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Humko Tumse Pyra Hai (Page 6)

rajeev1 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 May 2006 at 1:58am | IP Logged
Clap ..aww this is cool yaar..just read the whole story....great going .....keep it up and continue soooonn Big smile Big smile

kashish805 Senior Member

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Posts: 456

Posted: 26 May 2006 at 4:32pm | IP Logged
part 11
same scene
the mock trial has begin amd mukti and prem are ready to present their. the other students are presenting their case. Prem and Mukti and prem are giving each other an evil look
funny scene
m= i won't let him him way. no way. i will take revenge today what does he think of himself. i will not let him vow. God plz help me
p= she thinks she is so smart. i will show her who is really smart. Prem never loses,
judge= ms. mukti plz care your withness to the stand
m= ok
mukti and her witness( played by sneha) come to the stand. the withness name is kiran
m= what is your name
k= Kiran Verma
m= ok, how old are u
k= i am 19
m= where wwere on movember 1, 2005
k= i was at the mall, shopping
m= and what happened on that day
k= i saw a murder happen
m= who was murdered
k= ms. kasak sinha
m= did u see who murdered her
k= see mr. Ajay saxena
m= did u see anything else
k= then i saw ajay running
m= what did u do afterward
k= i ran away
m= no more question
j= mr. Prem plz proceed
p= so ms. kiran u said u ran away form the scene, coorect
k= yes
p= why did u ran
m= oh my god. he is ripping her a part. i have to do someting. objection
j= why
m= relevance
j= what is your argument
p= i am showing the withness character
m= no, u are just confusing her
p= no i am not
m= yes u are
j= shut up u two
j= mr. prem it is right. mukti is right
mukti gives prem an evil smile
prem conitmues with the examination. and the verdict comes againts ajay sinha
prem and mukti meet in the college garden
m= so what did u say. Prem never loses right.
p= uuuuuuuuuuuuu
m= i won and u lost. how sad
p= this is not the end. this is your only victory in this war
m= i will keep winning like this and you are going to lose like this.
p we will se
m= no we won't i already know, i will win
p= i will get
m= i wish u all the best
p= save your wishes you will need later
prem leaves and mukti smiles
scen end

shahidlover24 IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 May 2006 at 9:39pm | IP Logged
I just caught up with the last few parts! You're doing and awesome job and I love the way Sujal didn't take at least a billion years to purpose Tongue
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 26 May 2006 at 11:45pm | IP Logged
nice very nice.......... Clap
rajeev1 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 May 2006 at 11:58pm | IP Logged
Big smile Clap Clap ..nice part..continue soon
kashish805 Senior Member

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Posted: 27 May 2006 at 9:14am | IP Logged
thank for all your great comments I wil cont. some time today or tommrow.
Kashish Big smile
kashish805 Senior Member

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Posted: 27 May 2006 at 12:39pm | IP Logged

part 12:
Now lets look at kashish and Sujal. This scene is taking plce in tke kandelwal household. Sujal, Prem, angad, veena, and dilip are having dinner.
dlip notices that sujal is injured
d= what happend to your hand son
s= why do u care. U only care about your work
d= shut up. i luv u. but you are not capable of my luv . veena see your son. it is all your fault
p= dad stop blaming my mom
d= so you started tooo................ u mom taught u as well
a= he is right. stop blaming mom
d= so u are going to tell me what is right and what is wrong
v= stop it
dilip get up and slaps veena
d= this what u deserve
s= dad
d= don't come btwn as
a= all our lives we saw our mom being slappped
but not anymore
d= what will u do
s= i am warnong u dad. if u do this again we will call the police. and u don't want that to happen right....... cause that will make kandelwa shares go down
dilip gets pissed and leaves
s= mom are u ok
v= yes
a= bro we have to teache dad a lesson
s= we will one day very soon.
next scen take place in the hospital in the morning. kashish is discusiing something with the nurse. just then sujal walks in. he sees kashihs and then goes to her.

k= mr. sujal what r u doing here.

s= i am here to get my dressind done

k= nurse= plz do the dressing for mr. sujal

s=- no i want u to do it

k= mr. sujal that is the nurse job

s= fine, then i won't have it done

k= if u don't have it done then you will get sick

s= i don't care

sujal leaves and kashish is worried

k= he is crazy

sujal leves.

kashish runs after him

k= sujal wait

s= stops

k= fine i will do the dressing

kashish and sujal are in the room and kashish is bandaging him

s= why did u stop me

k= because u waould get sick

s= why do u care

k= doctor care for the patient

s- u luv don't u

kashihs is sort of shocked

k= no i don't

s= yes u do i can see it your eyes

k= no i don't. and u don't like me it is just an attraction

s= u are saying that to hide your   love

k= u don't know what love is

s=- love is caring for someone. u love the person more than anything. u can die for that person

k= fine prove your love

s= what  do u mean

k= u said that u can die in luv. right

s= yes

k= then die

kashish is leaving

s= i am going to die. and then u will know that i loved u

sujal leaves and kashish is worried

scene end






Edited by kashish805 - 27 May 2006 at 1:39pm
kashish805 Senior Member

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Posted: 27 May 2006 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
pormo: kashish runnug after sujal and begging him to stop.

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