Originally posted by: -vrshn-coool!!
Originally posted by: LizzieBennettAna... Read it.. It's super.. 👏
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Okay.. here goes. I loved the way you've built up the emotions on both sides.
Nidhi sounds fierce, feisty and a no-nonsense type of girl... what's the mystery with the in-laws? Is she being forced to marry? Well, I guess you'll reveal all in the next update.
Ashu is rich, successful but yet lonely and broken-hearted. My heart went out to him in that moment with his daughter when he remembered his love.. So sad!😭
Well..Nidhi and Ashu ka takkar is gonna be nice to read! Hope there are some sparks flying on either side.😉 Considering both have short fuses, that will be expected I guess.. 😆
Looking forward to read some more hot and sparking office moments!!! 😳
Originally posted by: aarchKeep writing 👍🏼
Originally posted by: niniborn2ruleWelcome back ana...well written...😊...plz complete u-turned love..😊
Originally posted by: BlushsarikaLoved it! Waiting for the next update ...
Originally posted by: PoojapangeGood start...i m curious to knw what will happen on nidhi's first day in office...plz continue
Originally posted by: kritashwonderful, after many days i came back to the forum and got your PM. really great. wonderful starting. Liked it very much as always. let see how you would like to proceed further.
thanks for the PM. and waiting for the next update.😊
Originally posted by: -AnaRoy-Awesome piece... realy nice.. but wow... those names...!!!
my name is Ananya Roy.. & nick name is Riya.. OMG..!!!
Originally posted by: kritashreally great start, the way you have created ashutosh's character, it is nice. 👍🏼
Originally posted by: anu13Hi Ana,
Good start dear. Well, all the wait has been worthy with your lovely update...just loving it.
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