misson kryansh again part 30 page 66

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Posted: 12 years ago
This is my first FF ever, plz post ur comments after reading n tell me dat should i continue or not. n be frank!!!
 { srry jst bcs my english is quite weak i'll write it in hindi,hope u dnt mind}
part 1
after kriyansh' break up
6 months later

kriya's mom:kriya beta jaldi chalo humari flight nikal jayegi
kriya:coming mom,just wait a minute [kriya came,she was looking as cute as always n excited as well]
chalo abhi,ho gaya 

in d plane,
kriya was totally lost in her old memories n she was going to mumbai again.
kriya [to herself]:aaj asa lag rha he jaise firse me ek naye shaher me ja rhi hu,9 months mumbai me rehne k bad aadat ho gayi thi mujhe vaha ki,college ki,dance ki,n REY ki!!!!!! kal itne dino baad mujhe firse college me deklh kar sab ka kya reaction hoga? kya rey mujhe samajhenge? jo bhi uss din mene kaha vo sab majburi me kaha par kya vo?itni mehnat se mom ko manaya he mene dance ke liye, n vo itni dino k baad mani he k rey hi mere liye best hai par ab mujhe dar lag raha he,kya karu????/
[kriya slept  thinking abt her team,her dance,her college,her past n HER REY]

precap:kriyam convo n he promoses her dat he'll help her in her mission [mission rey ko samjhana] n kriyansh' meet.


hope it was good bt not so sure,plz do comment n tell me shud i continue or not
chapter 1-page 1
chapter 2-page 3
chapter 3-page 5
chapter 4-page 7
chapter 5-page 9
promo 1-page 10
chapter 6-page 11
chapter 7-page 13
chapter 8-page 15
chapter 9-page 17
chapter 10-page 19
chapter 11-page 21
chapter 12-page 23
chapter 13-page 25
chapter 14-page 27
chapter 15-page 29
chapter 16-page 31
chapter 16-part 2-page 33
chapter 16-part 3-page 33
chapter 17-page 35
chapter 18-page 37
chapter 19-page 39
chapter 20-page 41
chapter 21-page 44
chapter 22-page 47
chapter 23-page 51
chapter 24-page 53
chapter 25-page 53
chapter 26-page 55
chapter 27-page 58 
chapter 28-page 60
chapter 29-page 64
chapter 30-page 66 *sry for not sending pms*
chapter 31-page 
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Posted: 12 years ago
i know it was short but if u like it thn i'll continue n will write a long part .

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Posted: 12 years ago
its awesome start...please continue and do pm me when you will update
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Posted: 12 years ago
its a good start ,plz continue n do pm me when you will update. i always wait 4 kriyansh reunion FF. good going..
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Posted: 12 years ago
chalo itni choti strt!!!!!!!!!  i dnt agree jaldi update and pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
It was awesome. do continue and plz pm me wen u update next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
its was nyc do pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ya please continue...
btw lovely FF
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Posted: 12 years ago
thank u vry much n i will update it 2mrw in d afternoon 

thanks 4 dis response
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Posted: 12 years ago
this sounds amazayn please pm me when you update :D