OS: Lets play Holi (part1)

Heyaa everyone.
Thought Im not good at writing I still wrote a small OS.

Do read it and give me ur feedback.

Edited by KriYa_life - 08 March 2012 at 7:52am

Part1

It was almost 20 mins since Viraj was chasing Jhanvi. He was worried at her weird behaviour. He didnt know why she was behaving like that but was determined to get her.
V: Jaan, ek baar toh haath aao. Phir jaane nahi doonga.
Suddenly, Jhanvi appeared from behind. Viraj was overjoyed to see her. However, he didnt know that Jhanvi had sum other plans. She was hiding a pichkari (toy used to splash water). The moment Viraj caught her she splashed all the water on his face. Viraj's face became blue, Jhanvi couldnt control her laughter. She burst out laughing. Viraj was furious.
"what did you do?"
Jhanvi continued laughing and seeing her like that for a moment Viraj's anger vanished. He felt so good to see her laughing whole heartedly.
Jhanvi: im so sorry Viraj
she tried to apologise but her bouts of laughter angered Viraj.
Viraj wiped his face and grabbed her wrist: Come on lets go.
Jhanvi didnt want to leave: nah. Mujhe sab ke saath holi khelna hai.

Viraj: who the hell told you to have dat stupid drink?
Jhanvi: mujhe kya pata woh kya tha? I was thirsty. Waise, it was tasty. I want more.
Viraj yelled: stay here!!
Jhanvi: but mujhe..
Viraj: Shut up!!
Jhanvi sat quietly with her finger on her lips. She looked so cute like a baby. Viraj wanted to hug her tight. He decided to take her back to the room.
"stay here. Dnt go anywhere. I'll be back in a min"
having said that he went to inform Geeta.
when he returned, Jhanvi was no where.

Viraj: Ab kahan gayi yeh ladki?
He turned around and saw Jhanvi dancing along with the other ladies. She was completely drenched and was enjoying herself. Viraj's heart skipped a beat. The wet sari gave her a sexier look. He couldnt resist himself and soon joined her. Jhanvi wrapped her arms around Viraj's neck: Do you love me?
Viraj: ofc I do.
Jhanvi: toh kaho na.
Viraj: theek hai lekin pehle chalo yahan se
Jhanvi was adamant. She wanted Viraj to say I love you.
"jab tak tum nahi kahoge hum yahan se nahi jayenge"
Viraj: yeh kya pagalpan hai Jhanvi
Jhanvi: say, Jaan I love you. Bolo na Viraj please
she started punching him
Viraj tightened his hold on her waist: Jaan.. I Love You

Jhanvi was super excited. She smiled and hugged him tight.

Precap: Romantic RajVi moments

Edited by KriYa_life - 08 March 2012 at 7:59am

... ( this to convey U that...I'm speechlesss

O M G !!! It is sooo romantic !!


Romantic Rajvi ... kriyuuu ...tumne mze dreamland me ppahuncha diya re ...

aww dat was relii romantic luvd it x 

Arrey   yaaar, it is so sooo  shweetly  sensuous  that  if wishes could come true, then i would have wished that we could really see this happen. Anyway, your writing style did make it happen visually also, i am still in  the dreamland where u have sent all of us...what a way to begin the day  after holi... u made my day budddy...thnks.

NYC Dr... amazing

 awesome!!! looks like MaYur Holi segment..but in reverse order..

muje Kv ka gana yaad aa gaya.. "Ek kanya kawariii meri surat pe mar gayii hayyee..." and Jhanvi on that dancing..with her duppata covered on her face..

Edited by Krrish87_sweet - 10 March 2012 at 12:17am