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Humko Tumse Pyra Hai (Page 5)

kashish805 Senior Member

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
part 9:
now this scene we will look at mukti am prem Ok So mukti is standing at the bus stop waitjng for the bus to go to college. He is wearing a white sari cause she has a mock trail today.
m= kashish didi id so stupid. She needs to she get a life. When will the bus come, i am already late.
Just then we see a black sports car. it passes by mukti vey closely and causes the mud to get over her whole sari. LOL
m= you!!!!!!!! Can't u watch while u are driving. Stupid, i don't how can u get a license.
Just then the glasses of the window are moved down and we see Prem. Prem is
p= it was accident
m= accident my foot. What will i do now
p= sorry
m= sorry. Will that make my sari white again!!! Angry (LOL)
p= i said i am sorry. i am going
m= going!!!!!!!!!
p= oh! so u don't want me to go
m= what
p= u want to stand out here a flirt with u
m= uuuuuuuuuuuuuu. Just leave
p= ok bye
Prem goes and mukti gives him an angry look
scene end

MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 23 May 2006 at 9:51pm | IP Logged
kashish805 a very good scene 8 & scene 9.. Big smile i loved sujal , kashish's   scene.. sujal ne ek minute bhi nahi socha kashish se apni dil ki baat kehne main.. hmmm coollll kyun na ho he is afterall sujal... Clap ab yeh kashish bhaav kha rahi hain.. Dead par no problem nahi   me sure ki aisa waqt aayega jab kashish sujal ko chahne lagegi Tongue aur tab shayad sujal usse jaan bhoojkar avoid kare..mazaa aa jayega.. LOL
hmm tho prem aur mukti ke beech pehli mulaqat hui good..aur unke beech ladayi bhi hui nice.. par yeh ladayi aage chalkar pyaar banega.. Embarrassed
plz continue soon.. Big smile
waise wat's ur name ????? Tongue Smile Big smile    
kashish805 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 May 2006 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
My real name is not kashish it is kiran
kashish805 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 May 2006 at 5:43pm | IP Logged
part 10
so it is night time now and kashish is in her bedroom looking up into the sky at the stars. She is thinking to herself.
k= does he really love me?????????? Or is it just an attraction. Kashish are u stupid it is nothing but attraction, luv takes a lot of understanding not just one 30 minute meeting.
Kashish is worried
Just then mukti enters the room
m= what r u thinking about
k= oh nothing
m= you are thinking about that guy.... What is his name............. oh sujal right
k= right
m= so u were thinking about him
kashish is speechless
m= didi is in love!
k= shut up
m= i won't
k= i don't luv him
m= yeah right
k= no
m= yes
k= he is just attracted to me
m= he luvs u
k= how do u know
m= he injured himself for u
K= he is crazy
m= carziness is a part of friens hip
just then prena enters
p= now stop talking and go to sllep
k= mukti is not letting me
m= she is lying
p= ok. now go to sleep
m= good night
k= good night
p= good night
they both lay down
k= i am thristy i will go get some water
m= ok
kashish leaves the room. As she si going to the kitchen she sees sujal
k= sujal what are u doing her
sujal doesn't answer
k= go away
kashish goes to the door and pushes him and realizes there is no sujal
k= what is happeing to me. i think i need to go to the doctor
kashish goes to the kitchen and she sees the light on in her mom room
She goes to the room and ses Prena holding a picture of a baby girl
k= this is not a pic of me or mukti that who is this............
scene ends
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posted: 24 May 2006 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
kiran ur story is really very nice..Clap har part ke baad it is getting more & more intresting... Claphmm..tho ab sujal kashish ke khayalo mein aane laga hain...bohatttttt achcheeeeeeee.........Embarrassed
ab yeh prerna kiss ki pic dekh rahi hain.. sochna padega... shayad kashish aur mukti ki ek aur   behen joh bachpan mein unse bichad gayi ho & may be she is kripa.. what do u think is my guess right ??LOL
anyway please continue soon.....Big smile

Edited by sun_423 - 24 May 2006 at 11:36pm
kashish805 Senior Member

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Posted: 25 May 2006 at 7:01pm | IP Logged
part 11
same scene
k= mom what are u doing
prena is shocked
p= nothing
k= who was the firl in the pic
perna staressssssss
p= mmmm my friends daughter
k= mom are u ok. u hand is shaking
p= don't worry. Why aren't u in bed
k= i came to the kitchen to get water
p= it is late i think u should go to sleep now
k= ok
kashish leaves
p= thank god. Kashish didn't find outanyting. but i need to be careful becuz if they find out it will ruin them forever.
next scene is in Mukti's college, Greenfield college. we see mukti in a hurry. She is waring her white sari
m= i am late agian. Today sir will be very upset. It is my mock trial and i am late. I am so stupid
Just then mukti enter he class
sir= u are late again
m= sorry
s= sorry my foot. next time u are late i will tell the dean
m= ok
s= r u ready
m= yes sir
s= ok, we will begin in two minutes
m= right
just then prem enters. Zhe is wearng a ehite shirt and a black suit
s= prem u are late also
p= sory
s= ok. get ready. u are fighting the case against Mukti
p = ok
sir leaves and mukti and prem are alone in the courtroom. They don't notice each other. just then mukti sees prem
m= u
prem turns around
p= u
m= what are u doing here
this is a funny scene
p= i am here to shop
mukti get mad
m= shut up
p= i am here to fight the case.. wait a minute u are mukti right
m= right
p= well we r competing today
m= what
p= i am the lawyer against
m= now i havr to win
p= prem never loses
m= mukti doesn't let anyone win
p= oh really
m= really
p we will se
m= we will see
scene end

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Posted: 25 May 2006 at 8:37pm | IP Logged
gud job.....gr8 goin...keep it up
MysticRiver IF-Addictz

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Posts: 79331

Posted: 26 May 2006 at 12:53am | IP Logged
hey kiran very good..i liked reading the part.. but plz write the next part about sujal & kashish me want to read about them... & ya plz continue soon........

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