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One early shiny morning, She is standing by her balcony. Thinking about last night celebrations at her home. How everyone was so happy for her success. Parents, family friends all were enjoying the celebration party for her new job in Bombay. She has to fly the next morning. All excited Bombay was always a dream for her, from the first day of university she always wanted to join Shivgun design company. Now that she has achieved it she is on 9th cloud, but the only regret is leaving behind her family as there is only company quarter provided.
She comes back from her thoughts when her alarm went off at 6 am. She turned it off. Started getting ready , prayed to lord Krishna's idol and packed up. 7:30 bus should be coming soon, thought in her mind, that is the bus stop her friend suggested when she came Bombay last night. Took 201 bus it was all full of people there was no seat, first time she has seen so many people travelling like this. "Your station has come madam!" shouted conductor and she came back to reality from her thoughts.
She starts walking quickly across the road. Confident, smiling face looking at the building of Shivgun Design. Where all of a sudden she gets hit by a guy, who is walking in his own world listening to his ipod music and he spills his icecap on her brand new coat. She gets really annoyed looking at the coffee stain. She starts wiping it quickly with her tissue just when he interrupts her and says "Sorry My bad!"
Edit: Hit Like, Comment and put ur suggestions on what u like/dislike what can be better interms of my writing! I would really appreciate the words if u guys can put comments.
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yup i mentioned in my PM dear..I need more time to think about her character..U got it right..about her character and also some of his character..i just wanted to introduce her character in the first part...and then in the second meet i was gona talk about his character.. first hit is just starting point. 
yup i will make my second part more detailed...with spending more time than just 2 hrs.. but i loved ur suggestions and rectifications that can make me better the next time i write..The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:
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@Ramona: Thank you sweets! and yes i know i lacked in my first writing..but another one should satisfy the content need. Glad to see u excited.
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...ab kya honga ??
.. Ab ham krishuu ko chain se nahi jeene denge jb tk wo update nahi karengi...hai na The following 2 member(s) liked the above post:
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