other like everyday...and i enjoyed it very much may b he
enjoyed it too...bt one day v had a fight...and i couldn't find a reason behind dat fight..then i
messaged him that may b v should not talk anymore..though i was not willing 2 say that but i
did cause it was required...then he said lets cut the crap cause he can't b angry with me...
Which made me feel relaxed..then a few days later came the best day of my life or the worst i'd say..it was the day he
proposed 2 me..at 1st i couldn't blv on his words but then i said i needed some time though i
was sure of my feelings but still i wanted 2 think about it cause he lived in a different city
miles away and it was a social networking site where u cannot afford 2 trust
people...but i gave a thought and i decided it would b a yes...and indeed it was...
Days passed and i found our relation becoming stronger and stronger...where i never
thought a day would come when he would leave me alone..all alone just with the small broken
pieces of my heart..but that day arrived that too very soon..where now he doesn't want 2 see
me and where i still luv him and want him back inspite of what he did..may b it was just
a game 4 him and may b he thought it was a game 4 me too..may b he would never know
how i felt when he left me neither do i want him 2 experience it..may b he wil forget me someday but i promise i wouldn't...may b life is not like srk's movies
where there's always a happy ending..may b this would turn out to be gud 4 us...may
b...may b just because this is what we call love and life!!!JUST MAY BE!!

Edited by crack_doll - 10 March 2012 at 5:20am

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Posted: 08 March 2012 at 11:18am | IP Logged
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Posted: 08 March 2012 at 12:58pm | IP Logged
Nice os.

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Posted: 08 March 2012 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
Thanks..it really means a lot 2 me :-)
Originally posted by Bhawna_arti

Nice os.

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Posted: 08 March 2012 at 1:33pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Os dear! Hug

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Posted: 09 March 2012 at 2:08am | IP Logged
thanks :-)
Originally posted by ---Pari---

Wonderful Os dear! Hug

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Posted: 09 March 2012 at 5:17am | IP Logged
lovely os

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Posted: 09 March 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by .rumki.

lovely os
thanks

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