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RabbaVe

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Posted: 03 March 2012 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
Heyy Everyone Embarrassed
Just a quick poem Please leave feedback<3

Will to fight the darkness

There's a darkness surrounding me,
Drowning everything I've ever believed,
Cradling the horrors of the past,
How long will it all last?

Trying to find this light,
And the will to fight,
To Fight all this pain,
And all the games,

Gotta stand up tall,
And never let myself fall,
Push the darkness away,
All I have to do is stay,
Stay strong and find it,
Where do I belong?

This darkness that surrounded me,
Won't come back around for sure,
The darkness is no more,
Walk Through to the light,
With the will to fight.

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Posted: 03 March 2012 at 6:20pm | IP Logged
This is a really beautiful poem!Hug and i think it relates to Khushi ASR. Love it lots! : )

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Posted: 03 March 2012 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
haila... So sweet...
Nice one buddy.

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Posted: 03 March 2012 at 6:33pm | IP Logged
Such a beautiful pome hats off to u woop wooop

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Posted: 03 March 2012 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
wowww sooo beautiful poem saffy..the darkness is well defined...Thumbs UpLuved itHug

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Posted: 03 March 2012 at 9:15pm | IP Logged
Awesome poem ;).. Goes apt for khushi !

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Posted: 03 March 2012 at 11:21pm | IP Logged
its beautiful Thumbs Up

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Posted: 03 March 2012 at 11:29pm | IP Logged
Super-Awesome Poem Jaana Hug
Gosh, U write so AMAZING <3333 My Sweet Lil sis is SO Talented ! Approve Hug
Its Fabulous Jaan ! Heart U'll make an Amazing Author ! Embarrassed
& the Best thng about the Poem is dat its not just a Poem but also has such an Optimistic Meaning to It ! Heart For all those whu get depressed wit Life & Loose their Hopes, This Poem is a MUST for Such ! I Love all the Verses ! There is Rise after Dawn & dats the ULTIMATE Truth ! Approve

Kudos to U for writing sucha Beautiful Poem ! Embarrassed
& Plz write More & thnx 4 the PM Jaana ! <3333

Love U,
Ekta Hug Heart Hug

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